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Re: Condemned by Nobody: 12:36pm On Jun 26, 2016 |
I followed this story from the beginning, unfollowed it at a point when Mr. tonye was no longer updating it. I found it on the front page of literature section again. I must acknowledge that it is a VERY nice piece. God bless you tonye001 However, I noticed a few typos like 'faith' instead of 'fate' in the third and second to the last updates. p.s, What happened to Capon? Finally, why is someone chained on the cover page, I thought smallie never went to jail?? |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 1:25pm On Jun 26, 2016 |
royalkeed: Thanks for your review. 1. I also saw that faith-fate error among others. They've been fixed. I had someone proofread the piece before publishing. I haven't had time to edit this version on Nairaland, 2.I left Capon to the reader's imagination. Did he die..perhaps later? Was he caught and prosecuted.. (maybe Smallie's evidence was discovered by the security)...or did he just escape? Remember Smallie saw *a considerable amount of blood on the floor*.. 3. Smallie was never jailed. He was placed under custody at the hospital...the police was waiting for him to be strong enough before they do their thing. That picture...in a way..depicts his *momentary arrest* but I agree with you, it isn't the best. 4. Thank you very much for your time. It's folks like you that make writers get better. May God bless you richly. Warm regards. 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by darelar(m): 10:20am On Jun 28, 2016 |
I really appreciate that am among the readers of this nice story. You really try for this story. The story of junior, is it new story or continuation of coded 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 2:57pm On Jun 28, 2016 |
darelar: Hello Darelar, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece. To your question: The story of Alabo Digbani and Junior is an Epilogue of Condemned. It's like a continuation, a concluding report on Smallie. The injured man in the story was Smallie. You can get the soft copy of this book, if you want, by following the link provided. Thank you very much, Sir. Regards. 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by AyamConfidence(m): 1:47am On Oct 03, 2016 |
TONYE001:multi intelligent bro...I respect your talent...sorry I came late...very late but I've been totally glued to this story since I started... see the time...sleep escaped me since I began to read...your lines were good...so good I could watch a movie created from this over and over(have you thought about it like that??) and the epilogue part just killed everything....you're good bro...keep it up and please direct me to any if your new works please permit me also to share the story i mean by directing readers to this page Great job bro...wonderful work....welldone 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 5:57pm On Oct 03, 2016 |
AyamConfidence: My Brother, Thanks for your kind words. Thanks for your time - and patience. Thanks for everything. Feel free, please, to share it on Nairaland as much as you want. Thanks, again! I surely won't fail to mention you once I commence another piece (pretty soon). Have a nice evening. |
Re: Condemned by AyamConfidence(m): 6:04pm On Oct 03, 2016 |
TONYE001:thanks a lot brother I respect your work 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by Princelegacylemoha(m): 11:14am On Oct 07, 2016 |
GOD BLESS THE AUTHOR OF THIS MASTERPIECE 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 9:29pm On Oct 07, 2016 |
Princelegacylemoha: Amen; may God bless you too, amen. Thank you. |
Re: Condemned by Ikigia: 9:31am On Oct 08, 2016 |
One word........splendid!. good job Tonye 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 8:00pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Ikigia: Thanks Sir. 2 Likes |
Re: Condemned by TONYE001(m): 5:03pm On Oct 01, 2019 |
Hi guys. I decided to make this comment.....just in case someone else is interested in reading this piece. Good evening. 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by Itunubabs: 2:30pm On Oct 02, 2019 |
TONYE001:Like me Ur comment brought it back to the front page And I am so going to read it Gracias 1 Like |
Re: Condemned by Moura7(m): 7:44pm On Apr 30, 2020 |
Mad stuff bro...so fire 1 Like |
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