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| The wedding by bluespice(f): 11:44pm On Aug 20, 2009 |
Knock! knock! Good morning dearest yes its me your love rise my dear, the day is bright come let's play and do all the silly things people in love do, is the sun too bright? wait my love, wait while i board up the windows there my love, perfect darkness the perfect opportunity to have that candle-lit meal i made a special meal for us today mother always told me a person's feelings resided in the breast-atleast that's where she always pointed to so today, i give u a meal of my left breast it hurt a little but love is pain isn't that right my dear? you seem not to want it. . . no problem dearest, i guess its too early to eat anyway, alright, lets go surely we couldn't both turn up late for our wedding! dearest! my you've grown bigger! or do i say you're heavier than last night! oh well, i guess that's a compliment to my cooking. . . Our altar is quite unique i know, you see, when i told mother of our wedding, she said "not while i live" and who am i to disobey my own mother? surely, you wouldn't want a disobedient wife! Oh let me go bring the pastor, you see, when i went to see him to inform him of our needing his services, he made so much noise that i had to shut him up to bring him here he might nod once in a while, but i assure you his presence is enough i'm going to be saying his lines seeing as he's too shy to talk "do you take this man to be your wedded husband?" "i do" "do you take this woman to be your wedded wife?" "i do" i'm sorry dearest, i couldn't find the rings but we don't need them anyway. . . there, there are those tears of joy i see? let me help you wipe them away oh. . .its only those pesky maggots, we need to do something about them "by the authority vested in me, i declare you man and wife, you may now kiss your bride" I don't know about you dearest, but this whole ceremony has left me winded will you join me in the room? there! now isn't this juts perfect? we are legally married now, i'm going to sleep dear, i'm sure you wouldn't mind if i rested my head on your laps, i want your eyes to be the first things i see when i wake. See you later dear. |
| Re: The wedding by maedan(f): 9:30pm On Nov 11, 2009 |
Nicey. I likey  . But I saw something else somewhere about you liking stuff like killing and murdering a whole family. Hope that was just literary jest  . |
| Re: The wedding by Pezz(m): 3:22am On Nov 13, 2009 |
Very nice  Your dialogue is dark and straight forward, but it manages to conjure up images and situations equally as disturbing. A well crafted ‘theatre of the mind’. |
| Re: The wedding by bluespice(f): 10:45pm On Nov 21, 2009 |
thanks maedan and pezz |
| Re: The wedding by DonEse125(f): 5:37pm On Nov 28, 2009 |
Nice. Dark,disturbing but nice |
| Re: The wedding by frank317: 10:13pm On Dec 15, 2009 |
Wow! Beautiful. So will u mary me? Let me b ur wierd husband. Lol. Bluespice u actualy sound like an interestin girl. |
| Re: The wedding by bluespice(f): 11:08pm On Dec 15, 2009 |
lol marry you? i'll have to check with my council of husbands interesting? why thanks frank |
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