The known descendant
of tashi.
She is an archangel
The 'She' version of Gabriel
Dorcas Tashi Harrison is her name.
And She Looks Innocent.

Her beauty is dazzling,
The warmth in her smile makes my
ventricles contract.
Her Lips so Soft and Red,
red as water melon's within
And She Looks Innocent.

Her giggle,so girly and lovely
drives me worldly like R-kelly.
Her dimples make me wonder
as though am riding honda.
And She Looks Innocent.

The thought of her
overpowers my godly desire,
like samson and delilah.
Even without seeing her punana,
my brain dey scatter,
mind's on fire,
soul's taken higher,
mamba becoming bigger,
Heart's rhyme sweeter dan banana
Like Lady Gaga,
Her words makes NDA cease fire.
Now she raises my antenna
like Rihana
See me,see wahala!
And She Looks Innocent.

Basking in the ocean of
Lust or Love?
Maybe a blend of both
in fifty percent
I said to Myself.
And She Looks Innocent
But sth tells me that's not true.[lef

But she's not innocent... #Dope

Cc: Joseph1832, Laveda, Nobody,timpaker, Jigsawkillah

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Dope.... Buh I fink you should work on the 4th verse(more like a rap line) buh all the same.. It cool.. More grease to your elbow

Nice one man

This is an awesome one, kester113. It's not uncommon to harbor doubts about the potentials of a member of the female folk, whether in a positive or negative direction like yours.

Your first two stanzas are beautiful. The imagery paints beautiful pictures. But, I looked up 'Tashi' and I found nothing. With your usage, I expected it to be a symbol of something significant to your theme. Have I not searched enough?

I think your third stanza, like Kruzilano rightly said, needs a little bit of modification. I'm not saying it's not poetry. But it doesn't sound rich enough (that's to me, though). Take a look at your simile in the fourth line where you wrote 'like I'm riding honda'. I have never known that people who ride Honda also wonder.

And in the fourth stanza, how is your desire godly? I don't really know how to say this, but I find the imagery in the rest of the fourth stanza a little unpolished. It's just a personal opinion, though. The concluding stanza is free to go. But, what is 'heart's rhyme'?

I saw your mention on Joseph's thread. There is some vague memory coming back over that thing we discussed way back that prompted the message, but I can't retrieve it completely. Please forgive me.

concerning the name Tashi
Yes you have searched enough.its an hausa word,Tashi is her surname.
the above poem is dedicated to her during her teaching practice
Anyway,Thank You Very Much llaykorn.. WowAm Honoured.Correction Taken.BETTER ME NEXT TIME