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My First Patient (poem) by Nobody: 10:37pm On Sep 29, 2016 |
My First Patient (poem) Touch me, cut me, satisfy your yearnings Yet in your curiosity See the invisible hands of the creator "Did he speak?" As a sheep willing for the shearer The scalpel did the justice So meek, he didn't fight back See where my strength lies, his muscles Touch the vessels that sustained my earthly passion Don't be afraid of this networks of nerve, they propelled my desires They did bid my will Humble servants were they, never took my desires for granted Acetylcholine! Their language Bones, my guard "Guard?" The cranium shielded my vanity The pubis my being The calcaneus my restlessness All these I cannot yearn for anymore Truly the world shall pass away 2 Likes |
Re: My First Patient (poem) by Nobody: 11:03pm On Sep 29, 2016 |
criticism, comments, corrections please |
Re: My First Patient (poem) by Nobody: 11:04pm On Sep 29, 2016 |
criticism, comments, corrections pls...a budding poet (trying to be one ) |
Re: My First Patient (poem) by Nobody: 11:08pm On Sep 29, 2016 |
LEGALISM[/b] Not up to standard yet Not all the requirements met Conscience kicks Only if you can do more What for? Try and be like the master but my wounds need the plaster not a tittle you must break Hung on Haman's gallow dry like the bush left fallow Lord when shall the standard be met Not until the earth melt Conscience kicks While the law drives on Sin like Hydra's tentacles sprang up not good enough study more cry more conscience kicks not until light shone 'twas for thee I died for thy sins I bled |
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