A woman's scorn!
right from d time they r'born,
each morn',
, to d setting of the sun!!
   A woman's scorn,
and this mans' heart is torn,
from d time they were 'aving fun,
now see what he's become?!
   A woman's scorn,
and she's alweiz won,
from all d petty con',
till d time she makes you come!
   A woman's scorn,
it burns and it will burn!!
in all that shes' done,
father-daughter--mother n' son,
   A woman's scorn,
the mans' undone,
and he 'll never get it done,
for his ribs withdrawn?!
till d end of the earth b'gan,
   A woman's  scorn,
and I can go on n' on!
'bout the plenty things shes' done,
giving birth to who we've become?!
till we can't take anymore---
being struck by "cupids" bow n' more!
---of all of this womans' scorns!
the greek goddess we just cannot shun

Pray it doesn't consume them

Still me

@osegwu

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man, i luv dis ,

it just flows nicely , good use of rhymes, pretty neat use of words and the new words u invented only just added more emotion to ur cipher; not flipin 'em outta context even a lil bit!

man this is good stuff blieve me!

@ruudie
thanks men!the inspiration came from someone i love sooo much!am so glad u like it

any reviews on this from the house?

nice mate ,some of the best rhymes i've seen in a long time and the fact that it all made purrfect sense.thumbs up man.

awwwwwwwww!thanks alot mate am full of smiles cha cha