Atayis:
THE DAY I LOST MY VIRGINITY

The terrain stain with blood
Wound never go out of memory
Of the lost of only flower
Lost in the garden of ignorant conciousness

In the terrain of joy
One on one in one aside
Gulped in the garden of medium
Chained in the ignorant conciousness

The garden welcomed.
The terrain shaked alot
About the tryst of hypocrites
Lost in the midst of meager elation.

Magneting together like siamese.
The auctioner bleep the gong
With the bayonet of hell
Yelling and grizzling like a baby

The joy cannot be compared
Even,to the paradise.
Oh!sweetness,dont go.
The fantasy is enjoyed with emotion.

When done is done
Temple is desecrated
Unpassed road becomes pedestral
The done caused done

Memory of ages picked the call
Of my gone flower that depressed.
No panic in new life after dying in
The terrain and garden of ignorant conciousness.

SUBJECT MATTER: The poet speaker reviews how she was lost in emotion to defile her flower.she highlight the sweetness in having her desire.she howerver acknowledges that the day she lost her prestige will not be out of memory,afterward,she consoles herself not to depress what she lost through sweetness in the garden of ignorant consciousness

The terrain stain with blood
Wound never go out of memory
Of the lost of only flower
Lost in the garden of ignorant conciousness

Narration:the first stanza shows the consequency of battle,though not war
how things have been affected as the terrain(metaphorical meaning of a BED)stained and the consequency will never be erased after something was lost

Stanza two:In the terrain of joy
One on one in one aside
Gulped in the garden of medium
Chained in the ignorant conciousness

NARRATION:The speaker says that the war is fought by two people,not a popular war and she confirmed that the war is fought in the field of joy
what an irony?war in the field of joy

STANZA THREE:
The garden welcomed.
The terrain shaked alot
About the tryst of hypocrites
Lost in the midst of meager elation.

NARRATION:This shows how the garden is very friendly and welcomed the secret meeting of lover that don't forsee the shortcoming

STANZA FOUR:
Magneting together like siamese.
The auctioner bleep the gong
With the bayonet of hell
Yelling and grizzling like a baby

This show how the two lovers were magneted together and the is a sudden noise when somebody is hammering the other one.though the hammered person is complaining,crying,shouting and moaning but the person still has joy despite the suffering


STANZA FIVE:
The joy cannot be compared
Even,to the paradise.
Oh!sweetness,dont go.
The fantasy is enjoyed with emotion.

NARRATION:The oppressed has joy that she even uses exageration that the joy is more than paradise

STANZA SIX:
When done is done
Temple is desecrated
Unpassed road becomes pedestral
The done caused done.

NARRATION:this is sad,because despite all the joy, the oppressed has lost a memmorial prestige.a narrow way become wide

STANZA SEVEN:
Memory of ages picked the call
Of my gone flower that depressed.
No panic in new life after dying in
The terrain and garden of ignorant conciousness.

Narration:speaker says that she can never forget how she lost her prestige,but she comfort herself not to think of it after starting a non virgin life,that partially pleases her

@ATAYIS
THANK YOU

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Debbiesmart:
NICE