Adesina12:

This was my verdict before final update...
I was 100% correct about Issac.

you are spot on.
watch out for more captivating story.

Tintinnoty:
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smooth,racheal chumzypinky goodheart02

make una come criticise the jargons wry I write ooo. lol.

lol, jargons? No be only jargons, na yama yama

Chumzypinky:
lol, jargons? No be only jargons, na yama yama

abi na since nobody dey criticise the story like say the story no make sense.

nice one bt d update is too short, try and make it lenghty.

Tintinnoty:
purityval Hibiscuss goodheart02 Fabiano09 Adesina12 Harameede99 sisterly,ladysuperb,sammyfresh
smooth,racheal chumzypinky goodheart02

make una come criticise the jargons wry I write ooo. lol.

lol jargons ke i luv it it was short simple nd interesting nd i get d message u will make a gud writer i bet u

harameede99:
lol jargons ke i luv it it was short simple nd interesting nd i get d message u will make a gud writer i bet u

thanks for the good words am impressed. I make it short and brief because am attempting this for the first time am not sure it will make a sense

Come op,as i fair so i can never be trusted okwai.e ma gora ehn.infact i yaf vex.mummypinky is jargon he wrote#winks#

Tintinnoty:
purityval Hibiscuss goodheart02 Fabiano09 Adesina12 Harameede99 sisterly,ladysuperb,sammyfresh
smooth,racheal chumzypinky goodheart02

make una come criticise the jargons wry I write ooo. lol.

I must say you write good. Cool story....but try to synergize your inner self with your story. That's a very important trick to successful writing.

goodheart02:



I must say you write good. Cool story....but try to synergize your inner self with your story. That's a very important trick to successful writing.

thanks doc for your observation, I'll work on it in my next story am working on

goodheart02:



I must say you write good. Cool story....but try to synergize your inner self with your story. That's a very important trick to successful writing.

Doc pls reply my e-mail

nice piece , short, funnily educative..
anticipating more from you, anytime soon
more ink to you pen.

Dropping a piece today

Nice short story bro

Nothing. I just find it a little unsettling really.

eya d girl was dreaming

wow very nice, interesting, superb,educating keep up the good work

Very interesting story

arthur16:
Very interesting story

thanks for taking out time to read 2ru