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Jigsaw by chronos: 4:59am On Jun 17, 2017 |
I have questions; Unanswered questions What is life? What is love? What awaits after life? Destiny they say Lies in the palms of men I look into mine for answers But all I see is a web of patterns Intricately embedded in great discord! I look into the heavens for answers But all I see is a sea of blue Flowing into the depthless trenches of infinity Life is a helical maze Woven to beguile mankind The birds mock us in flat pitch 1 Like |
Re: Jigsaw by chronos: 5:39am On Jun 17, 2017 |
Comments are welcome. |
Re: Jigsaw by Ereolamide: 8:27pm On Jun 23, 2017 |
Too general, lack of specific exciting imagery |
Re: Jigsaw by chronos: 9:20pm On Jun 26, 2017 |
Ereolamide: "Exciting" is subjective... |
Re: Jigsaw by Ereolamide: 10:05pm On Jun 26, 2017 |
chronos:To simulate |
Re: Jigsaw by chronos: 8:51am On Jun 28, 2017 |
Ereolamide:poems dont always have to be written in high language or be too descriptive to stimulate, sometimes it's about the thematic structure et al |
Re: Jigsaw by Ereolamide: 9:34am On Jun 28, 2017 |
chronos:You don't get my point do you? I ne'er said you should write in flowery language with vocabularies, what I intend is that you use specific imagery to pass your message, most of what's up there are cliché, the images are old and worn out. I don't mean to abase your piece, criticism if welcomed helps to improve literary works. Peace |
Re: Jigsaw by chronos: 4:09pm On Jun 30, 2017 |
Ereolamide: Shalom |
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