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My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 7:02pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
Hello Nairalanders and fellow poets! I will be dishing out poems wriiten by my girlfriend for your review,critic and scrutiny. She just began in the journey of poetry and I want her to be thoroughly guided by your discreation.... Thank you as you follow... |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 7:05pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
I will be posting the first poem by her (callidymphna) and its called "EAST MEETS WEST". I would love to here your criticisim. EAST MEETS WEST Destined union of two hearts Cupid's victim by two swords Diminishing the distance thereof Soul's joined as one in love As east meets west A journey begins Unending lifetime race Supersedes Romeo and Juliet's fate East meet west Anger, jealousy, greed, and the rest Eclipse of two distinct points Fiery flames burnt down the best War between blood witnessed Sequel of strength and greatness The land bears scars of this fight The stars barn us from its sight As East meet West The stage is set. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by Script94(m): 10:00pm On Jul 08, 2017 |
that's gold |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 7:23am On Jul 09, 2017 |
Script94:Thank u sir. Stay tuned for more |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 6:33pm On Jul 09, 2017 |
REMEMBER TO FORGET How can i remember to forget? All the dreams that we shared Never knew i will regret Smiles and kisses when you cared. How can i remember to forget? Nights we spend in the moonlight Never knew all this would fade Oh! You broke my heart with spade. How can i remember to forget, The melody to my heartbeat Breaking each morn' with songs so sweet Matching the passion with great heat. How can i remember to forget The taste of your lips Begilded by your hips Taunting me even in dreams. How can i remember to forget Eyes as emerald, shone like gold Thought you would be my 'To have and to hold' How can i remember to forget! My sweet love!!! |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 6:39pm On Jul 09, 2017 |
Ur comments are highly appreciated |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 2:47pm On Jul 17, 2017 |
SITTING ON THE FENCE
Sitting on the fence
The consolation of a coward
Dance of indecision
Lyrics of confusion Being neither hot nor cold Condemned by the Holy book Paranoid on what to choose Casualty of a weak mind Tossed by the wind of times Driven by so many tides Rumours and truths alike Failing to sail on either side Sitting on the fence That's a foolish saying hence Son dessert from her embrace She'll conquer your mental state. |
Re: My Girlfriend, The Greatest! by kenny1795(m): 2:52pm On Jul 17, 2017 |
SITTING ON THE FENCE
Sitting on the fence
The consolation of a coward
Dance of indecision
Lyrics of confusion Being neither hot nor cold Condemned by the Holy book Paranoid on what to choose Casualty of a weak mind Tossed by the wind of times Driven by so many tides Rumours and truths alike Failing to sail on either side Sitting on the fence That's a foolish saying hence Son dessert from her embrace She'll conquer your mental state. |
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