Good day nairalanders, I am not a producer just an artist [ Smashy ] deeply involved in self promo. I do lots of cover songs for the fun of it and also to build my potentials. I downloaded a popular song instrumental: Rihannas Man Downloading instrumental and recorded a remixed cover of it on my laptop. Strictly laptop recording with my headphone with attached mic. Kindly listen to it from the link below and tell me what you think.

Listen here: https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/53930

Twitter/IG: @smashyofficial
whatsapp: 08067492989

Nice one. Good voice. You got something in you, with hardwork and perseverance you'll get there. Few tips.

Work on your breath control.

That part of 'omo you get mind o' should have been stressed a bit longer or if professionally mixed, reverbed a bit and faded.

Cut out the 'real nigga' part. Its a misnomer in the way it is used onthe song plus it is off rhyme/tune. I know you want that part of the message to portray you as some loverboy who is also a badazz, but 'Real man' would do.

A song like yours requires fewer words. Its a narrative on a go-easy beat, let the message sink in with yoir audience. When you get to do it professionally, the song should have a bridge somewhere after the 2nd verse so the audience can digest the message and to prepare the audience for the concluding part of the song.

In all, try to create a niche for yourself. If you featured say Korede Bello on this track, one would hardly differentiate between voices/patterns. You gotta have a signature. Sound, pattern, voice, the whole 9yards.

You are good Son! Work more and don't entertain any fear/discouragement.

wow! nice one. At some point it sounded like straight from the studio. You've got a great voice and you just have little to do to make it better. You've got a great future ahead of you, keep it up.

Fawklicant:
Nice one. Good voice. You got something in you, with hardwork and perseverance you'll get there. Few tips.

Work on your breath control.

That part of 'omo you get mind o' should have been stressed a bit longer or if professionally mixed, reverbed a bit and faded.

Cut out the 'real nigga' part. Its a misnomer in the way it is used onthe song plus it is off rhyme/tune. I know you want that part of the message to portray you as some loverboy who is also a badazz, but 'Real man' would do.

A song like yours requires fewer words. Its a narrative on a go-easy beat, let the message sink in with yoir audience. When you get to do it professionally, the song should have a bridge somewhere after the 2nd verse so the audience can digest the message and to prepare the audience for the concluding part of the song.

In all, try to create a niche for yourself. If you featured say Korede Bello on this track, one would hardly differentiate between voices/patterns. You gotta have a signature. Sound, pattern, voice, the whole 9yards.

You are good Son! Work more and don't entertain any fear/discouragement.

Thank you sir, will do

joeace2020:
wow! nice one. At some point it sounded like straight from the studio. You've got a great voice and you just have little to do to make it better. You've got a great future ahead of you, keep it up.

Thanks bro

Xpol:
Good voice

Thanks man

why is the song not playing

shipe123:
why is the song not playing

Here bro https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/53930

Boss man...pls gimme a list of the hardware and software you used in recording this stuffs

You have a nice voice by the way

If you dont mind....drop you number...lets chat on watsapp

chuksisaac:
Boss man...pls gimme a list of the hardware and software you used in recording this stuffs

Just cubase5, my headphones with attached mic

chuksisaac:
You have a nice voice by the way

Thank you brother

chuksisaac:
If you dont mind....drop you number...lets chat on watsapp

Alright 08067492989

This is another one, I downloaded an unknown instrumental from the internet and I composed a song on it using my laptop and a dynamic microphone to record it. The title is SHADOW. Do download and listen here:

https://my.notjustok.com/track/download/id/83180

Listen to shame.mp3 by Mckay '17 #np on #SoundCloud https://soundcloud.com/mckay-17-622237242/shame-mp3