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Strings (poem) by efosanice: 3:38pm On Feb 05, 2010
I’m pulling the strings of a guitar
Learning to play a nice tune
And i remember
Its just like me
What you pull is what you get
How long you pull lasts that long
All the times i was out of tune
Were all those times you were
Pulling my strings wrongly
So this time
Pull me gently
Pull me nice
Keep your fingers on the strings
Pull me long

Father kept on pulling
And she lost all her hair
He had seen her with a boy
And thought she was too pretty
The only reason she gets attention
And all the neighbourhood wants to have her
Let the hair fall off
Let the beauty fade
And this time she is out of tune
Cos these are the times
Her strings being pulled wrongly

Mother wont be home tonight
She’s working late
She always does
Grabbing the pole
Showing the men her fry
And them men keep pulling
At her panties,
Cos they’ve got to see her pussy
And they pull so hard it snaps
See mama, its show time
And this night she is out of tune
Cos tonight the alcohol
Is pulling her strings wrongly

You can pull me hard
You can pull me soft
Whatever you do
I will not snap
Cos i know those times i was out of tune
You simply moved on
To pull another wrongly


©November 2009
Re: Strings (poem) by estrella(f): 10:47am On Mar 04, 2010
Your poems are beautifully written, I love the comparison of the human emtoions with the strings of a guitar, you've got a great sense of imagery. well done!
Re: Strings (poem) by ravenzord(m): 12:20pm On Mar 04, 2010
@ efosa: Your poem's a very good one, I like your descriptive ability. However, your 2nd and 3rd verses seem out of sync with the 1st and 4th, prolly cos of the switch from 1st person to 3rd person. A good poem altogether though.

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