5hrs after I started I'm done. Even with a massive headache. Im not disappointed at all, not a big fan of suspense and thrillers but I knew I had to finish this one.

Good job! You should pursue a career in writing. You'll do so well.. Your story made my evening.

I'm through oh.Soul all your stories are very wonderful,more money to your bank account

I love this story Soul. You didn't tell us about the child Paul and his gang Kidnapped.

Amhappy:
I love this story Soul. You didn't tell us about the child Paul and his gang Kidnapped.

honestly been waiting for someone to point that out...I actually made an alteration to that part in the work I sent out for proof reading..turns out the child is Paul's secret daughter with the girl from the gang who was killed before they could succesfully run away hence Paul took the child to lay low in the next village

This story is quite suspense filled. One can't wait to read the next episode. An epic crime thriller interwoven with many characters. Kudos Soulino...

U deserve accolade's

you 're the best!

Wow!! Souloho19, Idi egwu! Stories don't come better than this.. I dedicate my first comment on Nairaland to you. May your ink never run dry!

Ah!!!! Mr Souloho19, see how you messed up my mind reading this story! This is the best av read on nl

Hello bro, please i need permission to post this your work

Absolutely fantastic piece, I know someday you'll make millions from your write up.

This is mind blowing. You write so well@souloho19..keep it up bro.

Wow! This is the best story aff read here afta Tarasha. The only story to have been completed. I swear I lov dis story so much. I hope Osi married Amara oooooo. Author, ur works are perfect. Bigger u I pray. Am now one of ur biggest fans. Pls mention me on any other story ur gonna post. Thanks dearie

Nellinis:
. Pls mention me on any other story ur gonna post. Thanks dearie

The author has many other stories.

*Delayed diagnosis (you might want to read this one first sha.

*Hole in the wall. Here's the link ( https://www.nairaland.com/4378813/hole-wall )

The storyline and plot is amazing and the characters are interesting ones. I like it.

souloho19 pls I need your permission to copy your story.

An epic crime thriller interwoven with many characters.

[b][/b]hmm, u qo kill me with suspence ohmm, u qo kill me with suspence ohmm, u qo kill me with suspence o

Wonderful story line full of suspense. May your source of inspiration never run dry.

Mr soul have you ever come across a book named "paradise county"

Wao! Oboi o. Dis one dey Interestingly interesting. E go make sense for short TV series no be small. Baba o I hail u.

This story is amazing. Wat a suspense filled story. Kudos to the writer.

Pastor Bathorome's brother on my mind.... He might be the devil

souloho19:


Tnx a lot..I haven't seen that movie, but I heard it was d bomb. Is the plot really that similar?
Tnx for reading and commenting BTW..
As for Paul.....

Yeah bro,the plot,the story are exactly the same. I even thought you were writing based on your experience watching the film.
I think the title is October 1st or something like that.

Wow! Soul, honestly you've earned my respect with this story of yours. You kept me glued to my phone for weeks. Thank you

So I had to come and re-read this beautiful piece.. To think that while I was reading each chapter, I was still caught up in the suspense that came with each chapter even though I know how it will all end..

And the comments, they are hilarious.. So many funny comments, wrong accusations, wild guesses..

Despite some typographical errors,mix up in the names of the characters..I must say, it is worth re-reading..


BRAVO SOULOHO19.

Nice title.

I came across "The hole in the wall" first which was terrific...then went back and read "Delayed diagnosis" which was amazing...had to search for more of your works and here I am, 2 days later after being glued to my phone at every spare time...
Kudos Souloho19/absoul...you are simply amazing!!! Thank you for keeping me entertained free of charge (which is hard to come by, lol)! God bless and keep you! Amen! More inspirations, Sir!

help me get chair

Chikabel:
I came across "The hole in the wall" first which was terrific...then went back and read "Delayed diagnosis" which was amazing...had to search for more of your works and here I am, 2 days later after being glued to my phone at every spare time...
Kudos Souloho19/absoul...you are simply amazing!!! Thank you for keeping me entertained free of charge (which is hard to come by, lol)! God bless and keep you! Amen! More inspirations, Sir!

That's right..

you are a good writer reminds me of G.O.T series not same story though now we got to wait for the part two

Cc: Souloho19, simply put, you're a Literary Phenomenon, and your work is a masterpiece.

I have read Delayed Diagnosis and Hole in the Wall and I must say you're an exceptional good writer.

Kudos, bros. Expecting to see you at the top.