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Goodbye. / SOMEONE SAID GOODBYE a poem by RANTI (2) (3) (4)
| Goodbye. by Safiaa(f): 1:38pm On Sep 11, 2017 |
Smile on the outside. Darkness overtakes my mind Words of discouragement Swarming through my head What is my purpose? Is it better to be dead? Wishing for everlasting joy My pain gone, evacuated My soul clean, uncontaminated My spirit follows, emulating it Tears flooding my path Unable to view my craft My loneliness takes avail Of my brain under a spell Unable to function coherently As my agony has reached severity Trying to paddle out But i forever drown In my pool of distress With no power to be oppressed. If life is worth living Then there's something I'm missing Am i destined to be sad? Craving to obtain something I'll never have? Living a life of uncertainty The smoke in my lungs, burning heat. My heart pumping, irregularly This pain is getting to the best of me. My body shutting down unexpectedly Life flashing right before my eyes. Unable to say goodbye. 21 Likes 3 Shares |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 2:08pm On Sep 11, 2017 |
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| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 2:22pm On Sep 11, 2017 |
Basic, Ordinary, Bland. Safia has reached only the starting point of creativity. 4 Likes |
| Re: Goodbye. by Safiaa(f): 4:26pm On Sep 11, 2017 |
TarOrfeek:loool im not a poet. My first ever poem. I did well. Thanks. 1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 6:11pm On Sep 11, 2017 |
This is a message, someone is in love and broken  I love love1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by NwaAmaikpe: 8:25am On Nov 22, 2017 |
 ETERNITY (A remix of 'Goodbye' by Safiaa) Pain on the inside. Luminosity overtakes my soul Flatters of encouragement Overbloating my ego What is my purpose? Is it better to live? Wishing for everlasting pain My joy gone, diminished My soul stained, dilapidated My spirit stays, confusing it Honesty flooding my path Unable to view any wrong My holiness takes avail Of my emotions which are unchained Unable to slander hypocritically As my insanity reaches its zenith Trying to wiggle through But I still appear cool In my pool of self-righteousness With no desire to be redefined. If death is worth dying Then there's someone I'd be meeting Am I destined to be mad? Craving to understand somethings that'll never make sense? Living a life of piety The fire in my heart, blowing hot. My breath gasping, irregularly This goal is getting ahead of me. My evolution has commenced spontaneously Vanity flashing right before my heart. Unable to say get lost. 33 Likes 5 Shares |
| Re: Goodbye. by tosyne2much(m): 8:25am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Not bad sha |
| Re: Goodbye. by kay29000(m): 8:25am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Nice. Great art comes from great pain. 2 Likes |
| Re: Goodbye. by b0rn2fuck(m): 8:25am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Are you not the person fighting now on sexuality section, nah so your life quick change reach front page again 5 Likes |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 8:27am On Nov 22, 2017 |
huh... if he's dead, just fvcking say so. no need for pun or long story 2 Likes
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| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 8:28am On Nov 22, 2017 |
where is cheifpiiko when u need him. asslicker  |
| Re: Goodbye. by JERRYABC2(m): 8:28am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Nice one |
| Re: Goodbye. by kay29000(m): 8:29am On Nov 22, 2017 |
b0rn2fuck: Lol! Abi o. That's life for you. 1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by joviegghead: 8:32am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Not bad. Thumbs up |
| Re: Goodbye. by BTT(m): 8:32am On Nov 22, 2017 |
There's one fine thread by Safiaa, the op, that I would plead the mods bring forward. It is a video on social experiments on Koreans and Nigerian music. I learnt a lot the day I watched it. |
| Re: Goodbye. by DaddyKross: 8:32am On Nov 22, 2017 |
| Re: Goodbye. by Safiaa(f): 8:37am On Nov 22, 2017 |
BTT:I dont think its front page worthy. I just posted it because I found the reactions quite interesting. Thats all lol. |
| Re: Goodbye. by Safiaa(f): 8:38am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Why is this on the front page. Whyyy  |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 8:38am On Nov 22, 2017 |
He is busy making money, you should be like him RETIREDMUMU: 1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 8:38am On Nov 22, 2017 |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 8:39am On Nov 22, 2017 |
to say u just described how i am, would be understatement. 1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by free2ryhme: 8:40am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Safiaa: who break your heart 1 Like 1 Share
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| Re: Goodbye. by Safiaa(f): 8:41am On Nov 22, 2017 |
b0rn2fuck: 1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by TheManofTomorrow(m): 8:57am On Nov 22, 2017 |
NwaAmaikpe:This guy sha, since there is nothing to condemn or argue against, you take to remixing, u sha want to be relevant on every thread that finds its way to front page. Continue. U try sha |
| Re: Goodbye. by YoungDaNaval(m): 8:58am On Nov 22, 2017 |
NwaAmaikpe:Creativity at it's peak 4 Likes |
| Re: Goodbye. by Heywhizzy(m): 9:24am On Nov 22, 2017 |
YoungDaNaval:you don turn STAN finish |
| Re: Goodbye. by YoungDaNaval(m): 9:26am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Heywhizzy:Ma nigga, longest time |
| Re: Goodbye. by Nobody: 9:44am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Safiaa: Wetin bite this one wey make am dey write poem?  1 Like |
| Re: Goodbye. by Bamibor: 9:50am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Safiaa: Keep writing...I enjoyed your last stanza especially. Thumbs up! |
| Re: Goodbye. by Bamibor: 9:52am On Nov 22, 2017 |
Safiaa: You might not be a poet (neither am I in my perception) but we all have creativity in us, our own picture of the world that we want to tell with words in our own way. Keep writing.  |
| Re: Goodbye. by safiaaBUTTHOLE: 10:09am On Nov 22, 2017 |
I appreciate this safiaa. Thanks. |
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