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What's Your Assessment Of My Work by damoneymag(m): 7:19am On Dec 28, 2017
OK guys , I'm not really a writer or an artist of any sort, but I kind of love to try my hands sometimes. so just woke up early and decided to put this together. so what do you guys think of my work.
Re: What's Your Assessment Of My Work by damoneymag(m): 7:23am On Dec 28, 2017
The most high
I was told that life was filled with highs and lows,
But all I kept seeing was lows ,
And every turn I made ended up in a big no..
Left right, all tight and no were to go;
And no matter how high I try to set my goals
Working so hard to and fro on the road,
Alas! Low and low I kept going down the hole
Oh! My life ended ...only that I was still breathing though.

I started to wonder if there was actually a high in life
But then I could see people living in the highs
Started to wonder how do I get set up on high
Then I heard of someone higher than those in the high
They call him the most high
I handed my life to him who bears most high
Suddenly I felt somehow in my spirit like I was high
But this time, it was not the alcohol high
Rather, I discovered that I was God high
I couldn't understand it, and I wondered why?
Then I read that I was a joint heir and a son to the most high
Created by default to live and fly high

But then I was blinded by the devil
All he did was to make me do evil
I thought I was being righteous by being civil
Chai! He ate up my joy like a weevil

Thank God I'm now in the light
All my wrongs made right
And at the name of Jesus, I can also put the devil to flight
All thanks to the most high.

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