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|The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 3:20pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Am a new nairalander and a novice in writting. Try as much as possible to correct my writings but please don't let the criticism be too much that it will discourage me.
This characters and everything about this story is a fiction and this story shouldn't be reproduced by any other means. I am a scientist and I have develop an app that will strike those that copy my write up, the app has a current equivalent to that of the current generated in kanji dam! So keep off.
Please how or who can help me invite people.
I didn't have a copy of this story, so i will only update when the inspiration comes.
If you are senseless please keep off because i have designed an app that can slap you through your phone!!!!
Oya now lets go!!!
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 4:45pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Well am sure what you all know the meaning of BORING? if yes continue reading but if no go get a dictionary! Yes i have lived a boring life. Well it could also be an ordinary life because there is nothing extra in my past. Its just the common story of many people so I won't like to say it but you should just know that i went to school, wrote my SSCE exams both WAEC and NECO and passed and then graduated E.O.D.
In a family of four, I am the third am a boy because some are already thinking am an hermaphrodite. Having a sister as the first born and last and we boys are stuck in the middle. My family is average financially like my dad has two cars a Toyota Corrolla and and Mercedes Benz C300 both are blue, well as you might be thinking my dad like blue colour and I also and my siblings and I am starting to think that blue is in our gene as for my mom she has just one blue Toyota sienna. My dad works in the sate government office and also run some little business, while mum owns a not too big and not too small restaurant but she didn't use to allow us to go to her restaurant, She gave us that indefinite ban when me, my brother and my little sister went there and order for food as much as we can and we even told the customers there not to pay. The staffs complained but we shut them up since it is not their mother's restaurant anyway and when mum find out what we did to her restaurant she got infuriated but she is not the hot tempered type so she just gave us an indefinite ban. she warned her staffs not to give us any food for free whenever we come not even a Sachet of water that she do give her customers for free. Who does that?? But my mom does anyway so If I told you that you should follow me to my Mum's restaurant make sure you are with money or else you'll end up mopping the whole floor!
Well I would also like to Introduce me and my siblings to you, khairat which is my elder sister, basit also shey which is my elder brother, I myself and my name you'll know later and my younger sister that i cherish so much Faridah. She is really beautiful and meek, she is 11 years old and in jss2 her education is rapid and her growth too its is so rapid. I really maintain a good relationship with her so when usually feel free to tell me anything and I did that to protect her so for her not to hide something that could later be a danger to her from me.
My elder brother is a nerd but also cool. He is really obsessed with education and I also follow his lead. He too usually do things normal human do like partying, dating and so on, but at a rate. For example my brother even everyone in the family never drink alcohol. My brother is not a flirt nor a philanderer or a organizer but he only maintains a stable relationship with his lover which I know but still unknown to my parents. My brother is a 300L student studying computer engineering at FUTMINNA. He is a computer guru and he bought my phone for me and that's one of the reasons why I love him
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 7:04pm On Dec 31, 2017|
my brother is just an amzing one and a special one too.
On a lazy tuesday around 4pm I decided to visit Farid. Let me quickly introduce farid to you. Farid is my friend since childhood we Live in the same Neighbourhood and we are kinda forming some brotherhood. That's to show how close we are. I unplug my infinix hot 4 from the charger, unlock it with my index finger and open my whatsapp. I decide to message farid before coming to his house house so as to be sure he was at home. I am very sure he would be online because he is a whatsapp addict, he is once a 2go addict when 2go was still a trending social network. I opened my account 4 months before him but he has reached the 2go star ultimate when i was still battling with leader but that was then. To my surprise he isn't online and that's unusual of him. I decide to visit him since his house is a slight shoot from my house ( a bit more than a stone throw). On getting to Farid house I met him at the gate Claded in Madrid jersey and a blue jean. Farid is tall and fair in complexion and as well handsome.
"guy where you dey come from" i asked.
" i dey come from my jamb tutorial" he replied.
"but why you no tell me now" i asked him again with a little anger in my tone
"am sorry I ought to have told you but it is unexpected, mum just told me yesterday and she said I must resume today" he said giving me an innocent look.
"lets enter now or did you want the sun to roast us" he added.
I smiled, farid will do anything to keep his fair complexion except breaching, I am brown that's what i could use to describe my complexion and I love my complexion. We've had several arguments among our other pals about the most handsome between farid and I. But i myself could neither say that I am handsome more than him nor is he handsome more than me.
"guy let me gist you about the tutorial now" farid said immediately we entered his room. Farid house was a duplex painted with brown colour, the house is tiled and the outside is interlocked. Farid is a bit ahead of me socially, he has a girlfriend although he is not as bad as you think. He belong to the kiss and chat group of relationship.he love parties and he too just like me doesn't indulge in alcoholic drinks.
"why did you keep mute" farid questioned and this brought me back out of my thought.
"just thinking now, so what's the news about" i asked with a raised brow.
"well the tutorial is just okay guy, and it is filled with different sort of people, the teacher are good and you know we attend a boys only school so there are also gir"...... "hold it there mister, i know you wanna talk about the girls" i cut him short before he could add further. The reason why my past is a boring one is also because of my school.. BOYS ONLY, you will continue to see reasons why my past is boring.
"you are the one with dirty mind and what's bad about mentioning girls?" farid said with a query written on his face.
"you better concentrate on what's important farid" i adviced.
"but aren't you interested in coming too" he asked.
"are you paid to advertise or what?" i asked him sharply.
" easy guy its for your own benefit" he said looking innocent
"did you have an axe to grind on this matter or why the stress? Abeg go and be picking beans if you have nothing to do oooo" i replied.
" ahh see him, its for your own and what will you benefit by staying at home or shey you wan go serve food for your mum's restaurant?" he asked and like that is not enough "and we all know that you are not good in calculations although you are going for pharmacy but you'll still need physics, so its for your own good ooooo" he said conclusively.
" i have heard you sha I'll tell mum and I will give you the feed backs on whatsapp" i said after looking the case. Farid is a science student but maybe he would have been a good lawyer if he went to arts instead of science. The guy is so good in arguments.
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 7:49pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Nice one dear.. I'm definitely following.
And where is my imaginary husband BiadeFolar
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 7:51pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Evajael, Hantonia, Cbella, Joislim, Mustack Pu7pl3, demsid, Damibiz
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 8:04pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Lahrra, Missnande, Abiajiga, Leesah, Heemah, Shunletsam, Gloryjims
|Re: The Tutorial by nerd51(f): 8:18pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Nice story. Following
|Re: The Tutorial by demsid(m): 8:19pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Gucciqueen38:thanks for inviting me here
|Re: The Tutorial by demsid(m): 8:27pm On Dec 31, 2017|
It seems whatsapp is down tonight. Whoelse is experiencing this.
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 8:27pm On Dec 31, 2017|
demsid:You are welcome dear
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 8:57pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Whatsapp is down bro.
Is this how zuckerberg will start is own new year ? Rubbish!
Thanks for the comment guys
|Re: The Tutorial by Leesah(f): 9:29pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Gucciqueen38:Thanks for the mention sweetheart. shift let me sit near you... please I need a sack of popcorn and crate of Fanta.. Time to enjoy the ride. Dear writer, carry on we are solidly behind you.
|Re: The Tutorial by Damibiz(m): 9:39pm On Dec 31, 2017|
I hv landed.....we need a Gucciking for here oh...happy new year in advance guys
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 10:04pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Dedicated to Gucciqueen38
convniced or confused
I got home around 7pm, I prayed in the little mosque we built in our house the i head for the kitchen to dish out my food which is rice and plantain. Five minutes after I had finished my food. I heard dad's car horn, i quickly used to the gate to open it for him. We don't have a gateman in our house because dad doesn't trust them but i think dad us just being paranoid not until a scenario that happened in our area made me to succumb to his idea. so I and my young sister particularly have to be the one doing it.
An hour later dad has already eaten and he settled down in the parlour although that happens rarely because after eating dad would pray and sleep. Sitting comfortably on the brown leather couch with one arm on the couch and the other holding the remote he called me and almost immediately i answered. He asked me to sit down on the adjacent chair beside him and he said "since you have finished your exams you have never thought about you going to any extra moral class" I was happy at his statement because that would serve as an opportunity to inform him about farid's lesson.
"well young man I have decided to get you a private tutor" he said conclusively. This shattered my heart into a microscopic pieces and knowing my dad he isn't gullible at all.
"but dad I don't think the private tutor will work because how would a single person be teaching me four subjects?" I asked him rhetorically. " a teacher is skilled in one subject or the other so it absurd if a single teacher is now teaching me four subjects" i quickly added. Dad shook his head and said "are you trying to be lazy or what? All what you do is to sleep and eat! Do you think that is life!" my dad tone didn't change but that doesn't mean he isnt angry.
" am sorry sir, but what about me going to a tutorial?" I asked him.
"No no no no and a capital NO" dad said affirmatively. Another reason why my past is boring, my parents are paranoid, they seem to worry too much about their children. Dad declined because of fear of me being kidnapped on my way to the tutorial or anything bad sha.
"don't you no its dangerous going to a tutorial that you don't know those that organise it! And I Am sure its no where
near this place and you know that we have no security in Nigeria so you aren't going anywhere! Understood?" he said using his have to pull his ear.
"but farid also attend the same tutorial dad" i blurted out " and am not a kid anymore" i quickly added.
"well even if I'd allow you to go to a tutorial you won't be going ro the same tutorial with farid" dad said authoritatively and I know that's the final no point in arguments or it may later recline on his former decision of getting me a private tutor and that would be hello boring.
"thank you sir, but did you know any tutorial around and why didn't you want me to go to farid's tutorial?" I queried him but instead of dad answering me he just pretend not to hear.
"help me get the Dstv remote" he said. And now i know I've lost the case.
That night I typed to farid on whatsapp telling him about dad's decision. He too like me was downcasted but he assured me that we'll find a way to convince dad. I lock my phone and drifted of to dreamland.
"wake up lazy bones" I heard the voice of my little sister intruding my sleep.
"let me sleep now" I protested.
"like you won't go for the morning prayers abi?"
"okay am awake"
I could hear dad's voice calling my name. He is at home since today is Saturday. I answered and immediately I got to him he handed me a form. As I glanced through it I found out that its is a Tutorial form, now am getting confused, I also see that he has paid the tutorial fees in the form, now I am toasted. There is no chance of going to Farid's tutorial but well miracle happens.
" one of my colleagues has a brother that runs a tutorial so he helped me get the form and I have already paid for it as you can see"he said like he was actually reading my mind "the tutorial is a great one and am sure you'll like it" he added. I am like wetin do this man sef! Why can't he just allow me to choose whatever I like, I was still thinking when dad words snapped me out of my thoughts.
"and are you supposed to be looking like a caged lion or thank me?" well I am a caged lion i thought. " thank you very much sir" I said trying as much as possible to hide my anger.
Now am really confused! And dad can't be convinced!
Did i tell you dad is full of surprises??
Thanks for the comments. Please let me know my flaws.
|Re: The Tutorial by Damibiz(m): 10:06pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Ultimate guy....u re good,one thing that kill NL writterz is inconsistency......please u hv to update well so dat u go keep ur readerz...Gucciqueen please help us to bring in established writterz like Theblessedman,Ghostwritter,Meneski nd co please
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 10:09pm On Dec 31, 2017|
thanks bro. May mb and battery support my consistency
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 10:09pm On Dec 31, 2017|
thanks bro. May data and battery support my consistency
|Re: The Tutorial by Damibiz(m): 10:14pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Lol.....NEPA no mess around u na.
|Re: The Tutorial by SheWrites(f): 10:41pm On Dec 31, 2017|
|Re: The Tutorial by Abiajiga: 10:48pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Seated. Tnx for d invite
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 10:48pm On Dec 31, 2017|
miracle or magic
miracle or magic
let me ask a psychic,
is that incident
a coincident or accident
I was in a depressed mood in my dad's Benz. Dad was driving me to the tutorial, I was just depressed thinking of how the lesson Would be without farid. I saw someone passed by our car on a bike and although i didn't notice the person but the cloth resembles that of farid's but since its not only him that type of cloth is made for I ignore the thought. I saw a sign board by the roadside on which inscribes " witty brain tutorial" well who gives his tutorial a odd name like that? I asked no one in a particular. Dad pull up and I alighted from the car. The tutorial is nicer than I have pictured, It is a two-storey building with a red roof. At the gate is a man at his forties and a lady at probably her thirties sitter comfortably on a chair. They exchanged pleasantries with dad and dad gave them the form and immediately the give me my ID CARD and few books. Dad took his leave not before I thanked him.
I was directed to my class by the lady, so I walked slowly to the class and behold I saw farid seated in the fourth row. The class could be used as an hall because it has a wide space and i could estimate that there are over 70 students in the class. I was really hiding something from you guys and that is the fact that I am a shy guy. I am not that shy but I am still shy a bit and that's why I really want to attend the same tutorial with farid. I walked slowly to farid chair and sat beside him. He was also surprised.
"and must you play a plank at me" farid queried. " well i didn't lie to you about what i said its just a coincidence. Dad didn't know that this is your lesson" i relied him.
"wow! What a great coincidence" farid said.
"so when is the lesson starting?"i asked him looking around me.
"stop that, you are just a newcomer" farid said ignoring my question.
"stop what" I asked him pretending O didn't get what he meant.
"you are looking around like a cctv camera boy" he said. I was about to talk when the biology teacher came in.
"so how is the lesson today?" Dad asked me and I smiled sheepishly.
"it was fine dad and to my surprise farid was in the tutorial too". Dad shot me a scornful look and I just giggled.
"well no problem" he said.
Dad can't take his money back so he has no choice that to overlook it.
|Re: The Tutorial by UltimateDayg: 10:50pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Please criticize and correct my mistakes
|Re: The Tutorial by Missnande(f): 11:41pm On Dec 31, 2017|
Thanks Gucciqueen38. Space booked!
|Re: The Tutorial by Joislim(f): 2:03am On Jan 01|
Gucciqueen38:thanks for the invite
|Re: The Tutorial by cbella(f): 3:59am On Jan 01|
Eheh what do we have here
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:44am On Jan 01|
Leesah:You are welcome
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:45am On Jan 01|
cbella:A nice story
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:46am On Jan 01|
Joislim:You are welcome dear..
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:47am On Jan 01|
Missnande:You are welcome dear
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:48am On Jan 01|
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:51am On Jan 01|
Damibiz:Happy new year
|Re: The Tutorial by Gucciqueen38(f): 6:53am On Jan 01|
Thanks for the dedication UltimateDayg. Happy new year to everyone
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