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My Amateur Writing Compilation by Kinkale(m): 9:24pm On Apr 14, 2018 |
so I've been writing on and off for a while now, some of them pretty dark, some just my normal soul searching. I consider myself a weird personality and the only way I can explain me is with words I think... now before I begin, a minor disclaimer: am not a professional writer, I do it for the fun of it, I just love words and stringing them to make SENSE is literary orgasm to me. I don't enjoy ambiguity in writings because they sound sweet but most times they don't send a message, and I feel if my writing isn't soul binding then it's not worth putting online. so sit back and enjoy, I'll be updating them constantly everyday and I would really love feedbacks no matter how critical they are, I want to grow in writing. thanks |
Re: My Amateur Writing Compilation by Kinkale(m): 9:25pm On Apr 14, 2018 |
I've really wanted to hold unto the past Keep the wounds fresh so it still stinks Let my garbage pile up without taking them out Always dwelt on the lessons but never moving on And while the future is alluring Calling me to greater feelings not explored Enticing me with life's rubies and diamonds The past keeps reminding me that it was once my future And it promised even greater treasures If only I'll leave my comfort zone and explore But my comfort zone now stinks Comfortably picking from trash cans because I'm scared of how others cook My fresh wounds wants covering up And the bloods has stopped flowing since no matter how deep I prod it So maybe I'll just step out my comfort zone But this time I won't count my steps Or jump pavements because they're too beautiful This time I'll walk freely and calmly With a broad smile and shoulders high up I'll take free walks down this street called life And maybe if I stumble I won't run back to my garbage can I'll pick myself up, dust myself clean And continue my majestic walk Like I never even stumbled at all Maybe then I'll find fulfilment!!! kale... 1 Like |
Re: My Amateur Writing Compilation by Kinkale(m): 9:33pm On Apr 14, 2018 |
And I had a dream today I felt my hand around a waist A waist I felt I knew I smelt a hair shampoo Coconut flavoured and smooth It was all too familiar A shape akin to goddesses Heavenly and without faults It was all too surreal Then I saw your heart and it was horror Rotten and smelt dead I cringed in fear You were a goddess outside And a demon in your heart I wonder how I fell for it kale 1 Like |
Re: My Amateur Writing Compilation by Kinkale(m): 9:36pm On Apr 14, 2018 |
I'm tired of craving for love Maybe it's time love found me I'll stop running around looking I'll wait in a place Maybe just maybe Love would find me here, waiting kale... |
Re: My Amateur Writing Compilation by Ahmedsuleiman(m): 6:57am On Apr 15, 2018 |
You really tried by putting your words in the right context. You are good. What you now need is how to secure emotions on your writings. Poem, I believe centres on the ability of the poet to make his/her ready relish more and be deep in the words. As I said earlier, you tried but you can do better. 1 Like |
Re: My Amateur Writing Compilation by Kinkale(m): 9:20am On Apr 17, 2018 |
Ahmedsuleiman: thanks boss!! I really appreciate it 1 Like |
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