By Soibi Polymath ( The Chief Poet

To my Bestie

With joy in my heart
With ecstasy in my soul
My brain jerking endorphin

Under the rain
I searched for you
My body drenched
My clothes needing a squeeze
My ears with drippings
My eyes crying a river

Under the rain
Under the fierce blowing wind
Under the rumbling thunders
Lightning illuminating my way
Under the short term streams on my path
Your voice echoing in my heart
Your spectacles reflecting like a mirror
Your shining white teeth got me smiling too

Under the rain without an umbrella
Under the rain I stood
My chest cold like ice
Battered by heavenly showers
Under the rain I could wait a hundred years just to see you my bestie

Please rate my Poem on the scale of 1-10

Culled from Soibi Ransom's Book The Encyclopedia of Love Episode 1 Chapter 9 being Serialized

Soibi Ransom is Daily Memoirs Chief Writer.

Plenty of spelling errors. Easily avoidable.


The brevity of your talent is enhanced by your impatience in writing. Take time. Literally.

Nice work...

TarOrfeek:
Plenty of spelling errors. Easily avoidable.


The brevity of your talent is enhanced by your impatience in writing. Take time. Literally.

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