pabon:
Next update will come up this evening.

You'd have noticed some errors in the previous update. I've made corrections. I may have to re-upload the screenshots again.

Please comment your thoughts. I'll value your observations and constructive criticism.

You are doing a wonderful job @pabon,what more can I say than keep doing what you love doing,it not easy to pen down a fantasy story and with all the plot and directions of the story,you sure need a good dose of inspiration to put this down.
I'm enjoying the story so far so good,keep updates flowing and thanks for the beautiful work.

dawno2008:

You are doing a wonderful job @pabon,what more can I say than keep doing what you love doing,it not easy to pen down a fantasy story and with all the plot and directions of the story,you sure need a good dose of inspiration to put this down.
I'm enjoying the story so far so good,keep updates flowing and thanks for the beautiful work.

Thanks so much dawno2008. Your comment means a lot to me.

Good morning everyone. Thank God I've been unbanned. Another update in a bit.

I'll be stronger tomorrow.

Edited: Just had to make sure I dropped this. I'm a little under the weather.

Good morning fam.

I'm stronger now. I'm looking to drop another update by 8am Ceteris Paribus

pabon:

NAWA OOO HOW PASON WAN TAKE READ DIS 1 NOW... EVERYTIN DON SCATTER SCATTER WALAHI

198800Mam:

NAWA OOO HOW PASON WAN TAKE READ DIS 1 NOW... EVERYTIN DON SCATTER SCATTER WALAHI

I'm sorry. Is it that the writing is too small? Can you explain please?

pabon:


I'm sorry. Is it that the writing is too small? Can you explain please?

IT LOOK LIKE SCREEN SHOT VERY SMALL N TINY, IT IS NOT TYPED BUT THE INTRODUCTN N CHAPTER1 WS OKAY

198800Mam:


IT LOOK LIKE SCREEN SHOT VERY SMALL N TINY, IT IS NOT TYPED BUT THE INTRODUCTN N CHAPTER1 WS OKAY

I'm sorry you don't like it. Others said they liked it. Besides, it helped reduce the burden of having to re-edit the writeup (the italics and all).

Again, I think it will help curb plagiarism.

Maybe you could just zoom in if it looks too small.

You know if you comment you would encourage me, right? It wouldn't do a dent to your image.

Whizlight I see you.

Please, let's learn to encourage writers.

pabon:
You know if you comment you would encourage me, right? It wouldn't do a dent to your image.

Whizlight I see you.

Please, let's learn to encourage writers.

Oga pabon abeg no vex. It just dat my big phone spoil. So i cant read d story. Thats is why i am nt commenting

Whizlight:

Oga pabon abeg no vex. It just dat my big phone spoil. So i cant read d story. Thats is why i am nt commenting

Wait? Is the writing so small? It looks quite alright to me. Maybe you could zoom in.

pabon:


Wait? Is the writing so small? It looks quite alright to me. Maybe you could zoom in.

i could have if i could. Am using a small itel phone.

pabon:
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Waiting bro

RealLordZeus:

Waiting bro

Sorry to keep you waiting. I would have updated since afternoon. However, I forgot to charge my laptop. It's run out of juice.

It will drop before 8pm when I should have charged it.

pabon:


Sorry to keep you waiting. I would have updated since afternoon. However, I forgot to charge my laptop. It's run out of juice.

It will drop before 8pm when I should have charged it.

Alright bro! Thanks

Updated.

Nice boss. So intriguing. Loving every inch of it

Whizlight:
Nice boss. So intriguing. Loving every inch of it

I'm glad you liked it. I should do another update tomorrow...or this night if everything goes right.

#MadeofMore

Evening guys. I didn't know I posted the wrong update. I had edited the last paragraph but it's not reflected here.

Sorry about that ...although it's just a little change.

Updated it. The next update will come today or tomorrow. My eyes are sore from lack of sleep.

@pabon you're doing a wonderful job with this story,pls keep it up.
But I noticed some mix up with the updates,
1st Vince was running for his life,after Bensworth saved him,and the next update was when he first met Mabel at the library,before their journey to the realm they are now,
I believe the update that was to show how Vince escape from the monster pursuing him is missing.
That should come before Jandel showed his real self.
I know you've been under some stress,hold on bro,Jah is your strenght,I truly appreciate your effort and time,in which you put in this amazing story.
Pls clarify and fix where necessary.Nice work sir.And pls don't kill Mabel

dawno2008:
@pabon you're doing a wonderful job with this story,pls keep it up.
But I noticed some mix up with the updates,
1st Vince was running for his life,after Bensworth saved him,and the next update was when he first met Mabel at the library,before their journey to the realm they are now,
I believe the update that was to show how Vince escape from the monster pursuing him is missing.
That should come before Jandel showed his real self.
I know you've been under some stress,hold on bro,Jah is your strenght,I truly appreciate your effort and time,in which you put in this amazing story.
Pls clarify and fix where necessary.Nice work sir.And pls don't kill Mabel

I think it's the part that 198800Mam quoted that got you confused. Check again please. It wasn't me updating. It was the guy quoting an update to say he couldn't follow as I changed to updating with pictures. You dig?

pabon:



I think it's the part that 198800Mam quoted that got you confused. Check again please. It wasn't me updating. It was the guy quoting an update to say he couldn't follow as I changed to upndating with pictures. You dig?

You're right,I didn't take note of the quote
Ride on

I'm laughing at the part where Dawno2008 said I shouldn't kill Mabel. I'm thinking you're remembering Call of the wind and the way Nora had to die.

Nothing is set yet sha. I still don't know if she'll die.

I had a busy day. Let's see if I can successfully drop one update before sleep finally wins.

Evening guys. Remember I said I reordered the chaptering? Where I said every update is a new chapter? Well, I decided to not cut out the top part when cropping the pictures so you don't get confused.

Sorry for the delay.

Here's the next update

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