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Dfhgdshshdh by Jduck13(m): 11:47am On May 18, 2007
I leave ya shirt wet like a leaky faucet
like my girls pussy when she c me flossin
coz dis Lyrical piece bustin lead like a pipe now
and i stay like a crackhead neva puttin da pipe down
till its out but not of coke its lead
and i keep wit da smoke dats why he soak his bed
pi**in himself when I battle or cypher
shi**in himself someone gettem a diaper
coz dis kid cant handle da wrath
my flow loco his stink outta da bath
so do da math its straight out da kitchen
hotta den crack or my a** when im shittin
and yea my a** is hot when i crap son
coz its bigger somen like my gat to ya cap gun
u dare me to clap son I leave ya brains in ya lap son
and i cook u like keis and I got more den a map son
haha and please spit somethin back at me
so I can say it dressed as a clown and everybody laugh at me
Im a pretty funny dude im crude and gregarious
sometimes nefarious but u jus comedy central huilarious
no coke packer im a dope rapper to stack scrilla
and u mus be a granny coz homey i chop grams like a crack dealer
Re: Dfhgdshshdh by jesusfreak(f): 4:38pm On May 18, 2007
using words like ass, c**ks and p***s to sell rap wont do undecided


be urself
Re: Dfhgdshshdh by Jduck13(m): 3:55am On May 19, 2007
yo I am bein myself I can rap gospel to though
Re: Dfhgdshshdh by jesusfreak(f): 11:55am On May 19, 2007
grin

LMAO

cool. do ur thing then wink
Re: Dfhgdshshdh by denex: 11:39pm On May 29, 2007
Your rhyme is tight. If you really wrote that, what you need is a record deal and not poetry reviews.

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