I might stand alone
but I remain incomplete
and whenever apart we're blown
your rhythm my heart beats
a song to celebrate you.

Like the sun to the sky
the waves to the sea
you lift my soul up high
cuz U are a part of me
and maybe I am of you.

To you I'll always turn
and in you I surely trust
cuz our hearts, two, become one
and without U I am lost
lost to pains, hurts and tears.

Now maybe you'll know
how much i do care
though I never let it show
cuz I live on in great fear
of you bidding me bye!

[i][/i] what do U think?

nice poem, very romantic i must say

Thanks freak. But tell me, how freaky are you?

grate work of art but will u allow me to critize it poetically.i mean poetic criticism
.

ur poem is alright, it shows ur imagination.

Yeah! It's nice.