H-ere in my solitude I stitch my heart:
A-n heart you ripped apart on the altar of deception,
P-iercing through it countless swords buried in your words.
P-ushing me to a point death became my closest friend.
Y-ou're like a sweet poison I drank smiling,
V-olcano that made my heart its epicenter
A-nd a whirlwind that uprooted my whole being
L-eaving me lost in the desert of my mind.
E-ach year, this day visits me with memories of you.
N-avigating me through the paths our footprints stood beside each other.
T-he nights we watched the skys miles apart with our heart caged together...
I am still hunted by these memories that I can't erase,
N-ow fueling the drumbeat that force my pen to dance.
E-ach ink now becoming an elixir of a broken heart.

Poet joe

Wow!...nice one..if to sey i never marry my wife,i 4 carry her give u.

donbachi:
Wow!...nice one..if to sey i never marry my wife,i 4 carry her give u.

Lol, you are very naughty

nice one bro.. You are too good

poetictwenty:
H-ere in my solitude I stitch my heart:
A-n heart you ripped apart on the altar of deception,
P-iercing through it countless swords buried in your words.
P-ushing me to a point death became my closest friend.
Y-ou're like a sweet poison I drank smiling,
V-olcano that made my heart its epicenter
A-nd a whirlwind that uprooted my whole being
L-eaving me lost in the desert of my mind.
E-ach year, this day visits me with memories of you.
N-avigating me through the paths our footprints stood beside each other.
T-he nights we watched the skys miles apart with our heart caged together...
I am still hunted by these memories that I can't erase,
N-ow fueling the drumbeat that force my pen to dance.
E-ach ink now becoming an elixir of a broken heart.

Ohuche Joseph ogbonna

Nice piece, ah.
The structure, and forming HAPPY VALENTINE again ah he choke.