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Inspirational Poem On Cruelty Of Life by Eduprofff: 2:08am On May 06, 2020
Cruelty of life

At youthful age

My future aspiration

To complete elementary school

Enlist to auxiliary school level

Right away

Finish in higher organization separately

Also, secure a great job

Get hitched

Offer shower to both male and female

Deal with my family

Also, people group in a fair way

Filful my fantasy at twenty years old

Presently life has choose wrongly for me

Change my fantasy

Furthermore, aspiration to the most noticeably awful

Taking me to level I never intended to be

It carries torment and distress to my heart

At the point when I understood am as yet battling

To arrive at half of my fantasy and aspiration

Ever at age of my center 30's

I sobbed and cried quietly

More in my heart

Since life has chosen wrong for me

My way to my fantasy and aspiration is close however

Life continues tossing snags to me

Which makes me step in reverse and start all overagain

Making me to appreciate sweet harshness of misery

Life figure out how to give me significant serenity

Be that as it may, there is no rest of psyche

My heart got broken and incapacitated

Holding up to raised

What's more, satisfy my fantasy and aspiration.
https://www.livelihood.com.ng/2020/02/Poem-on-cruelty-of-life.html

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Re: Inspirational Poem On Cruelty Of Life by Aiyamrex(m): 2:49pm On May 06, 2020
Great job amigo,
your work is spiced up with enjambments which rhetoricaly long me for the next line.
well, twas kind of a song to me with the rythm i created reading this piece.
i feel your pains and how f*cked life is.
my fav. Line "making me to appreciate sweet harshness of mistery"
(sweet harshness)
i love the use of that oxymoronic device. . .
thank you

keep it coming

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