Aiight this is the story;i gotta get back in my baby's good books cause we have a fight right now so i was thinking whats the most romantic thing i could do for her NOW! then it came to me that since she likes songs like me i could write her a good song with rhytmn&plenty blues but the problem is that inasmuch as i love songs and know them too i cant write one?so am asking y'all to help write me a materpiece of a song!we would all do it together,how we gonna do it is with each post u follow up a line of the previous post,it could be a rhyme at the end of the line or a new line,,,remember this song should have 2 verses,a chorus and a bridge and more importantly should be able to win my girl back r u kidding?ok it should be a song that eventually if its that good-which i believe it would be can be performed by an artist of our choice on our very own NL.

@topic
The title of the song should be:
BACK IN YOUR ARMS AGAIN

odada:

Aiight this is the story;i gotta get back in my baby's good books cause we have a fight right now so i was thinking whats the most romantic thing i could do for her NOW! then it came to me that since she likes songs like me i could write her a good song with rhytmn&plenty blues but the problem is that inasmuch as i love songs and know them too i can't write one?so am asking y'all to help write me a materpiece of a song!we would all do it together,how we going to do it is with each post u follow up a line of the previous post,it could be a rhyme at the end of the line or a new line,,,remember this song should have 2 verses,a chorus and a bridge and more importantly should be able to win my girl back r u kidding?ok it should be a song that eventually if its that good-which i believe it would be can be performed by an artist of our choice on our very own Nairaland.

@topic
The title of the song should be:
BACK IN YOUR ARMS AGAIN

sorry odad this topic made me laff


can i also share the song when its out

@muki
you of all people should be helping me out instead of LYAO how u dey?drop a line for my song abeg o!

@topic
since we've got a title le'me start with the first line, thats 3 lines! ;Dlol,seriously now:

ITS BEEN A WHILE AND WE HAV'NT SPOKEN YET

why you doing this to me when you know i love you so much

_{line 2}

. . .Love me so much?,
you talk about dough n continue to blush,
we've been an inch within, miles apart, missing your touch,
be ma wonder-woman, let me be your King-Kong,
shit, can't believe i'm on this thread writing a dumbass sing song. . .

lmao @ Gbade    you are crazeee  


but being my king kong might mean a lot to me
if you stop fronting and act like a man
see being a coward and running from your feelings
cant make you forget
honest now baby am hurting inside
the  heartache  and the pain keeps me from functioning well
please come back to me

Come back to you? I'm right here in front of you!,
you keep playing mind-games, plus i ain't gotta clue,
i ain't frontin' boo, my mind only tells me to back off,
got ma game tighter than dice shooters, dn't expect me to slack off,
we may bury the hatchet, but give birth to AK47s,
nah, don't tell me to go to hell, i just chose heaven,
stay fitted like a durag on,
luv it when u giggle when i get ma due mack on

your due mack on .
Guy you need to slow down and turn around
look at the heart crying for you
remember the good times and weed out the bad times
i love you , you;ve heard all the time
remember the first day, i talked to you
tthe smiles and the whispers
still give me goose pimples
C;mon Papi we can make it work
just give ourselves a second chance . . . .

Talk soft ma, u giving me the third degree,
and i don't mean grades, them words are something B,
ayt i'd be the man and stop frontin',
afterall, macking on the cyber can't be all for nothing! ,
you opened your heart and i walked right into it,
but yuh didn't open up ya mind so i'm see thru it,
i ain't coward boo, this King-Kong roars,
taking u ta cloud 9, watch ur soar,
i keep falling over maself for ya, i guess i'm trippin',
we are loosing the friction, i guess i'm slipping,
let me write you a song,
re-right u my wrong,
glo with me, and u might rule my world,

mayne i gotta go mukina. . .lol, already feeling sleepy. . .

WHAT DA HELL IS GOING ON HERE?
        Y'all are supposed to be writting me a ROMANTIC SONG this is not one of them battles lyrically men!muki&gbade take a break and drop a line,,,that we can follow and lets get the song started,am going to disregard all your former post apart from muki's post of line2,then we will work on that and get to line3

gbade. x:

Come back to you? I'm right here in front of you!,
you keep playing mind-games, plus i ain't gotta clue,
i ain't frontin' boo, my mind only tells me to back off,
got ma game tighter than dice shooters, dn't expect me to slack off,
we may bury the hatchet, but give birth to AK47s,
nah, don't tell me to go to hell, i just chose heaven,
stay fitted like a durag on,
love it when u giggle when i get ma due mack on

Now thiz iz a dope freestyle.(This guy!!! U make wonder than twinkle lil star). But honestly, U wrote ma heart out.I was gonna write somthin similar but it might not be this dope.Keep illin dude

@gbade. x and mukina2

I both love your freestyles , hummmmm i suspect something between your two .

Am feeling the lyrics ,

Nice job guys but guy you guys continue tomm

OMG! not again?are u going to contribute by dropping a line or just stay fazed at gbade's effort that am ignoring cos its too hard core @ kaydee

Unlike Gbade,i'm a very bad freestyler except you want me to go and fap the lyrics. I'll be back.Hope 2weeks won't be too long?

c'mon kaydee its not that bad?am only asking for 1line from you that rhymes with "much"the last word on muki's post!

Oh sh*t, now dis is a funny one. Lemme kick somn.
I know I've been troublesome
chewin a$$ like a bubblegum
but all u askin me to do is to cuddle, hon?
Ok, but I gotta be out in a friggin' minute
u gotta 4giv me cos even God be 4givin' sinnaz
Its a crazy world but we can't help but keep livin' in it.
Peace, ma.

<continuation>

aight Po,
help me tell her, young bro,
i gotta do good to her and start the re-up,
i broke her heart and it's gon' need a stitch up,
odada's pleas fall on deff ears 'cause i could wipe my ass with it,
she keeps flaring up, ma ass is getting mass heated,
third degree burns,
360 degree turns,
. . .we do,
our egos big enuff, we need a shrink to speak to,
we'd be Mr and Mrs WordSmith,
air our ass out plus some shit to run with,
Lord knows,
we stand at the cross-roads,
but you gotta listen to ma story untold,
gimme some slack, i'm your man ma,
i'm that support when u can't even stand ma,
i lay ma guns down, accept ma apology,
we're done going thru this emotional catastrophe

@ odada:

lol. . .dude, you can't just ignore all that i wrote. Look, pick the best lines out and form it into a song for your girl friend, take it from me, she'd love it!

@ Odada what
ok no more,  we'll take it easy

people are helping you out, you are  destroying our song  

@ OMo yeah we dating   _{do not tell no one you hear} aint that right gbade


we're done going through this emotional catastrophe

ok gbade

i dont think so, cuz you keep turning my heart into a broken trophy
Papi , this  g.url right here loves you and cant  let those feelings pass by
together we make a beautiful tag team,
you my fine nubian king,stop fronting it aint good for the heart
i'll go to the  end of the world. if i have to
i might let you pack your limousine in my drive way  

This is one funny ass thread!

Unfortunately I don't have no rhymes to drop!

Aight, guess I'd ratha play cupid on this one/
odada neva thot it'ld get this stupid n' this dumb/
n' now I bet he's pukin' on this one/
n' now I bet y'all all like "where did u git them spits from?"/
so if y'all see them luv arrows, don't refuse it, come git some/.

lmao @ Po deep  

drop some love  


@ razorr oya drop something

Gbade love where are you

Best lyrics I ever heard:


im gonna slash and gash,
rip another hole in your ass.
I'll smear blood on the walls
and then play tennis with your balls,
and if the phone rings dont answer the caLL.
im gonna slit yo throat, fuk u like a goat
i'LL rip yo fore skin off and make a winter coat.
im the dennis surpise,
scoop out both of youre eyes.
PEACE!

I-man:

Best lyrics  I ever heard: 


im going to slash and gash,
rip another hole in your ass.
I'll smear blood on the walls
and then play tennis with your balls,
and if the phone rings don't answer the caLL.
im going to slit yo throat, fuk u like a goat
i'LL rip yo fore skin off and make a winter coat.
im the dennis surpise,
scoop out both of youre eyes.
PEACE!

   

you don reach here abi?

oya this is for you and one coward

[i]you dont know how sick you make me
you make me bleeping sick to my stomach
everytime i think fo you i puke[/i]by eminem

Drop some luv? I thot I did d last time/
oh, u didn't notice? Ok, that's fine/
here's another//
pull up to crib wit a bride price dat scare ya motha/
entice ur daddy,
upgrade ya family/
and its not even a caddie,
just a toyota camry!!!/
lol.

I man, u dey vex o.
Kaydee, u no go kick som?

a toyota camry how about a hummer jeep

odada Iman don scatter ur thread  



aight Papi a bride price i dnt need
just say the words , and i'll be right dere
till death do us part
what God has joined together
let no man put assunder
love's the name and $ex's da game
lets get down and get some lil mes and yous

Nah! Mami, I ain't ready for seeds/
but as for d sex, meet me at Eko hotel, lounge 1, room 23/
betta yet meet me at Sheraton/
U'll be in d clouds n' u ain't even a seraphim/. Ha!

Po Deep

Odada go kill you today

Odada musta gone nutso by now. Lol

v1
Things ain't been the same
since you went away,
everything I did to hurt you
I never shoulda been that way.
'n' I know I
took your love for granted
whatever's in ma head,
why couldn't I understand.
Said I know I make mistakes
I chase away
a love I can't replace.

ch.

Baby, baby, baby,
I can't live without you
lady,lady,lady
my whole life is all about you
so come back


that's like a verse in one of my unrecorded songs. But since I always try to enforce copyright, how we wan take do am?


Or try:

v1
lately,
I been thinking
baby I miss you.
I been crying
so lonely
lady I need you.
Pick up that phone
I been calling
girl I been hurting.

ch.

So come back
cos I need your love
come back
gimme some more
come back
cos am hooked on you
and I don't wanna live without you.

Come back
free ma heart
come back
come hold me now
come back
cos I can't sleep
till am in your arms again.


The problem we are going to have here is that of copyright again. Maybe you could just sing it out very loud, then you'd simply whisper "copyright denex 2007"

Where errbody go?

Where errbody go?