Winter whelming breeze
postboxes covered in white
flowing rivers freezed

#folorunsho_Iyanuoluwa

Aiyamrex:
Winter breeze
postboxes covered in white
rivers freezed

#folorunsho_Iyanuoluwa

how is this a haiku?

joseph1832:
how is this a haiku?

i posted this same poem in allpoetry some minutes before i did here without the inscription 'HAIKU' Kevin himself and 5 others made a comment using the word haiku. . .
same applicable when i posted it in FFP forums, Davidf and 2 others used the word haiku to compliment the poem.

so to your question. . .
its an haiku because it follows the mora of 5-7-5 phrases.
howbeit, nt all haikus follows the 5,7,5 procedure, nt all. . . So can u tell me why its nt an haiku please?

Aiyamrex:

i posted this same poem in allpoetry some minutes before i did here without the inscription 'HAIKU' Kevin himself and 5 others made a comment using the word haiku. . .
same applicable when i posted it in FFP forums, Davidf and 2 others used the word haiku to compliment the poem.

so to your question. . .
its an haiku because it follows the mora of 5-7-5 phrases.
howbeit, nt all haikus follows the 5,7,5 procedure, nt all. . . So can u tell me why its nt an haiku please?

obviously from what you've just said, the people who told you it's a Haiku know little or nothing of what a haiku poem is.

Before I tell you why it's not a haiku, can you please show me the 5,7,5 syllable structure in your supposed haiku?

Thank you.

joseph1832:
obviously from what you've just said, the people who told you it's a Haiku know little or nothing of what a haiku poem is.

Before I tell you why it's not a haiku, can you please show me the 5,7,5 syllable structure in your supposed haiku?

Thank you.

thank u sir
you said kevin who lectures people on poetry knows little or nothing about haiku. . . I concur, it may be true.
but u got all wrong when u called a 'mora' syllable

Aiyamrex:


thank u sir
you said kevin who lectures people on poetry knows little or nothing about haiku. . . I concur, it may be true.
but u got all wrong when u called a 'mora' syllable

guy. You did not write a haiku. End of story.

http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html

Read and learn and know your Kevin or whatever his name is knows jack sh1t about haiku.

Thanks for the critism, lets check out what your shadowpoetry stores in its containers. . . :p

joseph1832:
guy. You did not write a haiku. End of story.

http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html

Read and learn and know your Kevin or whatever his name is knows jack sh1t about haiku.

dear teacher, after surveying your shadowpoetry. . . I have the courage my poem

"winter breeze
postboxes covered in white
rivers freezed"
is a haiku. . .
if you do nt concur, tell me why its nt then i will tell you why it is from the article on the website you gave. . .

i urge you to go learn more about haiku sir, those articles ain't enough for you sir

joseph1832:
obviously from what you've just said, the people who told you it's a Haiku know little or nothing of what a haiku poem is.

Before I tell you why it's not a haiku, can you please show me the 5,7,5 syllable structure in your supposed haiku?

Thank you.

from the example given from the link u shared

"Winter sun
a cyclist pedals
against the wind"

show me the 5-7-5 syllable structure. . .

then i'll continue why my poem is a haiku

Aiyamrex:

from the example given from the link u shared

"Winter sun
a cyclist pedals
against the wind"

show me the 5-7-5 syllable structure. . .

then i'll continue why my poem is a haiku

go and sit down. You obviously don't know anything and you can't even comprehend simple things.

joseph1832:
go and sit down. You obviously don't know anything and you can't even comprehend simple things.

dear sir, don't give savage replies 'cus a typical human who probably is not thinking from their belly down deep below will understand my question

joseph1832:
guy. You did not write a haiku. End of story.

http://shadowpoetry.com/resources/haiku/haiku.html

Read and learn and know your Kevin or whatever his name is knows jack sh1t about haiku.

dubiously correcting what you obviously know zero about. . .

if you are not afraid of your obvious failure and won't wait to sink in your stupor of ITK
then answer where the progression of 5,7,5 syllables is used in your example

(winter sun
a cyclist pedals
against the winds)

if you have another point from this syllable thing, say it. . . But i bet your failure is strangling you now