ok, this is how we do it. all ya'll gotta do is continue the poem i have started and make it good.
lets see if the nairalanders hav the ability to make good poetry.

good luck!


this is it: my heart is bleeding because you're leaving

Leaving me has already created a vacuum in my heart and life, it's like a stab in the heart.

Every second I am happy I will never see you again, but I understand life is precious as friends.

why do u seek to do me so. hav i not not been hurt enough?

So I have to let you know, my life has always been rough

But wherever you are and wherever I go, I'll always be there for you.

I put my faith in you, and pray for you in all you do

I'll lay my heart open
I'll stand by the truth
cos if I can't take my chances,
then this love is no good.

IMHO

y'all had lost the rhythmn at the 2^nd and 3^rd lines. . .
it'd have come out sweeter if y'all had gone for rhymes. . . that starter-line's tailor made for that!