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Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 1:49pm On Dec 06, 2021
Mine ❤❤

Held within,
Shackles and chains I dwell
My oppressors... captors
Holding me so I may not reach that place;
A place I long to be
And wish never to leave
One that flows with milk and honey
Having lavender and rose grace its wondrous sight
But now I'm held
My dreams may never be

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 1:50pm On Dec 06, 2021
It's been long embarassed embarassed
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 1:51pm On Dec 06, 2021
So long.
Drop yours, guys kiss I know you got it in you wink
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Falzan: 2:41pm On Dec 06, 2021
Born into bondage i vow to bring change i strike with rage to break all cage

my rage was vain for i failed to bring desired change and thing remain thesame as my rage fade into old age

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 3:08pm On Dec 06, 2021
Falzan:
Born into bondage
i vow to bring change
i strike with rage
to break all cage


my rage was vain
for i failed to bring desired change
and thing remain thesame
as my rage fade into old age

Wow shocked. This is really nice kiss kiss

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Jayzel: 4:59pm On Dec 07, 2021
A LOVE POEM DEDICATED TO ALL THE LADIES OUT THERE WHO STOOD FIRM BESIDE THEIR MEN AT THE TRYING TIME'S
You changed my world, even when things were rough
You stood firm right beside me and gave me an helping hand
You made my dream world became reality
You never gave up on me, even if i fail a hundred times u still supported me
Your beautiful smile shine like the blue sky at day
A woman of good virtue bless with an unique statue
When sorrow came my way ur pretty face brighted up my mood
How can i pay u dearly for all u gave to me ?
Can my love be compare to ur's ?
I pray HEAVEN help's me to be the man behind ur happiness

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by masterpiecer(m): 1:49am On Dec 08, 2021
I remember that i forgot
I forgot to remember you and the memories you bring
The ones that curl around my head and whirl
Persisting beyond a while
Occupying where they ought not
Invaders of still small moments
Intruders of cheer and gleefulness
Oh what a staunch display of willfulness
Tomorrow is a day's walk from today
I will set out at first taste of dawn
You will follow like a king's pawn
I will hollow my head again
Until nothing remains of you
A perfect state of oblivion
The disassembly of union
Me, you and nothing
Until nothing is between me and you.


ⓒMasterpiecer

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 7:42pm On Dec 08, 2021
masterpiecer:
I remember that i forgot
I forgot to remember you and the memories you bring
The ones that curl around my head and whirl
Persisting beyond a while
Occupying where they ought not
Invaders of still small moments
Intruders of cheer and gleefulness
Oh what a staunch display of willfulness
Tomorrow is a day's walk from today
I will set out at first taste of dawn
You will follow like a king's pawn
I will hollow my head again
Until nothing remains of you
A perfect state of oblivion
The disassembly of union
Me, you and nothing
Until nothing is between me and you.


ⓒMasterpiecer

Wow!
Damn!
Double damns! You three nailed it kiss kiss
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 7:43pm On Dec 08, 2021
Jayzel:
A LOVE POEM DEDICATED TO ALL THE LADIES OUT THERE WHO STOOD FIRM BESIDE THEIR MEN AT THE TRYING TIME'S
You changed my world, even when things were rough
You stood firm right beside me and gave me an helping hand
You made my dream world became reality
You never gave up on me, even if i fail a hundred times u still supported me
Your beautiful smile shine like the blue sky at day
A woman of good virtue bless with an unique statue
When sorrow came my way ur pretty face brighted up my mood
How can i pay u dearly for all u gave to me ?
Can my love be compare to ur's ?
I pray HEAVEN help's me to be the man behind ur happiness

Awn. This is touching cry
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Jayzel: 8:16pm On Dec 08, 2021
Jaylynn:

Awn. This is touching cry
Lol, this is just a tip of an icebreg

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by masterpiecer(m): 10:34pm On Dec 08, 2021
Jaylynn:


Wow!
Damn!
Double damns! You three nailed it kiss kiss
Tnx.
Its been a while i wrote ( though i always love to)
This thread was just d spur.
I love it.

By the way, i titled it "Unwanted"

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 10:21pm On Dec 09, 2021
Jayzel:

Lol, this is just a tip of an icebreg
Whoo. I'm looking forward to reading more smiley
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 10:22pm On Dec 09, 2021
masterpiecer:

Tnx.
Its been a whike i wrote ( though i always love to)
This thread was just d spur.
I love it.

By the way, i titled it "Unwanted"

Really? You used the word 'was'. What happened?
Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by masterpiecer(m): 11:21pm On Dec 09, 2021
Jaylynn:


Really? You used the word 'was'. What happened?

Yeah, cos immediately i saw the topic, i was elated and as i wrote the first line of that poem, the flow just came. There wasnt any form of premedition rather it was spontaneous and i love it wink.

Also i would love to write some more, but sometimes i get done with the poem before titling it, dont you think that's weird? embarassed

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Re: Hey Guys. Let's All Create Poems. Check Thread by Nobody: 4:18pm On Dec 10, 2021
masterpiecer:


Yeah, cos immediately i saw the topic, i was elated and as i wrote the first line of that poem, the flow just came. There wasnt any form of premedition rather it was spontaneous and i love it wink.

Also i would love to write some more, but sometimes i get done with the poem before titling it, dont you think that's weird? embarassed








Awwn, I'm happy to have made the flow come. And, oh, I don't think it's weird cheesy Nah. It happens... believe me wink

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