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Please Critique This Work by bigangel4u(m): 8:16pm On Feb 15, 2012 |
Kindly help me critique the lyric below. I've titled it 'I Know'. Don't forget to comment on my punctuation too. Thanks. Atheists say God doesn’t exist, But I know this is all false―Nature points to the Deity. Agnostics hold that we can’t be sure if there’s God, But I know this isn’t true―God is so visible we can’t doubt His existence. Evolutionists uphold that life is the product of some mindless process, But I know this is a fallacy―all life bears the hallmarks of design. Cosmologists posit that some blind process gave birth to the universe, But I know this isn’t so―fine-tuning suggests there’s a Creator. Exponents argue that the universe is pointless, But I know this is specious―cosmos displays God’s infinite wisdom and might. Cryonicists have us believe we could escape from the clutches of Death, But I know this is an idealized notion―death is the ultimate destiny of all life. Extremists claim their belief systems approve of violence, But I know this is dubious―pacificism is a thread common to all religions. Critics say the Bible doesn’t hang together, But I know this is untenable―the Bible has always withstood rigorous scrutiny. They think the Bible is obsolete, But I know it’s not―Scripture is a cornucopia of timeless truths. I know I don’t know much, but this little I know is much true― And that’s what matters most. |
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