To the mad bard
all the year mad
who gives the no peace
through all his piece.
The world has come to expect
he gives only disrespect.
I cook my audio
in the studio

Nice...but to be blunt, for you to be taken as a serious writer, you must be learn to make your poems have an obvious symmetry. Orderliness can be attained when there is an easy flow of rythm and ryhme in a poem. Especially rhyme, it enhances the harmony,chronology, lyricism and the beauty of a poem. Your ryhmes are quite good, but looks rather like that of nursery rhymes. Good work!