sinizia:

Noted. What made it not "rappatic"?

rap - noun/ rappatic - adjective I coined it

sinizia:
What are y'all? School kids writing childish texts?// these BS y'all are dropping are way too basic// it can't even leave me Red with anger if this was an alkaline test//...

I'm the Dòpest on this terrain, but I'm yet to be arrested with drug// I'm evil, my bars leaves you lonely like R.Kelly, you'll be asking heaven for a hug// This talent 'comes' naturally, it's inborn, as if I'm climàxing without a shrug//...

Bìtches, I'm back to take my crown// This is a chess game, I'm the king and y'all the pawn// if y'all object, imma murk y'all fast, dump your bodies into the ocean and sentence y'all to live the life of a prawn//...

I've got a dark soul but I'm no jezebel// y'all pùssies keep coming at me with alternate monikers like y'all are switching record labels// verily verily i say unto y'all, "on the day 666, y'all dark sinners won't get raptured, but rather be turned into a hell bound rebels//...

it's a suicidal decision// sparring with me, i kill without hesitation// my gat shoots with sound clarity, i kill with sharp precision// and i do all these without cum mission// because I don't need to órgasm in holy ground before i kill in a mission//.. (Cùm mission = commission. Mission = Church)

What's my biz (business) with O'bis? (Ibime)// we've got something in common? Nigga please!!// I'm hale, hearty, fit and slim, O'bis is fat and Obese// if there's anything in common between us, it's the monthly subscription for his BB which he collects from me, and i call it a BIS!!//

Nota bene: this last part is not a disrespect to Ibime, just dropping some writtens trying to show I've got what it takes to be in that tourney. That's all.

Cc: Darkrebel666, Emaprince, 007bruce, Kr0ne.


How was these frees?

first, you are an intelligent dude.
I see you and remember ksslib when he was a newbie. The pontential was glaring but just needed a regular visits and writtens to upgrade and become a force to be reckoned with. Ksslib took every advices onboard and now, look at him.

Battle criteria

Opener
Rhymes
Punchline
Wordplay
Metarphors/similies
Personal
Closer

Beginners should focus on rhyming perfectly first. Your rhymes are cool but they can't defeat your opponent's. What you are doing now is monosyllabic rhymes. Those will make your verses look poor. You need to try doing multies. You can start with 3syllables...e.g

Snatch your queen
A-ttack your team
Stash the green
Knack to win

Start from there, then you can add creativity to it. Remember you have metarphors, wordplays there. So, you need to make your punches to have some kind of double meaning.

Emaprince schooling em
Siniza, you remind me a lot about Ksslib. Nice bars, just keep it constant, bro.

kr0ne:
Emaprince schooling em

wetin?

I need to get him link to the ofoka school of rap.

Emaprince:
first, you are an intelligent dude.
I see you and remember ksslib when he was a newbie. The pontential was glaring but just needed a regular visits and writtens to upgrade and become a force to be reckoned with. Ksslib took every advices onboard and now, look at him.

Battle criteria

Opener
Rhymes
Punchline
Wordplay
Metarphors/similies
Personal
Closer

Beginners should focus on rhyming perfectly first. Your rhymes are cool but they can't defeat your opponent's. What you are doing now is monosyllabic rhymes. Those will make your verses look poor. You need to try doing multies. You can start with 3syllables...e.g

Snatch your queen
A-ttack your team
Stash the green
Knack to win

Start from there, then you can add creativity to it. Remember you have metarphors, wordplays there. So, you need to make your punches to have some kind of double meaning.

baba pls explain all dis things for me

Monosyllabic
3syllables
multis

Emaprince:
first, you are an intelligent dude.
I see you and remember ksslib when he was a newbie. The pontential was glaring but just needed a regular visits and writtens to upgrade and become a force to be reckoned with. Ksslib took every advices onboard and now, look at him.

Battle criteria

Opener
Rhymes
Punchline
Wordplay
Metarphors/similies
Personal
Closer

Beginners should focus on rhyming perfectly first. Your rhymes are cool but they can't defeat your opponent's. What you are doing now is monosyllabic rhymes. Those will make your verses look poor. You need to try doing multies. You can start with 3syllables...e.g

Snatch your queen
A-ttack your team
Stash the green
Knack to win

Start from there, then you can add creativity to it. Remember you have metarphors, wordplays there. So, you need to make your punches to have some kind of double meaning.

Alright. So basically a multi-syllabic rhymming involves rhymming for long, say have like 4 rhymes before ending with a punchline?

Also, can you point out with an example what is methaphor/similies? I know the rest, and i can drop multi-syllabic rhymming, i just felt like i might need those bars for the tournament proper. But i'll try to drop something tight, and see how I'm rated.

007Bruce:

rap - noun/ rappatic - adjective
I coined it

LOL. I get it now. Just coming in now, battery low, but once i charge, i'll drop something.

kr0ne:
Emaprince schooling em
Siniza, you remind me a lot about Ksslib. Nice bars, just keep it constant, bro.

Thanks bro. I guess I'm making a progress.

lol... Ask around.. I am the best teacher in town.. Just that am dime busy these days...

ok
been a while.

hav qot knives to slip throat/ dey shud come in thousands. .the oloshis and real foes/
. . .if it's on mic. .den am killing wit sick flows/
cos in here am the "THE GIANT" you cn call me big show!!!/

it's not a mere talk ..wen u hear the gee is higher/
y'all re jews. .u all re like greek re.tarded/
I heard his strong. . .challenge me and wotch I rip his spinal/
breaking news!!!
check the newspaper. . .ve killed his parents. .now I ve killed THE GUARDIAN!!!/

now the news qon be spreading that richard iz a killer/ . .he has killed the parents. .now he has killed the nigger/
that's too way meaner/
and if they continue spreading rumours "I GO GIVE EM ONE" and wotch em qet small like BATURE's SNICKER!!!/


#YOLO

#YOLO

my mental fuckkked/...I render words.../higher than what your self acclaimed veteran drops/ rapping is not a menial job/ but a pinch of salt to a schizophrenic dawg../ I am trapped in my bicameral world/ now barred from reality as I start telepathic communications with gods/ a journey to a divine being...first flight to a higher self/ aiming for the stars with a misile n a harrier jet/ a derange maniac yes/ you got an heart of gold...lets see if you'll pass a surgical fire test/ divinity by force../ is called thoughtograph when the picture in my head appear on a photographic plate/ in seconds you an empty slate/ when i hack your mind n wipe your memory till you back to your baby days/ I could construct the future in many ways/ this is no bluff....but a product of an expanded consciousness/ an illuminated mind digging out the teleology in nothingness/ am unto something deep...and my plot is real/ aim is to bring men to the awareness that they are the gods they seek/ and all the answers they seek can be found within/ I race a strong regime/ cos have always seeked for something more than the mob thinking/ n there is nothing more than becoming god indeed/ and it doesnt matter if I wore a skin/ long as this mind is liberated from unpolished things/ this guru chakras are opened...all boundries collapsed/ now I dwell in the r=0 domain with albert Einstein n pythagoras/ with the writing on the wall..."paranormal existence is not a proverb"/ yall cease being mortal/ stop seeking the normal.../ close your eyes n see beyond the portal/ is effortless n yet require intense n sophisticated methodism/ deeper than hypnosis...the ability to transfer demons to an exorcist/ the last breed of phosters and archons/ refusing the 5% leading the army to actions../ the fight is massive...the die is cast inside in a large sea/ I'm outlandish. ..on the appolo side of reasoning/ breaking free from the circus of unenlightenment via a spiritual escape velocity.

I'm in again with fain-pain //and wid lyrics that wrecks and maim-lames//bringing the anguish and pain//rip ya medulla outta ya brain//knocking you insane//my "stiles" nefarious,,,,,,,i help rivals "meet 'em death" wid a twist-of-neck//STYLES,,,,,,,,, those who battle me never "grab a winning chance",,,,,,,,,'cause i don't relent to de-part 'em wrist-wid-wrecks//knock ya eyeballs outta it's sockets//got ya kidney in my pockets//put a view through ya chest wid holes thrusts by my bullets//watch as rhymes disseminate circular 'round ur ocular,,,,,,,, fracture ur fibula and torso,,,,,,, perpend perpendicular//u fuckin' wid a homicidal-lunatic ,,,a lyrical-bandit//incriminated for bloodthirsty verses,,,,,,, front and get ur phalanges ripped in pieces//I'm sicker than Ebola catching-plaques,,,,,, quick to snatch-ya-rest with a smash-of-tecs//i quash-wid-wrecks that expands ya lungs with strong punches,,, get ya brain trapped like rats cunning wheels//I'm amazing-wid-skills//striking bars that's blazing-to-kill//the vesicular is understandable//slang botanical,,,,,,, dig y heart outta ya chest like excavation o multiracial valuable//like the wu-tangs,,,,, it's best you protect-y-neck//or i'ma get ur vocals cord disconnect-wid-wreaks//u feeling the mad hostile,,,,, wearing aeropostale//flowing like the disciples preaching the get gospel//

I don wack die



My style is superlative/my culture is to nab ya soul and stick it in a bad native/
I'm the real hip-hop gangster. . You niggaz are fake, kukere dancers/ I no it gon sound stup1d when I say DJ and emaprince are two faded masters/

sosiqdude:
I don wack die



My style is superlative/my culture is to nab ya soul and stick it in a bad native/
I'm the real hip-hop gangster. . You niggaz are fake, kukere dancers/ I no it gon sound stup1d when I say DJ and emaprince are two faded masters/

one thing fishy about d bytch is!!
he seek attention but we dnt give em/den flips out ten shot but we still dnt need em/take a turn n 'hit d road' cos ladies now despise u/other niggs got bytches carved frm deir bones.... something similar bou u n em hoes??u a bytch cos u 'd side 2'....
.
.
for d fun nigg

Gladyys:

one thing fishy about d bytch is!!
he seek attention but we dnt give em/den flips out ten shot but we still dnt need em/take a turn n 'hit d road' cos ladies now despise u/other niggs got bytches carved frm deir bones.... something similar bou u n em hoes??u a bytch cos u 'd side 2'....
.
.
for d fun nigg

This girl self!

Daphantom:


These unique bars/ school these f,,ag$/ but Dj and Air' . . relations of 'camilo' . . so they 'Zoo nigg.a$'!/

if i find him in 'plane ' sight!/

Expecting dolt to fling bars that are golden/generic stuffs, init 'Anini of rap' boasting/
he gat no 'elements' of craft molding/no 'a tom' of truth, caught with bars, he has stolen!!!/
i wonder who advised this ga,y to face me/his lines aint hot, always stay freeze/
if his friends rock to pay the lame's fee/this camel won't still play in the main stream/
Tom is forever bitter, the guy is poor/take him to minnesota, question is 'Can D shops'?/
or pour him honey like 6 cups/like the title of some obituaries, its 'DA big loss'!!!/
This copycat wanna mimmick we proud gees/ disappeared when DJ quickly pouched him/talking of mcs with rap skills/
we skip DA man like avoiding a city in Saudi!!!/
None of his lines are haymakers/they so boring, kinda space wasters/
if he had kept his bars only on plain paper/ we would have honoured him as FFR page saver!!!/


advised elimax to go for a year session, gee has gone/Daphantom learn from the last 2 pages that's fun/
if you still wack after all EMA's puns/you should charge your brain for non-support....and do justice with a gun!!!/

That G messin' ma name with outspoken pun/ should know I leave femcees with a swollen mounds/
Aint artificials when I dart “metal” on ya breasts like n.ipples as The Man with the “Golden” Gun/

Never forgot why u stole slogan son/ I remember u don't diss properly/
If Sosiq think I won't recall his loss to gotto, him go "old to death" pass "Christopher Lee!!"/

We used the light to keep watch as a maiguard/ burn till the drake flared/
with his remains in the 'basin', dump the body in a 'lake charred!'/

With different moves, how they've configured this cat/ butterfly stroke, sidestroke, im sick @ that/
Like a swimmer who killed, most wanted freestyler, ima hybrid of David Sweat n Richard Matt/

Obsessed with the wordies I fire n return/ they want D guns/
U'd think they need 'ammo' the way 'em Iraqi forces come dey ask of 'we puns!'/

u know nothin' bout alphabet, talkless of another persons' free/ bearin' the name of ya dad means ya still learnin' gee/
Walter De Gregorio Jnr, mock him with jokes 'till he “leaves seat” as if he was “urgin' to pee!!”/

They lackin' that special crank/ this like Styl Plus crew with one member outta the several flank/
no Zeal to spar again, their 'interest rate cut' to the level of 'S.Korea central bank!'/

Sit, look around while we move and agree/ than pigs in the back of a taxi/
So 'dirty', after washin' off at the shore, u turned the beach into a 'Black' Sea/