nice story wit great lessons

Joy189:
Am gud, hw was ur nyt?

Twas Blissful, Though I Slept A Lil Bit Late, Was Watching A Movie

ClassCaptain:
Clemzy16. ..God Bless you for the Superb., Well coordinated. engagingly interesting and full of suspense... Am really enjoying it so much..

waiting for d updates ....

But class captain e don tey ooh.miss your own stories.thumps up to you @clemzy

......9......

Thirty minutes later, Nancy arrived back home from the market where she had gone to purchase some food items. As she stepped into the room, she saw what appeared like a lifeless figure lying on the floor, and the person looked exactly like her aunt. She moved closer to her aunt who appeared to be sleeping on the floor while her room was vacant. After several attempts to get her to talk, all her efforts proved abortive.

Nancy became scared when she couldn't resuscitate her aunt back to life, then she started screaming for help. Her persistent wailing seemed to have attracted the attention of neighbours who ran into the house, in a bid to ascertain what the problem was; About four men and three women ran inside at approximately the same time, and met Nancy crying while holding on to her aunt who remained unconscious.

They kept asking millions of questions which Nancy couldn't provide an answer to, then they figured it was best to rush her to the hospital. One of the men sprung up to get his car key, and they bundled her inside the vehicle, and then, they rushed her to the University of Benin teaching hospital (UBTH) at Ugbowo, which is barely a kilometre drive from the university.

Mrs. Osadolor was admitted on arrival, and taken to the emergence ward, the doctor confirmed that she was in a severe coma, then she was put on life support. A phone call had to be put to her husband, an immigration officer who was based at Abuja, the federal capital territory.

Mr. Efosa Osadolor flew to the Benin airport in about two hours time, and he got to the hospital to meet his wife in a critical state. The doctor informed him that his wife suffered internal bleeding which appeared to emanate from physical brawl. The only way they could get to know who did it - is if she survived to give a first-hand explanation of the matter. The doctor then assured Mr. Osadolor that he had good news and bad news respectively. The good news being that she would recover from the coma, and the bad news being that she lost a three weeks old pregnancy, after being childless for ten years.

Mr. Osadolor was almost in tears after seeing the situation that is wife was going through, he was so vexed that he couldn't wait to know who had brought so much pain on his family. The person was definitely going to regret his or her actions.

Nancy narrated the little she knew about the incident to him, but there wasn't enough evidence to know the culprit.

Later that day, she woke up under intensive care to behold herself on an hospital bed, while drips were placed on strategic parts of her body. The doctor, her husband and Nancy were there to comfort her, but the doctor warned them not to disturb her until she was strong enough to talk.

Mr. Osadolor had put a call through to the then Commissioner of Police in Benin, who was his childhood friend to assist him with policemen to guard over her while in the hospital so that the suspect(s) don't come back to finish her, knowing she was the only one who could expose them.

The next day, she spoke for the first time since her collapse, and her health was getting better. She narrated the whole story to her husband from the very beginning, and right there, Nancy received a deadly military slap from her uncle-in-law who also act as her father. It took the intervention of the policemen on guard, before he let go of her, after his wife started crying and pleading that she not Nancy, was supposed to be blamed for not nurturing her daughter in the right way, otherwise, Nancy wouldn't have aborted for a guy three times, and even get pregnant for him the fourth time.

The hospital ward was turned into a drama theatre, as Nancy went on her knees begging her father in tears, but he refused to yield to her pleas, insisting that she must abort the child, whom he called a bastard.

The doctor intervened into the matter in a calm way and excused furious Mr. Osadolor to his office, and then advised him to revert his decision on Nancy, stating that she was prone to losing her life, considering the fact that the pregnancy had already matured, and it wouldn't be appropriate should he lose his only child left, after his wife had also lost a baby. Two wrongs they say don't make a right.

Mr. Osadolor had a re-think about his decision and forgave Nancy, but melted out serious punishment to her, plus the fact that she was gonna be grounded for a very long time.

Nancy's case was solved, but the equation wasn't balanced yet. Nosa was next-in-line.........

Great story packed with lessons. Ride on

Oboy tis story sweet oooo.nosa u are in a big soup.even buhari sef no fit save u oooo.

........10........

Very early the next morning, around 3:00am, while people were still asleep, men of the Nigerian police force drove their Hilux vehicle into Nosa's lodge in commando style, and they were well armed with assorted rifles.

They launched a mega-phone, and commanded Nosa to step outside of his room, with his hands placed upon his head in the next two seconds, or they'll be forced to take him down in a way that he would never had imagined. How is it - even possible for him to come out in two seconds, well, Nigerian police will always be Nigerian police.

Nosa woke up and heard his name being called out by the police, he didn't know why he was about to be arrested, since he had not committed any crime, or so he thought. Anyway, he dressed up comfortably and came out as commanded. When the policemen saw that he had opened the door entrance, they rushed towards him and bundled him to the ground. While some of the men were busy 'deafning' him with some blows, another managed to put a handcufs on his hands. People in the neighbourhood who noticed what was happening to him, started staring through their various windows. Most of them thought he was a Yahoo boy as regard his ostentatious lifestyle, and that Nemesis had finally caught up with him.

The policemen carried him into their vehicle and drove him to the nearest police division, but not after they had sprayed bullets in the air to make people aware that they came. Later that morning, they put him inside their vehicle again and started parading him to the various residence of his partners in crime, and got all of them arrested. By this time, he had been dealt with severely and had bruises all over his body, the remaining guys were not left out, as they were equally dealt with. After the incident happened, they all went back home to relax thinking that the Lecturer was pretending, they obviously took the matter with levity, what they didn't know was that they made her lose her first ever biological child, eventhough, she was already in her late 30s, while she almost lost her life too. They had committed a grave offence, and the law wasn't going to take it likely with them.

The news about their arrest circulated around the school, and when it reached the senate building, they were all rusticated from school, except Emmy, Ochuko and Badmus. Nosa who was a Law student in the varsity was rusticated in his final year in school. The 24yr-old Nosa was later charged to court, together with his accomplies. He was charged on three-count of coercing a juvenile to commit abortion for him, attempted kidnapping, and the murder of an unborn child. According to the constitution of the Federal Republic of Nigeria, he was sentence to six years imprisonment with hard labour. The remaining five suspects were given option of bail; except Nosa who was the main culprit. Even his fathers' wealth couldn't stop him from going to prison.

Nosa accepted the verdict with good fate, as he was taken to Oko prison where he was meant to live for the rest six years of his life...........

Nosa..., nosa, i pity u small shy, hope u can handle d situation wit dis militry man... Any way, u go carry ur cross, 9ic story,... Waiting mood activated

shumuel:
let me read first, coming

welcome shumuel...

Temitopehleb:
Kasala don burst o. That is too awful from Nosa's guys. But Baba charge your phone make u give us updates o. You too much.

Tnkz Temi.. I've updated

Gracito:
I no be mod, but please mention me in subsequent updates. Biko thanks! It's an awesome story by the way!

Roger that!

cc: Gracito

refiner:
can't wait ooo..clemzy16....kudos to u dear...u av got d brain...pls don't keep us in suspense...

you're welcome ma'am

You referred to a girl above 20 a minor. In what universe is she a minor?

Gbadegesin19:
We waiting oh oga clemZy.....

Beautiful story.

You need not wait any longer...

Adonis3:
Wow... Nice story I must confess, kept me awake.

Oga clemzy16, if na my moniker u want come and collect it, GOD bless you
Abeg try to mention me in subsequent updates... Need to follow up this story.

Buh lemme ask, do u have the story down already or u write as the insipiration comes?

Ok...

cc: Adonis3

I used to write as the inspiration comes, but I have this one already scripted down... I wrote everything under 4days, that's from Dec 26-39, 2015..

Hnmmh...dis story got my attention...nice one

4rmthewest:
Chai dis stowi dey interesting no b small oo.....errm ehn egbon clemzy, abeg if na battery you want come and collect ooo.....#okkbye

Lol... That wouldn't be necessary.. *opens teeth*

Madamkilljoy:
Clemzy oh, come and complete this sweet tori. *Spreads camp bed* Abeg, who dey sell pop corn?

Lekinz is the pop-corn seller, he'll be here very soon...

MrsPhyno:
Pleasure and Pain, two of Decker 's favourites

Omg that's why it's good to read the OP's post b4 commenting.... I thought this was gonna be poetry

You guessed wrong....

You're welcome Mrsphyno

sexymonkey:
Egbon clemzy16 please come and complete the story.

Ok ma... The last update will come in a bit...

onyi2016:
Don't tell me dat u are sleeping.Finish it.

Hehehe... I neva wanted to sleep, na my bat3 low..

McPicnic:
Mhen oga Clemzy16 you're too much, I can't help but to comment. Keep it rolling bro

Thanks man..

onunwa21:

U wan become Uche Jumbo or Nkem Owoh

It's not my fault bro... We're advised as writers to always put that caveat at the beginning of every story in this section.. It's part of Nairaland rules.. Thanks!

Richnero:
Oga clemzy oya naw........ Come and continue ur tori

No wahala.. At ur service..

812clothings:
Nice story line bruh, take your time to check before posting to correct typo-errors,wrong spelling/usage of words e.t.c

Thanks alot.. I'll do better next time..

kindy51:
Abeg clemsy notify me on your next update

I'll do just that..

fitness1:
Wow! I'm amazed that you stereotyped this as "A Short Story"..

Lol.. Is it that long?

boxypane:
Better come n finish wetin u start OooOooo

No problemo.. The last update dey warm up..

ezimo777:
I will rather say this Nancy of a girl have killed her aunt ooo!
Bad condition volume 13

You can say that again..

Kesmakveli:
Good Write up so far Sir Clemz. Please I wouldnt mind putting on my generator for you o!!!! Weldone brother. #MoreGrace

Awww.. I'm so touched.. God bless you sir!

Goldpeas:
sir clemz.... I'm waiting for the update on what happened after NANCY'S aunt collapsed

Nice write up Bro

I've done that bro...