starpryde:
It been a while I had time to read a novel (Once a hobby), but this story have re-ignite this passion again. Op I have to say Thank you and congratulation.

I should thank you too for reading, and to everyone else who took out time to read this story.. God bless you all...

Clemzy16:
Yes I did. Slept like a baby.

Irony!!...The Baby That You're Not . Anyways, That's Good To Know...How's The Noon Going?

Clemzy16:
Not at all.. It's all fiction..

hmmm,nyc 1 bro

Every story line was a hit from pleasure to pain to marriage streeti take ova

Every story line was a hit from pleasure to pain to marriage... streeti take ova

Clemzy16 tanks 4 sharing dis wonderful piece i enjoy every bit of it & i learnt alot. I wish 2 also commend u on how u started & ended dis story within a very short period,d regular updates & everything well done,may God bless& increase u sir.

Nancywill:

Irony!!...The Baby That You're Not . Anyways, That's Good To Know...How's The Noon Going?

Very well my dear, though, I'm not a baby, but I'm not old either...

How u doin?

virtuedagirl:
Clemzy16 tanks 4 sharing dis wonderful piece i enjoy every bit of it & i learnt alot. I wish 2 also commend u on how u started & ended dis story within a very short period,d regular updates & everything well done,may God bless& increase u sir.

I'm very honoured ma'am...

For the first time in my life, that I'd imagined every scene of a story so real. Nice one Clemzy16.

Egbon clems19.kudos to you.dat was a great job from you.I must commend ur effort frm d vry begining of dis gr8 job.You nailed every part of the fictional story.pls notify me wen you wnt to drop another story

Clemzy16:
Very well my dear, though, I'm not a baby, but I'm not old either...

How u doin?

Perfectly Ok. Hope Yu Ain't Bad Yourself?

jacoik:
guy u did well on this story, at d extreme end of it I didn't know when I started crying. can I have ur mail pls?

lol seriously?

Nancywill:

Perfectly Ok. Hope Yu Ain't Bad Yourself?

I'm doin gr8t...preparing to resume school anytime soon..

Wow,i never knw i could read all but i did,nice write up.Nosa going to prison makes him value Nancy and d daughter.

joefranky:
For the first time in my life, that I'd imagined every scene of a story so real. Nice one Clemzy16.

Jah bless..

Alexiz031:
Egbon clems19.kudos to you.dat was a great job from you.I must commend ur effort frm d vry begining of dis gr8 job.You nailed every part of the fictional story.pls notify me wen you wnt to drop another story

No wahala.. Next story coming up later this year...

Fialm:
Wow,i never knw i could read all but i did,nice write up.Nosa going to prison makes him value Nancy and d daughter.

Yeah! That's why prison is meant for correction...

Clemzy16:
I'm doin gr8t...preparing to resume school anytime soon..

Good to know! That Means You Have To Divert Your Attention From Here To Your Books As Soon As Possible

Clemzy16...i must commend your prose writing style which i have noticed to be quite enticing and appealing to say the least, albeit being the eternal critic that i'd always be; i must point out to you that as much as riveting a tale filled with a lot of moral lessons which this particular story provided. You failed to do justice to it by not undoing the areas filled with typos, misspellings or grammatical gaffes, rather it had seemed you rushed through the story in a bid to satisfy the ever insatiable reading public and your nairaland fans.
I'd have been glad to see you do a refinement on this story but then wouldn't that be tantamount to suffocating the excitement and zest that the readers are having on here?
All the same,the commendations are still in line because you have done well by entertaining us this much. And to that i say...more grease to your refillable ink pen/quill. Kudos!

PS: As a kind of notice, though i haven't really been that active on this section of NL,though for the lack of time i'd have been but I plan on putting up a story of my own pretty much soon, so be on the look out for my story in the coming weeks.

SaintChukz:

Clemzy16...i must commend your prose writing style which i have noticed to be quite enticing and appealing to say the least, albeit being the eternal critic that i'd always be; i must point out to you that as much as riveting a tale filled with a lot of moral lessons which this particular story provided. You failed to do justice to it by not undoing the areas filled with typos, misspellings or grammatical gaffes, rather it had seemed you rushed through the story in a bid to satisfy the ever insatiable reading public and your nairaland fans.
I'd have been glad to see you do a refinement on this story but then wouldn't that be tantamount to suffocating the excitement and zest that the readers are having on here?
All the same,the commendations are still in line because you have done well by entertaining us this much. And to that i say...more grease to your refillable ink pen/quill. Kudos!

PS: As a kind of notice, though i haven't really been that active on this section of NL,though for the lack of time i'd have been but I plan on putting up a story of my own pretty much soon, so be on the look out for my story in the coming weeks.

Thanks for the corrections, I did my best to correct all errors, but maybe I couldn't spot them all.. I'd love if you can be a bit specific, so that I can go back to rectify them.. Looking forward to reading your story..

Nancywill:

Good to know! That Means You Have To Divert Your Attention From Here To Your Books As Soon As Possible

Exactly!!..where do u base tho..

Clemzy16:
Not at all.. It's all fiction..

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wow.....too real for a fiction! what a mighty God who gives this kind of knowledge.....oghene doh!

Clemzy16:
Exactly!!..where do u base tho..

The all-seeing Country Nigeria...Cross River State Precisely

Clemzy16:
.......continuation

ONE YEAR LATER

Nosa, his wife and daughter travelled abroad to the United states of America where they later settled as a family, with the assistance of Mr. Osadolor who made the VISA acquisition quicker.

Nosa then enrolled in the University of Pennsylvania, where he continued his education as an intending lawyer, at the age of thirty.

Nancy became a diplomat at the Nigerian embassy in the United States, and they lived happily ever after.


In life, there's no pleasure without pain, and no pain without pleasure. It doesn't matter which one comes first, because in the end; Love is the answer, nobody really cares what the question is... ...

THE END

This really made ma day buddie as it make me stay glued to ma phone,nice write up and God will bless you for this.

Wow! What a happy ending. More ink to your pen bro. God bless you for us.

Clemzy16:
Watch out for my NEXT STORY!!

We are anticipating for it bro.

Wow! Wow!I'm happy I followed till d end..
dandypearl, demmy66, donkross1, Sageez , if u are not reading this, you are wrong. Lols

Clemzy16, this is great!!!! Keep it up. I love you already

Weldone bro

Clemzy16 you be badoo more power to your elbow!!!

Clemzy16:
Trust Nigerian police. Although, Nancy wasn't entirely a minor, she was 22-yrs old, but the police would always twist everything in favour of the victim, since the culprit was older than her..

Hmmmmmmmm

I hear you

Weldone bro......i kept checkin lit.section cos of ur story.I also love ur consistency.more ink 2ur pen