Good morning to you all.

How was your night? I hope you all slept well. I did.

Just to wish you guys a successful day today...

Stay safe..

this is soooo interesting. Its a great work

ashatoda:
this is soooo interesting. Its a great work

Thanks...glad to know you enjoyed it..

TONYE001:
Muhamadnur, Saxwizard, Lukman, Officialdokkey, Missmossy, Royalexcel2, Summerflame, Osaze20091, enduright, Kizzykeziah, Frankytof, Emmyk, Dera25, 9jaMalay, Queenxstar, Hartfriday, Tastemoney, Lexaydfg, SimpleBea, Kongru, and others too numerous to mention.

Finally, the end is here!

Read and drop your reviews!..

Thanks for your time..

professor tonye ..you're the bomb .....I duff m! hart. but man u 2 knw abt metal o.

TONYE001:


E sweet me as I come know say na play you dey...I nearly want carry cane flog myself for this oversight..

How would you rate this story over 100?

70

lukman885:
professor tonye ..you're the bomb .....I duff m! hart. but man u 2 knw abt metal o.

Thanks bro..

Na research na-him I do o..me no get first hand experience for firearms o...

Vaxt:
70

My first try...and I'm getting a 70? Sure you aren't been too generous?.. Hahahaha..thanks Sir..

Ahahahaha! I said it, Smallie has to die! Sad to "see" him die.

This is just perfect for the story.. This is what the audience don't expect.

I do hope his story will lead to the arrest of Capon! How can he just walk away like that?


"The shooter's was not locked".

The shooter's phone, you didn't include " phone".

Good story sir. I enjoyed every bit of it. More wisdom.
This is going to be cool, adopting it into a movie, what so you say?

I didn't even get to read it from beginning, I just stumbled upon the last episode from a search for a different thing and I couldn't even drop my phone till I finished reading it. Where should I start from, is it from the detailed description of events or from the use of English? Everything was so on point. Thumbs up. I couldn't help but drop a comment.

Emmyk:
Ahahahaha! I said it, Smallie has to die! Sad to "see" him die.

This is just perfect for the story.. This is what the audience don't expect.

I do hope his story will lead to the arrest of Capon! How can he just walk away like that?


"The shooter's was not locked".

The shooter's phone, you didn't include " phone".

Good story sir. I enjoyed every bit of it. More wisdom.
This is going to be cool, adopting it into a movie, what so you say?

My brother, thanks Sir.

A part of me didn't want Capon to be killed by Smallie. The profile just no match I beg.. I understand David killed Goliath but this kind of killing no dey happen everyday na...no be am?

Come to think of it, you know he was badly injured.. Did he survive it? Maybe this is a gist for another day..hahaha..

About the error you noted, thanks..I don correct am sharp sharp..Hahaha..

That movie idea occurred to me. It's highly possible..and it'll make a good movie! If only the means and resources were available..

In all, thanks, Emmyk. You are a nice person.

Stevostical:
I didn't even get to read it from beginning, I just stumbled upon the last episode from a search for a different thing and I couldn't even drop my phone till I finished reading it. Where should I start from, is it from the detailed description of events or from the use of English? Everything was so on point. Thumbs up. I couldn't help but drop a comment.

Thanks for your encouraging review.

God bless you.

If possible, try and read from the start. I'm sure you won't regret it.

Nice day.

TONYE001:
Good morning to you all.
How was your night? I hope you all slept well. I did.
Just to wish you guys a successful day today...
Stay safe..

your write.. inspires ... once again... keep it up

TONYE001:


The pleasure is all mine my brother. I owe you all..you were very patient with me..na you try pass mbok..

Whenever I start another, I shall mention you..

Do have a splendid day Sir...

Thanks sir.

clintonopah:
your write.. inspires ... once again... keep it up

Thanks. I hope to keep it up there..

Thanks for this wonderful piece. Do well to mention me when you start another story.

pgodson7:
Thanks for this wonderful piece. Do well to mention me when you start another story.

Yes Sir!

Thanks for the the story @Tonye

Niwdog:
Thanks for the the story @Tonye

You are welcome Sir..

This is an awesome piece i must confess and it just got me an escape route from boredom

Tonye thanks for sharing.. Not every day we get a privilege of reading through something as nice as this

I'm happy I started it when it's already concluded though

kingphilip:
This is an awesome piece i must confess and it just got me an escape route from boredom

Tonye thanks for sharing.. Not every day we get a privilege of reading through something as nice as this

I'm happy I started it when it's already concluded though

Thanks brother. I appreciate..and thanks to you too for spending your precious time reading this story...

As you read along, I'll be glad is you can criticize the work...

Clintonopah, Queenxstar, Enduright, DandyPearl, Dropshot, Kizzykeziah, JohnEazy.

I observed you didn't follow us to the end.

Hope you don't mind my calling you?

Good morning..

I saw dis story when it hits d front page.it truly worth 2 be recognized. At a point I thot I was reading fast and furious,lol.

I must confess dat dis is a master piece. U are really exceptional. Keep up d good work.Would love 2 write a collaborative story one day with u if u don't mind.

cho25bc:
I saw dis story when it hits d front page.it truly worth 2 be recognized. At a point I thot I was reading fast and furious,lol.

I must confess dat dis is a master piece. U are really exceptional. Keep up d good work.Would love 2 write a collaborative story one day with u if u don't mind.

Hello Cho25bc, thanks for your wonderful comment. I appreciate.

Any time you are ready, it'll be a privilege, I believe, to work with you.

Good morning..

TONYE001:
Clintonopah, Queenxstar, Enduright, DandyPearl, Dropshot, Kizzykeziah, JohnEazy.

I observed you didn't follow us to the end.

Hope you don't mind my calling you?

Good morning..

I followed you ..till the very end

TONYE001:


De nada.

More thanks to you for your time...hope the ending no disappoint you sha? ..

. . . The ending turned out cool. You are blessed, Tonye

teamplayey:


. . . The ending turned out cool. You are blessed, Tonye

Thanks boss!

Hello All,

Good morning.

I'm pleased to announce to you that Condemned is now available at okadabooks.com.

This is the latest edition: refined, edited..and re-edited. Loop holes have been attended to. And guess what? It's got a nice cover!!

I must thank you all for making this possible. Your observations are the major tools used in editing this piece. If I were to pay you for your services, surely, no amount would do.

How much is it? N200.00.

Why buy it when I've seen all here? Well, if you buy it, it implies that you would have an original copy that you can save as long as you want to. Also, it's another way of encouraging me.

To order for it, please go here: http://okadabooks.com/book/about/condemned/11520

God bless you!

Suberb!

Great!
That was fast Op but, it's all good. More grace

muhamadnur:
Suberb!

Thanks bros..

teamplayey:
Great!
That was fast Op but, it's all good. More grace

Thanks, brother...

Thanks..

I followed this story from the beginning, unfollowed it at a point when Mr. tonye was no longer updating it. I found it on the front page of literature section again.

I must acknowledge that it is a VERY nice piece.
God bless you tonye001

however, I noticed a few typos like 'faith' instead of 'fate' in the third and second to the last updates.

p.s, What happened to Capon?

Finally, why is someone chained on the cover page, I thought smallie never went to jail??