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Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:19pm On Jul 27, 2017
Chumzypinky:
Silly Claire!
I jst hate dis girl with everything i've got. Starting from her name, yuck!

Now who you cum like. Amara?
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 10:20pm On Jul 27, 2017
PreshyG:
Chai, Amara! Who did this to you? ??

PamelB's and her pen
Re: United In Betrayal by MrKIDO(m): 12:29am On Jul 28, 2017
Keep it coming dear.. ��
Re: United In Betrayal by muller101(m): 8:43am On Jul 28, 2017
Team Mike and Claire bck together
Re: United In Betrayal by nerd51(f): 12:17pm On Jul 28, 2017
muller101:
Team Mike and Claire bck together
Ehn Claire and who Guy, park well oo
Re: United In Betrayal by Queensiju: 12:22pm On Jul 28, 2017
Oh PHILLLL. Don't worry, if at first you don't succeed, try ,try, try again and you will conquer at the end.
AMARA, if you push Michael too hard, he will just push you down the stairs one day and that will be the end of you and your unborn child. (the cane used to beat the first wife is on the roof top for the second)
CLAIRE: I undastand you need to clear your head but while at it, don't close your eyes to the good people around you. All is well.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 3:14pm On Jul 28, 2017
jumpmasta:

Madam calm down !!!! Life is not as you think it . Walking away is actually harder than you think grin grin
i have no problem with Claire walking away. Walking away is actually the right decision for Claire to do at a time like this. But she isnt behaving maturedly at all.
Re: United In Betrayal by iwakacome: 3:34pm On Jul 28, 2017
Chumzypinky:

i have no problem with Claire walking away. Walking away is actually the right decision for Claire to do at a time like this. But she isnt behaving maturedly at all.
I feel she still wants her home. You should know having a home is unique.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 4:16pm On Jul 28, 2017
iwakacome:

I feel she still wants her home. You should know having a home is unique.

Truly...it is difficult walking away from a marriage with a man who popped the cherry

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Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 4:31pm On Jul 28, 2017
Chumzypinky:

i have no problem with Claire walking away. Walking away is actually the right decision for Claire to do at a time like this. But she isnt behaving maturedly at all.
Do u expect she just walk away like that, don't u think she should teach dem some lessons before she actually do, they deserve it joor
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 5:55pm On Jul 28, 2017
Nkysuccess:

Do u expect she just walk away like that, don't u think she should teach dem some lessons before she actually do, they deserve it joor
so u tel me. Wat lesson is she teaching dem now? Wat type of lesson?
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 6:08pm On Jul 28, 2017
jey4all:
remember it's fiction. Nor come dey assume

Everyone knows, but these are what happens in real life.
Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 6:55pm On Jul 28, 2017
Chumzypinky:

i have no problem with Claire walking away. Walking away is actually the right decision for Claire to do at a time like this. But she isnt behaving maturedly at all.
Really?? how matured is she supposed to behave?
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 7:00pm On Jul 28, 2017
I.support claire in this she should take her time before falling for another man again not men are like michael. I still trust phil.
Re: United In Betrayal by driand(m): 7:59pm On Jul 28, 2017
Story getting boring! Now we wait a whole year to get an episode that doesn't go past 5 minutes in real life? Kwantinue ooo
Re: United In Betrayal by Chumzypinky(f): 8:18pm On Jul 28, 2017
crislyn:

Really?? how matured is she supposed to behave?
do you know what being extra-nice to Amara and even caring, or rather pretending to care for her would do to Amara and Mike?
When she tends to Amara's feeding and pregnancy, but in a matured way and she doesnt have to start reminding them everytime what she went through in the hands of Michael. It will only make dem tink she's still hurting.
Wearing crop singlet and bumshorts upandan isnt going to solve any issues at all. Thats why i say she's not behavin matured at all
Re: United In Betrayal by prodekul(f): 9:40pm On Jul 28, 2017
no update yet.dia is God oooooo.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nkysuccess(f): 10:13pm On Jul 28, 2017
Chumzypinky:

do you know what being extra-nice to Amara and even caring, or rather pretending to care for her would do to Amara and Mike?
When she tends to Amara's feeding and pregnancy, but in a matured way and she doesnt have to start reminding them everytime what she went through in the hands of Michael. It will only make dem tink she's still hurting.
Wearing crop singlet and bumshorts upandan isnt going to solve any issues at all. Thats why i say she's not behavin matured at all
Issorite! Easier said than done

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 7:25am On Jul 29, 2017
Phil sat down still, lots of thoughts going through his head.
He would just let her be.
She needed time and he had all the time in the world. He would wait for her.
His phone beeped, a text message from Enatel;

"That didn't go well right? But I saw it in her eyes, she has something for you bro. Don't worry, you've got my support now so this is going to work out. And before you start asking questions, I'm two tables behind you."

Phil quickly turned around, his eyes coming in contact with that of Enatel. They stood up at once and Enatel walked to him, embrassing him lovingly.

"Ive missed you bro. And you left me in a foreign country cause of a woman." Enatel said

They laughed

"But the woman is thick and pretty, I must say." He complimented, giving him a handshake.

They sat down, Enatel occupying the space Claire had left.

"Yes, thank you but I don't want you staring at her. But, how come you know I'm here?"

"I got mysterious powers from Switzerland."

Phil looked at him suspiciously

"You know I don't understand you this days."

"Wanted to show up at your office so we can go to the house together, throw up a party for my return you know, but God blessed me that my cab got there before you drove off, so, patient Enatel just had to follow you."

"You're a pro$titute, trust me."

"I know, I know. But that woman is damn pretty."

"Uhm, how was your trip?"

"Hehehe. Trying to switch topics abi? Calm down. Na you get am."

They laughed and Phil ordered drinks for their table.
He had missed his friend.


**********

Saturday morning came with all the laziness in the world.
Chika tossed on the bed.
She had returned very late the previous day and had gone straight to bed due to weakness.
The new house was big and the workers there didn't know left from right.
She was about kneeling down to do her morning rituals when the door suddenly was thrown open, giving her the shock of her life.

"You this lazy lots, you're forgetting what day of the week today is huh!"

It was the noisemaker, Amara.

Chika knelt down, turning her back to the intruder and started with the sign of the cross, only to feel a heavy slap on her back.
The pain went through her back as she stretched her hand to rub it, ignoring the person who had hot her.

Ebere came out of the bathroom tying a towel, she looked from Amara to Chika who was kneeling and giving her back a soft rub.

"What's happening?" Ebere asked

"Ask your mother and your father what's happening. You have mouth to speak so talk nonsense. Baboon. You two are still in bed, on a Saturday and you dare to ask me what's happening. Ara o na agba gi?"

"Ebere, are you done?" Chika stood up after doing the sign of the cross, ignoring Amara

"No. I heard the slap and rushed out. What happened?"

"It's nothing serious. Hurry up, you know I still have to go back to the new house."

Ebere nodded and went back to the bathroom.
Chika walked to the open door and faced Amara who was boiling with rage at Chika's reaction

"You've woken us up so please, leave the room."

"What! Are you asking me out of this room? In my husband's house?"

"Fine. Stay if you want."

And with that, she left the room, banging the door behind her.

************

Claire drove into the house around 10:00am. She had gone to the gym to do a little work out. She came down and was about entering the house when Ebere suddenly rushed out

"Good morning madam. The house is on fire, thank God you're here."

"What's happening? You look like you've gone to hell and came back."

"Chika and Amara had a fight."

"Verbal fight or physical fight?"

"Both. And madam, Mr Michael has called the police. They'll be here soon."

"This is bad. Where are they now?"

"In the sitting room."

Claire nodded and went in.
The sitting room was a sight for sore eyes. The centre table was broken,there were glasses lying around, Amara's forehead was bleeding and she was spotting a black eye. Chika was kneeling down but there was nothing on her, not even a scratch.
It was obvious that it was not a fight. Chika had beaten Amara.

"What's going on here?" Claire said and everyone turned to her

"Your employee caused chaos here and I won't take it soft." Michael responded

"Okay. It's obvious but what really happened? Amara?"

Amara looked her over and hissed, looking away.

"Okay. Chika?"

"Why are you asking questions? I've called the police already."

"But they've got rights to say what happened between them. Or have you heard the details in full?"

"I don't care. This pig here made a mistake by touching Amara so it's already a big crime. And you can see the evidence around. I won't spare her."

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 8:03am On Jul 29, 2017
"That's not how to settle dispute Mike. We'll have to hear what really happened so Chika, I'm all ears."

Chika recounted to them the drama that had happened in the room, not mixing a single word of it.

"Fine. If you walked away, what then is this?" Claire asked

"I was coming to report to you. I went up to your room but you were not there. I came down and it was at this particular spot that I felt a bottle crash on my head. I fell and landed on the centre table. Madam, I've stayed with you for a while now, you know how I don't respond to angry words or fight but she called my mother a dog, that was the height of it and I had to hit her."

There was silence in the room. Nobody said a word. You could here a pin drop

"I want to know, when you got up from the centre table, did you hit her?" Michael asked

"No sir."

"Why?"

"Because it's not in my nature to fight people. I was about walking away when she started cursing me."

"Amara, is she saying the truth?" Michael asked

"What you should be concerned about is that she hit me, and I'm pregnant with your child Mike."

"Pregnancy is not an excuse for you to be stupid Amara. Now look at your condition. Not only that, you hit your fellow woman on the head, with a bottle, what if she had fallen and something happened to her? What will you tell her family?"

"Are you shouting at me? In front of this low lives? You're shouting on me?"

"I'm telling your wrongs to you Amara. If my wife had not insisted that we hear what happened, she would have gone in for something that's entirely your fault. I don't want a repetition of this nonsense in my house."

He stood up and left the sitting room without looking back at any of them.

"You two would go to the hospital." Claire added, signalling to Chika to stand up.

"Learn to control your temper in the face of all provocations. She's pregnant and if anything happens to her, nobody will ask you what she did to you. Shower and get ready hmm, I'll give you some money so you can go to the hospital. Same with you Amara."

But she was far from them.
Bodily present and absent minded.
That was her condition at that moment.

He had referred to her as his wife. Then what is she?
He had reprimanded her in front of the employees and the so called wife.
When will she ever be recognised in the House? When will he start treating her the way he used to treat Claire?
What jazz did Claire use that despite everything that had happened, he still respected her wishes? She held her head and the pain sank deap.
She had never felt this way before. How dare Michael?

"Ebere! Ebere!" Michael's voice rang out from the stairs, interrupting her thoughts.

"Yes sir!"

"Get this place cleaned up. I'm going out to get a new centre table. This place better be set and ready by the time I'm back."

"Yes sir."

He walked to her and she looked away

"Come, I'll drop you at the hospital."

"I'm not going."

"Why? Look at you."

"Like you care?"

"You're carrying my child so it's enough for me to care. Listen, it took my pride to call back the station and ask them not to come because if they'd showed up, i would have handed you over to them."

"What?"

"Yes. I see no reason why you will go into their room and pull the stunt you pulled there. Or even hit your fellow woman with a bottle. Whatever that girl did to you is very very justified. I've been with Claire for like how many years now, and all those years, she never did as much as exchange words with anybody and you, just a week and some days in this house you're already playing tigress. Now, see the result. You're full of bruises and the girl doesn't even have a scratch. Miss Tigress."

He dropped some money on the table and gave her an intimidating stare

"Take yourself to the hospital if you don't join me in the next ten minutes."

He left the sitting room without looking back to see her break down in tears.

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Re: United In Betrayal by PamelB(f): 8:06am On Jul 29, 2017
Thank you all for your contributions and show of affection to my mum's health.
She's getting better now, though it's the reason why the story went on a break.
I thank those of us who understand and still kept the thread alive. I heart you all a lot.

Thanks and God bless you

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Re: United In Betrayal by xdos(m): 8:22am On Jul 29, 2017
PamelB thanks for the update. I am glad your mother is getting well. This your story has turned to soap opera. When wee d movie abi story finish?

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Re: United In Betrayal by Jane1234f(f): 8:27am On Jul 29, 2017
Thank God she's recovering now and thanks for the update

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Re: United In Betrayal by Kimkardashain(f): 8:37am On Jul 29, 2017
PamelB:
Thank you all for your contributions and show of affection to my mum's health.
She's getting better now, though it's the reason why the story went on a break.
I thank those of us who understand and still kept the thread alive. I heart you all a lot.

Thanks and God bless you
chimo!! now claire is been matured. amara chai God have mercy on u.
sis am happy dat mum is ok now.

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Re: United In Betrayal by Best1708(f): 9:25am On Jul 29, 2017
See shame ooooo,Amara see your life outside.Yeye pikin.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nathblessing(m): 9:38am On Jul 29, 2017
Claire abeg do the needful fast jawe so all dis yeye Amara drama can stop jawe...... nd pls take Chika nd Ebere with u while leaving...... Amara u neva c anytin o......
Re: United In Betrayal by richardoz(m): 9:48am On Jul 29, 2017
Amara should just fall down and die.... lollz what a height of shame! Good for her! Pamelb weldone. I am happy to hear that your mom is fine now

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Re: United In Betrayal by crislyn(f): 10:05am On Jul 29, 2017
Chumzypinky:

do you know what being extra-nice to Amara and even caring, or rather pretending to care for her would do to Amara and Mike?
When she tends to Amara's feeding and pregnancy, but in a matured way and she doesnt have to start reminding them everytime what she went through in the hands of Michael. It will only make dem tink she's still hurting.
Wearing crop singlet and bumshorts upandan isnt going to solve any issues at all. Thats why i say she's not behavin matured at all
That would be pretending she is not hurt. Michael and Amara are not the kind of people you do that with that will realise their mistake, they r too hardened for that sort of pretense. They deserve what they r getting. Wearing bum short and crop top upandan is her living her life because she is been living to please others, doing what is acceptable to her husband and trying to be a role model for Amara. It takes an extremely strong woman not to have poisoned that silly man to death or do worse than Claire is doing now.

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Re: United In Betrayal by 123456dr(f): 10:25am On Jul 29, 2017
I love this, Amarachi Neva see anything.
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 11:25am On Jul 29, 2017
Good for Amara
Re: United In Betrayal by queenitee(f): 1:17pm On Jul 29, 2017
Lol, lol, sorry Amara
Re: United In Betrayal by Nobody: 2:07pm On Jul 29, 2017
Seeing all these things happening to Amara and someone will still come and say that dat karma doesnt exist. Mtcheww
Weldone Pamelb.



Good to know that your mum is now fine

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