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Re: Hidden Diamonds by Jane1234f(f): 5:21pm On Oct 22, 2017
greatface:
Thanks for coming.

Don't be jealous of Evajeal ok?

She is just a small girl that has used her story to bring and keep us together as one big family.

I gave Evajeal a kiss but I will give you kisses. gringringringrin
Ok ohhh
Re: Hidden Diamonds by donsanctus4real: 5:22pm On Oct 22, 2017
[quote author=EvaJael post=61648473] Thank u
Hehehe we shall see

I mean what ever I say.
can we contact tru anoda medium apart from here
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Patotelli(m): 5:32pm On Oct 22, 2017
HABA!!!, Una don take comment full the whole space now, eeeehnn pls e don do oo so my Evajel go see space ost the next dope episode... Dear can't wait biko, hapi sunday.
Hope you went today. Sermon na about you o, 'giv Ceaser what is 'CEaser and 'giv to us Nairalandiers wat is Ours,......
#TEAMJAYGLO

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by donsanctus4real: 7:12pm On Oct 22, 2017
Patotelli:
HABA!!!, Una don take comment full the whole space now, eeeehnn pls e don do oo so my Evajel go see space ost the next dope episode... Dear can't wait biko, hapi sunday.
Hope you went today. Sermon na about you o, 'giv Ceaser what is 'CEaser and 'giv to us Nairalandiers wat is Ours,......
#TEAMJAYGLO


u re correct @patoteli let Evajel gv nairalandiers what belong to dem... seems u re a catholic. kudos to u for listening wella doing d sermon

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 7:21pm On Oct 22, 2017
Jane1234f:
I am here, but am jealous ohh...this one you want to kiss Evajeal
Which kiss? Lol...I no dey do abeg
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 7:22pm On Oct 22, 2017
Jane1234f:
I am very very angry, that's why I have not commented since, I don't know why Evajeal killed Neil
Ouch! Abeg don't be angry with me o

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 7:25pm On Oct 22, 2017
virtuedagirl:
Such a nice piece,though I'm pained that Niel has to die,Mille I can feel your pain just be strong
Thank you dear. Sometimes life just goes that way
crislyn:
Evajael why?? After so many years together.. is this how u do??
Not me o, life can be funny
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 7:26pm On Oct 22, 2017
Patotelli:
HABA!!!, Una don take comment full the whole space now, eeeehnn pls e don do oo so my Evajel go see space ost the next dope episode... Dear can't wait biko, hapi sunday.
Hope you went today. Sermon na about you o, 'giv Ceaser what is 'CEaser and 'giv to us Nairalandiers wat is Ours,......
#TEAMJAYGLO
Lol abeg till tomao or tuesday
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Jane1234f(f): 8:17pm On Oct 22, 2017
EvaJael:

Which kiss? Lol...I no dey do abeg
Lol
Re: Hidden Diamonds by queenitee(f): 8:41pm On Oct 22, 2017
Eva, on top all the begging, you finally killed my Niel. Thank you o, ose gan

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by cbella(f): 10:15pm On Oct 22, 2017
EvaJael:

Which kiss? Lol...I no dey do abeg

grin lol.. let me laugh and go
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Dessydemmy: 8:54am On Oct 23, 2017
Eva!!1 this is so cruel, you kill Niel. Maka why na? how will Mille survive this now and you want her to end up with Elliot abi? it is well o.

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by donsanctus4real: 10:14am On Oct 23, 2017
@jane1234f don't b jealous am here to gv u a warm kiss even French kiss... hoping my first lady @Evajael won't b around to witness it

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 10:23am On Oct 23, 2017
donsanctus4real:
@jane1234f don't b jealous am here to gv u a warm kiss even French kiss... hoping my first lady @Evajael won't b around to witness it
Ha! You people should not spoil me o. I'm an innocent girl abeg
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 10:25am On Oct 23, 2017
queenitee:
Eva, on top all the begging, you finally killed my Niel. Thank you o, ose gan
I thought u were tripping for Elliot na
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 10:26am On Oct 23, 2017
Dessydemmy:
Eva!!1 this is so cruel, you kill Niel. Maka why na? how will Mille survive this now and you want her to end up with Elliot abi? it is well o.
It's not me that did it o. Maybe she'll find happiness with him. I donno o
Re: Hidden Diamonds by SurestG(f): 11:05am On Oct 23, 2017
queenitee:
Eva, on top all the begging, you finally killed my Niel. Thank you o, ose gan
i wonder why Eva killed Mille's happiness. I cried reading that part.
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Jane1234f(f): 12:45pm On Oct 23, 2017
donsanctus4real:
@jane1234f don't b jealous am here to gv u a warm kiss even French kiss... hoping my first lady @Evajael won't b around to witness it
Lol
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Lakeside9(m): 1:31pm On Oct 23, 2017
loving this @evajael hope am not too late wink
Re: Hidden Diamonds by itsandi(m): 4:21pm On Oct 23, 2017
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Re: Hidden Diamonds by donsanctus4real: 5:16pm On Oct 23, 2017
@evajael my Sunshine I won't spoil u nah.... I will only spoil u on our wedding nyt.... winks...

@jane1234f don't worry my dear am here for u
Re: Hidden Diamonds by toyhin123(f): 3:12am On Oct 24, 2017
Poor mille........evajeal thanks for d update
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Olabantu(m): 6:19am On Oct 24, 2017
EvaJael:

Lol abeg till tomao or tuesday
Evaj abeg come fulfill your promise oooo...
Re: Hidden Diamonds by HORLADSTAR(m): 8:58am On Oct 24, 2017
Olabantu:

Evaj abeg come fulfill your promise oooo...
I trust her,she will surely update today
Re: Hidden Diamonds by crislyn(f): 10:17am On Oct 24, 2017
EvaJael:
Thank you dear. Sometimes life just goes that way
Not me o, life can be funny
Haba...after all this years. Kuku kee Mille na.
Re: Hidden Diamonds by Patotelli(m): 1:36pm On Oct 24, 2017
EvaJael:
Lol abeg till tomao or tuesday
(in psquare's voice) OH!! Thank God is Teusday oh oo oh!!!, So make we sidon dey wait oh oo oh!!, As she don talk am tym is tickling oh oo oh!!, Oya evababy update lesekese ooo lesekese oo...
#PATOTELLI_PATTOSKI
Re: Hidden Diamonds by HORLADSTAR(m): 4:00pm On Oct 24, 2017
Let me call on our madam.tho it wasn't easy to be a writer
Re: Hidden Diamonds by HORLADSTAR(m): 4:02pm On Oct 24, 2017
IN WIZKID VOICE :

EVA baby baby EH.
You gat me looking for U.
This ur story story EH.
It gat me waking at 2.
And whenever u post a LINE.
It gat me glueing my EYE.
U gat the best story BAE.
And am sure it'll gonna PAY.
keep on doing it in ur WAY.
And GOD will surely bless ur PAY.
Ha Eva baby baby baby BABY.
You know i once told you that u are PRETTY.
It's my precious instinct that is WORKING.
Am not lieing am not FUMBLING.
Am not kidding for u BABY.
And i mean what am SAYING.
So come over here an' post SOMETHING.
For ur people on this COUNTY.:::

CHILL,IT'S WHAT IT IS OUT HERE MEHN.WE ARE ALL HERE EXPECTING AN UPDATE FROM OUR DEAR WRITER.OSHEY EVA,CONTINUE DOING WHAT U KNOW HOW TO DO BEST.But, Is this what u know how to do best?Dat's a question for u.
More blood to ur finger.:*

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 5:09pm On Oct 24, 2017
Update is surely coming today. I just need to finish up today's episode. I'm stepping out for a while so it'll come at night. Thanks for your patience. Horladstar and patotelli, I'm enjoying you both around here since u came aboard. God bless u both for me.
See y'all later kiss

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Re: Hidden Diamonds by cbella(f): 9:48pm On Oct 24, 2017
EvaJael:
Update is surely coming today. I just need to finish up today's episode. I'm stepping out for a while so it'll come at night. Thanks for your patience.

Always delivers on her promise! Kindly wake me up when you do.
Re: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(f): 9:50pm On Oct 24, 2017
Liz
When I got back, the room was suspiciously quiet. Mille was asleep while Brian and Liam were acting strange.
“Why are you both acting so cold?” I questioned with one hand on my hip.
“Nothing. We’re okay.” Brian answered.
“Liam?”
“Your brother just told you. We’re just a bit tired and worried.” He replied but his eyes were telling a different story entirely.
“You taught the kids that lying is a sin and…”
“I better go check on Elliot.” Brian excused himself.
“William what is going on?”
“Sweetheart, you’ve already heard…”
“The truth.” I narrowed my eyes at him .
He took a deep breath. “Mille knows that he’s gone.”
“What?!”
“Liz, it’s not what you think.”
“What do you mean it’s not what I think? I knew I shouldn’t have left her side. I’m sure it’s that brother of mine who opened his wide mouth once again. How could both of you do this to me?”
“Darling wait…”
“I’ll listen to you once I pull off Brian’s ears.” I turned to leave but he gripped my wrist.
“We didn’t tell her, she knew already.”
My knees went weak instantly. “She…she…knew?”
“I think she actually saw it happen.”
“Oh no, please it’s not true. Did she tell you that?”
“She didn’t say anything after that. She cried herself to sleep.”
“My God! Liam why is life like this? When her mother died, it was hell. I don’t know if she’ll be able to make it through this kind of shock.”
He patted my hands. “She’ll be fine, darling, she’ll be fine.”
I sat beside her all day. When she woke up, she ate very little and cried more, no amount of consoling seemed to work for her. She continued that way for days and days. She cried the most on the day that was supposed to be her wedding day. We couldn’t leave the hospital because her health was deteriorating.
Elliot came to her room in a wheelchair once in a while, he kept pleading for her forgiveness.None of us understood why because they never told us what happened that night. She never spoke to anyone. She would just stare at nothing in particular so we were surprised when she spoke about a week and some days after the incident.
“I want to go home mummy.” She said.
“Sweetheart but you …”
“Tell the doctor I’ll die if I stay here any longer. I want to go home.”
Fear gripped me. I left to talk to the family doctor. He was reluctant to let her go at first but he later give in. He assured me that he would come over from time to time to check on her. He felt so much pity for her. He said he would discharge her the following evening.
“Baby, you’ll leave tomorrow.” I smoothened her hair.
“Thank you mum. I could die here.”
“Shh, don’t talk about lying my love.”
“I want to see him before I go.”
“See who?” Jason moved closer to the bed.
“Niel.”
“Baby, I don’t know if that’s a good idea. You know you’re not feeling well.”
“Aunt’s right, Mille. I don’t think I approve of it.”
“Approve?” She scoffed.
“Watch your words Jay, she’s fragile.”
“Mille, I’m sorry but I still stand with Aunt.”
“Nobody’s stopping me from seeing Niel, mum, nobody.”
“We know you want to see him dear but it’s not good for you. Your health will get worse.”

“Then so be it. I want it to get worse, I want to die mummy. I can’t take this anymore. First,mum and now, Niel. Why me?” She broke down again, weeping loudly.
“Oh sweetheart, please don’t say that. You want to die and leave your father and all of us broken? You’ll see Niel again someday. I promise you that.”
She jerked away from me. “Don’t promise me anything, mum promised me so many things and yet she was taken from me, same happened with Niel. Why didn’t they shoot me? Why him? Why didn’t an angel appear and stop them? Why mum, why? They took my joy, how could they be so cruel?” She yelled. Gloria and Kara came in to console her but she just kept crying. She cried till there were no tears to shed anymore. She leaned on me and I patted her quietly till her sobs reduced to hiccups. The atmosphere in the room was beyond sorrowful.
“Mummy, please take me to him.”
“That will be tomorrow dear. I need to speak to those in charge. Brian can you do that for me?”
“Sure, excuse me.” He replied.
“Thank you mum.”

Jamille
Night was approaching and my fears increasing. Words cannot describe the pain of losing a loved one, not just any loved one but my fiancée. I wish there was something I could do better than crying. I felt like climbing the tallest mountain and screaming to the world that my Niel was taken away unjustly.
In the day and night, I always heard his voice around me. I was somewhere near insanity. I wanted him to come back to me. I heard his deep voice and laughter. I saw his face all around me. Elliot made my predicament worse each time he came to my room. I would close my eyes and wish he could transform to Niel just for a few seconds but when I opened my eyes, it was still Elliot. I prayed for death to come for me too but death went on leave.
No one could understand the hell I was going through. I needed to see his body once again. I didn’t care if they thought I was crazy. I just want to feel my knight once more. I never thought I would face this type of heartbreak. This heartbreak hurt a lot, it felt like not just a part, but the whole of me had gone away with him. Patiently, I waited for night to pass and a new day to break so I could go and see the remains of the one who took my heart away.
“I slept off baby, I’m so sorry.” Mum apologized as she woke up,distracting me from the thoughts of Niel.
“Good morning mum.”
“Good morning sweetheart. Did you get any sleep?”
“Mummy, I want to see Niel.”
I could see the sadness sweep through her features but I wasn’t so interested.
“Baby are you sure of this?”
“Yes mummy.”
“Fine, we’ll get ready and go.”
Indeed, we got ready and in a few hours I was on my way to see Niel, supporting my weight on Jason. He asked to come along, Kara, Rachel, Gloria, Elliot and aunt Charis came too. His body had been brought out already. Yes, I saw what I went there to see. The body of the one I would forever love as cold as death itself. He looked so calm and peaceful laying there. I stared at the body for a long while and everyone who came along stared at me in turn, waiting to see my reaction. At long last, the tears came gliding slowly down my now bony cheeks. I cried, not the loud cry that left me with headaches but a gentle, soft and painful cry. He was gone. If only, I could take his body with me and stare at it all day, I would have done it.
I dropped a light kiss on his forehead. “I’ve seen enough mum, I’m ready to go.”
She looked at me as if she was expecting me to act a little drama before leaving.
“Hold on sis.” Jason pulled me close to him once again as we turned around to leave.
I halted and turned to the attendant. “He’s the one I love, handle the body with care.”
The middle aged man nodded and I continued on my way.
“Aunt, have you fixed a date for the burial?” I asked aunt Charis.
“No,my daughter. He was your husband to be so I want you to pick a date.”
“Niel wasn’t my husband to be. He is and will always be my husband.”

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