Ujunwa14:





OP, you could have let them kiss na. Aawwwwn, love is a beautiful something.

God bless you OP

damselposh:
. Chai

I Was only telling him that, i have see him finish. That's all

Ezenwa should be caught and put into the psychiatric home.

Thanks for the update ma'am

Love in the air o..soldier man and sister Melody..

Thanks for the update

But the updates are short sha, e nor dey reach chop o

Thanks dear.

Ann2012:

Popcorn coming right away with fresh juice

damselposh come and update oooooo

Captain is in love ooo

Bia this stalker So because your father treated you badly you are now killing innocent people that did nothing to you abi?
you are really a psycho.


well done OP

Odoogu:


you can't be less African.
black and beautiful!

Awwwn, thank you

Where is damsel?

Khriztarl:
Where is damsel?

She's preparing our food
Hopefully, she'll show soon

Ann2012:

She's preparing our food Hopefully, she'll show soon

I Trust her on that one.

Creeza:
Queenitee is temporarily away frrom nairaland. She is safe though. Just fighting the dreaded covid-19 as a frontier hero. ( She is a medical personnel and our hero) Thanks for your concern.

Now I know why she has not been responding to all my mentions.. I wish her safety..

After several dodging, am finally here..

CHAPTER NINETEEN



Joel walked towards Melody's room with his heart beating fast, on his hands were a blue jean trouser and a big white polo, he was taking them to Melody to wear when they go out later in the day. He steadied his breathe before knocking, who was he kidding? he knew he wanted to see her and not because he was taking the clothes to her. She didn't respond to his knocks, he opened the door and stepped into the room, she was still asleep, he dropped the clothes and turned to leave the room when she winced in pain. Joel turned around immediately and rushed towards her.


"Hey Melody? are you okay?" he asked concerned.


She didn't respond, Joel watched her face as she slept, he looked on admiringly until she twisted her face like she was in pain.


"Melody?" Joel called shaking her slowly. Her eyes flew open, she wiped the tears that already formed in her eyes but not before Joel noticed.



"You were crying, are you okay?" Joel asked again.


"Good morning sir" Melody muttered


"Morning. you have not answered my question though" Joel said.



"I am not feeling too well, but i will be fine" she replied carressing her stomach.



"What do you mean? if you are not feeling fine then i should take you to the hospital" Joel said placing his palm on her forehead



"I will be fine, it's just cramps" she said covering her face shyly.



"So does this cramps not have a cure?"


"You don't know what i mean by cramps?" she asked, surprised.



"No, i don't, but whatever it is, we can get you some drugs from the pharmacy" he explained.



"Am having menstrual cramps" she finally said bitting her lip as the pain sliced through her stomach.



"Oh that? i can get you a pain reliever then, there is a pharmacy down the street" he said getting up from the bed.



"Thank you very much, i will also need a sanitary pad" she said scratching her head, she felt awkward discussing such thing with a man.


"How will i know the one to get?" he asked


"Just tell them to give you virony"


"Alright then, i will be back" Joel said leaving the room.










The stalker banged the door with force when he stepped into the ward, he stared at his sleeping brother for some time before removing his belt, he walked close to him and lashed him with the belt. His brother screamed as the pain burned through his back.


"What is it Ezenwa? what have i done to you?" he asked as the tears gathered in his eyes.



"Where did you keep dad's documents?" the stalker asked swinging the belt from the left to the right.



"I will never tell you, that is the only thing you can't have in your life." he grinned.



"Okenwa, you are biting more than you can chew, just think about it, i kept you here for a year and six months, do you think there are other things i can't do?" he asked.



"You can do whatever you want to do, but you see those documents? you are not getting them," he smirked.


"Okenwa don't dare me" the stalker shouted.


"I am sure Dad will be turning in his grave because of you, he was never wrong in calling you a useless child, i curse the day i became your brother" he said spitting on the floor.


"You think you are a true Akueze? you must be a joke, i am sure your father didn't tell you that you are not his biological son, he picked you up from the road side where your useless mother dumped you" the stalker said laughing in mockery.


"That's a lie, you are lying"



"If you know what is good for you, ready those documents before i come here next time" he said as he wore his belt and left the room.

veenessha:
This kin love na serious love wantintin, aunt damsel thank you for the update

thanks dear

Embellished:
Love oh Love Chai my captain is in love with my ghetto princess

thanks damsel.

thanks dear

Adesina12:
Damsel babe
Please answer this question.
Why the stalker put his brother in asylum?
Is it because of his farther property or because his brother knew about his secret with fair and plum ladies?
I can understand he wants his farther dead because of property.
Kindly unravel this soon.
Sweet popcorn for you

okay baby, i will unravel everything as time goes on.

germaphobe:
can't wait for those lips to lock together mmmmmhmmm. HEY!! y'all don't tell me you don't wish for that too ;Dcan't wait for those lips to lock together mmmmmhmmm. HEY!! y'all don't tell me you don't wish for that too

lol, you want them to kiss abi?

Embellished:
Oh my God. Now am feeling for the stalker.

Thanks Op for the update.

thanks dear

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OP, you could have let them kiss na. Aawwwwn, love is a beautiful something.[/quote


lol

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OP, you could have let them kiss na. Aawwwwn, love is a beautiful something.[/quote


lol

Ujunwa14:
Now i know what the stalker passed through, it wasn't easy for him too.


Thanks damsel, another twin update.

thanks honey

Blackween:
Ride on damsel

thanks honey

So I finally caught up with the story..

Ezenwa is a product of his past.. He allowed himself to turn into the bad person he is now.. There's more to this..

Okenwa, you were there when your Father was using foul words on your brother, you should have at least told him to give brother Ezenwa a chance.. From everything he is doing now, he wasn't such a dullard for him to be able to rape and kill 5 ladies without being caught.

I hope your father will wake up from Coma soon to safe you from Asylum..

Captain Joel, our heart has a mind of its own, instead of pumping blood, it's busy lusting or falling in love..

Melody appears to be too confident, that comes with stubbornness.. Am glad Captain Joel was able to convince her..
She just have to be the bait to lure the rapist..

ChidiEbube you're a good man,God bless you for the encouragement and support you've given to Captain Joel..


Damselposh..I have few suggestions or should I say criticism..

Your description of places has not been so good..When Melody entered Captain Joel parent's house, I was expecting you to give a brief description of what the parlor looks like. It helps us(readers) to have a beautiful imagination..Also,try to describe the physical features of your characters when you introduce them into the story..

In all of this, you have a beautiful story line,one can relate it to real life happenings..


I humbly summit..


BRAVO DAMSELPOSH

Odoogu:
always just in our own actions but very critical of people's reactions..
the reflection of life.

yea

Tonyspecial:
God bless you OP

thanks babe

Khriztarl:
I Was only telling him that, i have see him finish. That's all

hahahaha

Ann2012:
Ezenwa should be caught and put into the psychiatric home.

Thanks for the update ma'am

thanks babe

Silver1996:
Love in the air o..soldier man and sister Melody..

Thanks for the update

But the updates are short sha, e nor dey reach chop o

sorry boss, the next one go long

Akinwale14:
damselposh come and update oooooo

I yaff updated, come and read

Preshbeauty:
Captain is in love ooo

Bia this stalker So because your father treated you badly you are now killing innocent people that did nothing to you abi?
you are really a psycho.


well done OP

thanks Presh

Khriztarl:
Where is damsel?

present ma