Below is what my friend, whom I would like to call Pascal, said to his present girlfriend to make her become his!
He had met her at a friend’s wedding and exchanged contacts with her. They had had a few moments to be together socially. One day he invited her over and what happened is written below.
Now my question for the ladies is this: If you were the lady, what would you say based on the write up below; do you consider it romantic and convincing enough to say yes?
The guys: Would you suggest he acted differently based on the write up below; did he appear too week or otherwise?

Pascal: ''Suzzy,'' he raised his face to meet hers, his eyes gazing romantically into her face and exploring deep into her eyes to see what feelings lie behind them, ''please can I hold your hand for a moment?'', he stretched forward his right hand to get connected with hers. She hesitated for a while, then offered him her right hand to create a bond! He dropped his gaze to settle on the succulent palm just placed on his! Having held it and firmly placed it between his two palms so that he could feel the warmth of her body, he raised his face once again to settle on her eyes! ''Suzzy'', he called her in the most seductive and romantic manner, so expressive of a desire to get connected to her world that she could only get soaked in feelings that can only find expression in the opposite gender, ''Thank you for giving me your hand, I’m most honored! You see”, he lowered his eyes once more to settle on her palm and stroked it affectionately then raised it to make contact with her eyes once again. “I’ve often fantasized and imagined myself in a world detached from reality! It’s a beautiful world and I want it to be made real! I fantasize about this world because there’s someone so beautiful in it that I want and that is--- you, Suzzy! I've never been myself since the day I met you! At first I wasn’t sure of what I was feeling but, with each passing day, I get more and more convinced that I love you. You awakened my deepest feelings when our paths crossed on that day; your beauty, your smile, your eyes, your gait, the way you express yourself, everything about you is what I desire in a lady and if you would give me the opportunity, I’d love to be the man in your life! I want you to be the love of my life! I love you, Suzzy! Would you be the one that I love?”…

you could end up being the next Wale Adenuga if you work a little harder,,,,,,you are welcome

Wellcome __asin welcome

Wellcome __asin welcome

DigitalSignal:
Like I said it's not the OP's fault that you can't get the point he is making! I chose to ignore your insult.

Please do and do us a favour, dont come back here ever again with fabricated crap!
Tosspot

Pascal:

''Suzzy,'' He raised his face to meet hers, his eyes gazing wistfully into her face and exploring deep into her eyes to see what feelings lay behind them.

'Please can I hold your hand for a moment?' He stretched out his right hand in silent appeal. She hesitated for a while, then offered him hers.

He gazed at the lovely palm placed on his. Holding her hand firmly, he drew her closer and placed his other hand on hers, feeling her warmth closely.

He raised his face once again to gaze into her eyes. He had something important to say, and now was the time.


'Suzzy', he said seductively, his voice low and gentle, expressive of a desire to get connected to her world that she could understand the way he felt about her and feel that way in return, 'Thank you for giving me your hand, I’m most honored! You see,' he lowered his eyes once more to stare at her palm and caress stroke it affectionately.

He looked up, trying to see if he was communicating with her. She scrutinized him back, and he could read a depth of emotion in her eyes.

“I’ve often fantasized and imagined myself in a world detached from reality! It’s a beautiful world and I want it to be made real! I fantasize about this world because there’s someone so beautiful in it that I want and that is--- you, Suzzy! I've never been myself since the day I met you! At first I wasn’t sure of what I was feeling but, with each passing day, I get more and more convinced that I love you. You awakened my deepest feelings when our paths crossed on that day; your beauty, your smile, your eyes, your gait, the way you express yourself, everything about you is what I desire in a lady and if you would give me the opportunity, I’d love to be the man in your life! I want you to be the love of my life! I love you, Suzzy! Would you be the one that I love?'…

do you mind? I just played around a bit with your write up.

tpia@:

do you mind? I just played around a bit with your write up.

Hey Tilapia whatsup?!

Bros, no can do, like i mentioned on those other threads. [should i dig up the links again].

we are never, ever getting back together

even if you love me pass your daily fufu.

tpia@:
Bros, no can do, like i mentioned on those other threads. [should i dig up the links again].
we are never, ever getting back together
even if you love me pass your daily fufu.

You are a nutjob!

Table Leg :

Please do and do us a favour, dont come back here ever again with fabricated crap!
Tosspot

Like I said if you can't get what the OP is saying and chose to call it fabricated crap, it's your world you're living in, so suit yourself and dwell in your world devoid of self control, which is a virtue in my own world, and lacking discipline!

tpia@:




do you mind? I just played around a bit with your write up.

No, I don't mind but, if it had been said that way, would you say yes?

If you try this with a Nigerian yoruba babe, you would be welcomed with a looooooooooong hiss.

Nice but two long.
It works

DigitalSignal:
No, I don't mind but, if it had been said that way, would you say yes?

if i were a young impressionable female, maybe, maybe not.

if its the guy's lucky day, she'd agree to his request.

if she wasnt really into him, then he might have to redo his format somewhat, perhaps with another lady.

...will only say yes if I have pre-feelings for him. Else the whole sermon will be irritating to me.

exactly.

but at the risk of being accused of "trampling all over his heart", the girl should at least be polite and appreciate the fact that he expressed his emotions to her.

its not a crime to admire someone, there just should be a way of having the guy redirect those feelings elsewhere, if the girl isnt available, and in a manner which doesnt hurt him too much.

imo.

Love is a strong thing, a very strong word, love gives a rlship a very stretched meaning... Wen wooing a girl, don't just pop dat world if u don't mean it (meanin it means being ready to take her to d altar at dat moment)... A matured girl won't fall prey 2 dat cos d speaker is lying

yertyr: .. A matured girl won't fall prey 2 dat cos d speaker is lying

hmm, well, you're a man [going by the m in your moniker], so we should take your word for it.

This one na serious long Tory sha.

After some pre-wooing and normal talking, invite her to something. In that something, after a moment of mutual laughter , change progress the emotional scene by tak ing her hand (don't ask) and say "Nkechi, I've been thinking about you and I together and I feel we would make a lot of sense. I want you to be my girl... Would you be my boo?"

She responds, or asks for more time.

The thing no suppose pass that.

If a (mature) girl likes you, she likes you.

2buff: This one na serious long Tory sha.

After some pre-wooing and normal talking, invite her to something. In that something, after a moment of mutual laughter , change progress the emotional scene by tak ing her hand (don't ask) and say "Nkechi, I've been thinking about you and I together and I feel we would make a lot of sense. I want you to be my girl... Would you be my boo?"

She responds, or asks for more time.

The thing no suppose pass that.

If a (mature) girl likes you, she likes you.

She may like you and you may be aware of what she already feels for you but, in a bid to be more romantic and make her feel special so as to intensify her feelings, if you truely want her, you may decide to go the way it's done above--- even if it's not in your house!

i don't know if dat ll make me date him, but it sure ll earn him a second date...

boron10: If you try this with a Nigerian yoruba babe, you would be welcomed with a looooooooooong hiss.

And why would a Yoruba baby give that kind of hiss at the above? Is it not good enough? *Chuckles *.

I find it boring.....

Bolushalom: I find it boring.....

Meaning, you had a boyfriend you loved, you never felt anything for him or the words were not strong enough to make emotional connection or perhaps he seems too needy?

i wish to settle down with you,will you marry me?
period!
no time!

Ive used similar format before. It worked flawlessly.but if geh no like u no try am

if i was liking u b4 and u said that crap, that will be the last tike u will eva see me or hear frm me. inshort i might even change my line cos of u.

i so hate mushy words/lies
i hate it when guys say they love me when they dont even knw me. smh
what happens to plain asking - would u be my gf/wife?
or most preferred- allowing the feeling develop mutualy.

any guy that makes the mistake of doing/sayin this crap don enter one chance for my side.