Rap i no envy u at all now o. See as she wan unleash venom on u.

you don me snake abi

princesa: you don me snake abi

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princesa:
i got quiz in an hours time...

On integrated science Thought you bought a JAMB form already?

Mazi_Omenuko:

On integrated science Thought you bought a JAMB form already?

Uhmmm. . . . The last chapter is a bit off. . No offence

#just saying#

Mynd_44:
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you don turn me snake abi

and please, two advert post on my thread, could you hide only those for me? page 14. thanks you

Mazi_Omenuko:

On integrated science Thought you bought a JAMB form already?

no its actually on Mac 322, i know you can't understand

and Jamb gave me automatic admission, remember my high score


@rap.... dey shine teeth wella, i neva forget you

Br3nd4: Uhmmm. . . . The last chapter is a bit off. . No offence

#just saying#

we learn from mistakes... So point it out.. Infact, I carry my eraser come, Was bored, decided to add something to that story, I'm glad I participated atleast I didn't freak out like some fella{SHINES TEETH AT FOXY}

Now rap, being busy that i couldn't go back to the thread to peruse your story again. Well, let me start by saying that you and that red mosquito guy write the same, and the review i gave to him also kind of applies to you.

Your intro was ok, you sounded nice with the way you referred to the light ray or something casting on the sleeping form of Lucan, but then it started nose diving oh......

What's with the sexual hints here and there about Lucan and That model girl, biko, it was fun while it lasted, lets move on......

Then the Nyanya body allusion didn't really fuse in with the narration, it made it sound award, like it was a child play or something

Well, your piece didn't have any spectacular action or plot development, your abrupt end worsen it, you could have atleast take us your readers to the main action that would happen when they met with Madam K. Who are you expecting to continue for you

then offcourse the paragraph issue stares still at us, better throw away that your phone and upgrade ok.....

i give you an average rating.

#going to see what more you have for us#

princesa: Now rap, being busy that i couldn't go back to the thread to peruse your story again. Well, let me start by saying that you and that red mosquito guy write the same, and the review i gave to him also kind of applies to you.

Your intro was ok, you sounded nice with the way you referred to the light ray or something casting on the sleeping form of Lucan, but then it started nose diving oh......

What's with the sexual hints here and there about Lucan and That model girl, biko, it was fun while it lasted, lets move on......

Then the Nyanya body allusion didn't really fuse in with the narration, it made it sound award, like it was a child play or something

Well, your piece didn't have any spectacular action or plot development, your abrupt end worsen it, you could have atleast take us your readers to the main action that would happen when they met with Madam K. Who are you expecting to continue for you

then offcourse the paragraph issue stares still at us, better throw away that your phone and upgrade ok.....

i give you an average rating.

#going to see what more you have for us#

is that all u've got to say? OMG, i've just missed road.. So u want action ehn? Come to ma bed na{joking}, if i'm permitted, i can give u d action u crave for. THANK BOO

princesa:

smh

HumbledbYGrace: smh

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princesa: Now rap, being busy that i couldn't go back to the thread to peruse your story again. Well, let me start by saying that you and that red mosquito guy write the same, and the review i gave to him also kind of applies to you.

Your intro was ok, you sounded nice with the way you referred to the light ray or something casting on the sleeping form of Lucan, but then it started nose diving oh......

What's with the sexual hints here and there about Lucan and That model girl, biko, it was fun while it lasted, lets move on......

Then the Nyanya body allusion didn't really fuse in with the narration, it made it sound award, like it was a child play or something

Well, your piece didn't have any spectacular action or plot development, your abrupt end worsen it, you could have atleast take us your readers to the main action that would happen when they met with Madam K. Who are you expecting to continue for you

then offcourse the paragraph issue stares still at us, better throw away that your phone and upgrade ok.....

i give you an average rating.

#going to see what more you have for us#

Pls,can any sane Literary critic and fan,make any sense out of this post What with all the typos glaring in our face,and yet you said you passed Jamb and got automatic ticket,abi admission? Is dat how to spell 'ofcourse','being' instead of 'been'and and other words wrongly misspelt? And yet you are critisizing somebody's effort at contributing to an important piece of literary work. If you were him,will you have done better?

Your own situation is like that of a teacher swapping role with one of his student in his own class. That moment when the teacher turns to a student.

Danhumprey: Pls,can any sane Literary critic and fan,make any
sense out of this post What with all the typos glaring in our
face,and yet you said you passed Jamb and got automatic ticket,abi
admission? Is dat how to spell 'ofcourse','being' instead of 'been'and
and other words wrongly misspelt? And yet you are critisizing somebody's
effort at contributing to an important piece of literary work. If you
were him,will you have done better?

Your own situation is like that of a teacher swapping role with one of
his student in his own class. That moment when the teacher turns to a student.

lets clap for him then, do you have a sense of synergy? can you confidently say that his piece match that of the others


abeg, story that touches the heart8)

princesa:

lets clap for him then, do you have a sense of synergy? can you confidently say that his piece match that of the others


abeg, story that touches the heart8)

take heart and move on

Lmao

@Princesa, rap maestro & danhumprey: y'all should chill!

What's the story line all about know?

princesa: Now rap, being busy that i couldn't go back to the thread to peruse your story again. Well, let me start by saying that you and that red mosquito guy write the same, and the review i gave to him also kind of applies to you.

Your intro was ok, you sounded nice with the way you referred to the light ray or something casting on the sleeping form of Lucan, but then it started nose diving oh......

What's with the sexual hints here and there about Lucan and That model girl, biko, it was fun while it lasted, lets move on......

Then the Nyanya body allusion didn't really fuse in with the narration, it made it sound award, like it was a child play or something

Well, your piece didn't have any spectacular action or plot development, your abrupt end worsen it, you could have atleast take us your readers to the main action that would happen when they met with Madam K. Who are you expecting to continue for you

then offcourse the paragraph issue stares still at us, better throw away that your phone and upgrade ok.....

i give you an average rating.

#going to see what more you have for us#

Choi!! If I should be this blunt, some folks on NL will say I am proud

*sigh* I want to be like you, princesa, when I grow up

Lol. Jokes aside, I haven't read the piece yet, but I am sure it aint that bad na

Cuddlemii: Lmao

@Princesa, rap maestro & danhumprey: y'all should chill!

yaaaay! Cuddles! Tell me you are back for good

Ishilove:
Choi!! If I should be this blunt, some folks on NL will say I am proud

*sigh* I want to be like you, princesa, when I grow up

Lol. Jokes aside, I haven't read the piece yet, but I am sure it aint that bad na

even if it was badt... Urs is to correct abi.. Make una no dey form abi we no see wetin she write 4 Taking chances.. She was corrected in some place na.. But... Lemme rest ma K's

Rap maestro I read your part and I liked it, nobody is perfect....Princesa was; too harsh...as a writer I don't think lashing @ others like that is fair. Especially newbies.

HumbledbYGrace: Rap maestro I read your part and I liked it, nobody is perfect....Princesa was; too harsh...as a writer I don't think lashing @ others like that is fair. Especially newbies.

who is a Newbie? Me? Lolz...

Rap maestro: who is a Newbie? Me? Lolz...

isn't it obvious?

HumbledbYGrace: isn't it obvious?

I don hear o.. Lwkmd, well its cos i haven't meet up to una standard na.. I don dey do no be 2day. Make i give u site(s)?

Rap maestro: I don hear o.. Lwkmd, well its cos i haven't meet up to una standard na.. I don dey do no be 2day. Make i give u site(s)?

be my guest

HumbledbYGrace: be my guest

*LOOKS RIGHT AND LEFT* invite me in.. Hope ur hubby ain't in though? Don't ask why i'm asking

Rap maestro: *LOOKS RIGHT AND LEFT* invite me in.. Hope ur hubby ain't in though? Don't ask why i'm asking

nvm...we r derailing the thread

Rap maestro: *LOOKS RIGHT AND LEFT* invite me in.. Hope ur hubby ain't in though? Don't ask why i'm asking

Same page, you've hit on little princesca, now on HBG, wadd'up with you?

After, they will say I'm the bad egg.

Mazi_Omenuko:

Same page, you've hit on little princesca, now on HBG, wadd'up with you?

After, they will say I'm the bad egg.

are u a reptile? jes asking

Oahray: yaaaay! Cuddles! Tell me you are back for good

yaaaay! Oahray! how have you been?