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Re: Story: Taking Chances by bumzel89(f): 7:48pm On Jun 20, 2013
Hey Princesa, your favourite silent reader, I just received that annoiting to comment, this piece is AWESOME. Thumbs up dear!
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nobody: 8:35pm On Jun 20, 2013
Wow! Nice write up smiley
Re: Story: Taking Chances by barag(f): 10:04pm On Jun 20, 2013
Br3nd4: what's this one oo.. wetin daisy dey feel like now sef.. mstcheeew

she's feelin lyk an African Queen.. when Jide was showin her pepper u did nt know abi? now its painin u (hell hath no fury like a woman scorned).
#team Daisy all the way#
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Cestmoi1(f): 11:59pm On Jun 20, 2013
whew! finally on d last page.i can now ff u bumper to bumper as u update.#now to d story
im sure daisy was able to match up to him because jide got softened,nt d angry jide she knew.im sure wit time she'll brace up and work towards having a luvly marriage.brenda is a character.she nids to take a chill pill.oya,make i join d crew,princesa abeg come n update now n dnt kip us waiting.xx
Re: Story: Taking Chances by christygenius(f): 7:46am On Jun 21, 2013
winkAll i can say is wow.... Wow... Wowwww. Princess gurl ure doing a grt job here. I've been a silent follower here & I hardly comment on stories but urs got me so so glued. I must say am very impressed & so proud of u dear. May God's grace & wisdom abound more wit u.keep up d wonderful work.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by emsheddy(m): 9:58am On Jun 21, 2013
princesa, gud morning. Abeg wetin u mean by book don end?
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Alicapapaya(f): 10:12am On Jun 21, 2013
Babe how far? I don't like owing so pls send me the details.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by obinrinrere: 12:46pm On Jun 21, 2013
@emsheddy
tot i was the only one that saw book don finish in her last commet.
@princesca
pls update 2day 2day now
why d silence why?why?
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Duchaello(f): 1:36pm On Jun 21, 2013
Francesca u rock really hard winkI love ur writeu,pls update soon smileymuch love dearie.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by tijehi(f): 6:16pm On Jun 21, 2013
Duchaello: Francesca u rock really hard winkI love ur writeu,pls update soon smileymuch love dearie.
. who is Francesca?
Re: Story: Taking Chances by emsheddy(m): 6:25pm On Jun 21, 2013
tijehi: . who is Francesca?

even me too dey wonder oh. Abeg who be Francesca?
Re: Story: Taking Chances by losprince(m): 7:02pm On Jun 21, 2013
emsheddy:

even me too dey wonder oh. Abeg who be Francesca?

What da f#c.. Who the hell is that?
Re: Story: Taking Chances by funmeme(f): 7:53pm On Jun 21, 2013
I caught d annointing...good job I must say. Keep up the good work.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nobody: 9:05pm On Jun 21, 2013
Ayo PMP: Okay, I stumbled upon this yesterday about 4am yesterday and I am now up to date waiting on the 'update' like everyone else.

VERY MUCH WELL DONE, Princessa!!! I stopped reading novels over a decade ago( fiction/romance/sci-fi, etc). I bought the Davinci code and planned to read it when I retire. Somehow you got me hooked and I am pleased I read it.

A few 'suggestions'(i will not bother with what others have said already) - you have made a few structural/grammatical errors - not typos. Some words can be quite tricky to use when it comes to the right tenses. A rule of thumb is if in doubt, do not use it, there is always a simpler alternative.

Secondly, in the bar fight section, Brenda and Grace attacked each other's tribes - youruba people do this, Igbo people are like that. While I don't doubt that people think and talk like this, as a writer you have become a moulder of public opinion, you are an influencer. Kids and teenagers will read your works and you will help form their outlook/perspectives on many issues. So why not kill two birds with one stone and help promote unity while entertaining people. As the saying goes, "with great power comes great responsibility".

These are just my opinions. Overall you have done a fantastic job!!!
why davinci's code nw? That book is somewhat demonic
Re: Story: Taking Chances by emsheddy(m): 11:01pm On Jun 21, 2013
ehn Princesa, we don too dey wait oh. Do something sharperly
Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 11:49am On Jun 22, 2013
Hello everyone,
i come with not too good a story, (depends on ur perspectives anyway) update wont be possible this week. Why?

After Wednesday by fire by force update, i fell ill. added to the fact dat i had an important class production spanning from Thursday till today. So there was no chance at all. Next week will be really hectic, quizzes thru out. So i can't chip in writing at this critical time, me I no wan hear 'i shoot bird, e mama fly'sad

So Update continues after next week, story hasn't ended. Please and please bear with mesmiley



#m.Esther and ebig, i apprec8 both of you and every other readers, just that my book finished then na grin and i can't remember everyones name But i appreciate u all. Thanks!
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nobody: 12:40pm On Jun 22, 2013
Ehya... Wishing u quick recoveri on behalf of all d readers...
Though we wuldn't luv to b on suspense 4 such a long period of tym but we luv ur gud health well enough to b patient...
Take gud kia of urself 4 uscheesy

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Re: Story: Taking Chances by Hoyeenz(f): 2:11pm On Jun 22, 2013
How is your health now? We understand dearie.
princesa: Hello everyone,
i come with not too good a story, (depends on ur perspectives anyway) update wont be possible this week. Why?

After Wednesday by fire by force update, i fell ill. added to the fact dat i had an important class production spanning from Thursday till today. So there was no chance at all. Next week will be really hectic, quizzes thru out. So i can't chip in writing at this critical time, me I no wan hear 'i shoot bird, e mama fly'sad

So Update continues after next week, story hasn't ended. Please and please bear with mesmiley



#m.Esther and ebig, i apprec8 both of you and every other readers, just that my book finished then na grin and i can't remember everyones name But i appreciate u all. Thanks!
Re: Story: Taking Chances by merciie(f): 3:57pm On Jun 22, 2013
Sorry dear about your health n all the stress, the Lord is your strenght.
I which you the quickest of recovery, health wise, mentally n intellectually, may u receive divine inspiration so that you may even surprise yourself and complete the updates before the new week runs out.
AMEN!!
Re: Story: Taking Chances by mesther96(f): 4:32pm On Jun 22, 2013
take gud care of ursef dear n dnt sacrifice ur skul activities at d xpense of dz oo!!smiley
Re: Story: Taking Chances by repogirl(f): 6:22pm On Jun 22, 2013
Awww, sorry bout ur health dearie, wish u speedy recovery, anytime ur update is ready, a ma gba be jare, mpele.
Also success in ur quizzes, God is your strength.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by hajiscojas(f): 7:14pm On Jun 22, 2013
I love ur write up dear, I bet u hv a 1daful ahead of u, all d best I cnt wait 4 d concluding part of taking chancesI love ur write up dear, I bet u hv a 1daful ahead of u, all d best I cnt wait 4 d concluding part of taking chancesI love ur write up dear, I bet u hv a 1daful ahead of u, all d best I cnt wait 4 d concluding part of taking chances
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nicoleama(f): 10:48pm On Jun 22, 2013
Princesa honey,I'm completely glued to ma laptop.Rock on gal...d story z interestn
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Fishoy(f): 12:06am On Jun 23, 2013
Get well soon dear...pls take good care of u
*shouts fr ITbomb*come take care of ur wife oosmiley
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Connoisseur(m): 12:16am On Jun 23, 2013
#teamtabletforprincesa
send me details for support

Nice work girl
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Cestmoi1(f): 11:02am On Jun 23, 2013
get well soon....d Lord is ur strength.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by ITbomb(m): 11:41am On Jun 23, 2013
Fishoy: Get well soon dear...pls take good care of u
*shouts fr ITbomb*come take care of ur wife oosmiley
Don't worry , she will soon be ok , I'm always by her side .
We have done every necessary test including malaria , typhoid and pregnancy and the results are encouraging
Princesa dear , I wish u a speedy recovery IJN.
Re: Story: Taking Chances by losprince(m): 12:16pm On Jun 23, 2013
Dear,
We are all wishing you quick recovery and after that a good and steady health.







grin

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Re: Story: Taking Chances by princesa(f): 1:01pm On Jun 23, 2013
thank you all, am grateful and am strong.smiley
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Fishoy(f): 1:04pm On Jun 23, 2013
ITbomb:
Don't worry , she will soon be ok , I'm always by her side .
We have done every necessary test including malaria , typhoid and pregnancy and the results are encouraging
Princesa dear , I wish u a speedy recovery IJN.
good hussy...winkwink
Re: Story: Taking Chances by Nobody: 1:08pm On Jun 23, 2013
Awwww... our Princiii... be strong aite?.. the lord is your muscle wink

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