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Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 6:37pm On Oct 15, 2005
HA I want to log off and think more, I will log in later.

I hope I get the right words this time.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 6:38pm On Oct 15, 2005
u have tried my brother. Good JOb!
Re: Original Love Poems by Missworld(f): 8:29pm On Oct 15, 2005
GP is out of it! He's unstopable! Good words dear!
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:03pm On Oct 15, 2005
What Would I Be Aniekan?

What would the Yin be without the Yang -

What would lemon pie be without the meringue?

What would false be without true -

And what would I be without you?

Aniekan what will I be without you?
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:05pm On Oct 15, 2005
To Hot Angel


.A Lover's Rendezvous

Each night my visions wander far,

To a place I cannot travel to;

And there they mingle with your thoughts,

In a lover's rendezvous.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:06pm On Oct 15, 2005
Missworld

You Make Me Complete
I cannot live without your love -

My life would not be the same;

For I would be incomplete,

Like a candle without a flame.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:09pm On Oct 15, 2005
Thanks Vexxy!

Thank you for your thoughtfulness & kindness,

And your caring ways;

Thank you for your friendship,

All these many days.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 9:13pm On Oct 15, 2005
Thanks for that GP.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:22pm On Oct 15, 2005
Dearest Love

I have lived for a long time (responsible for/dependent upon) no one, answering to no one and committed to no one except myself. During this period of my life, I considered the World mine for the taking and truly believed that I was living life to the fullest. Then, you came into the picture, and all of a sudden, I realized that I was deceiving myself.

love, I am an incomplete (man/woman) in need of wholeness. I find that my life is not all that I thought it was. In fact, it is terribly lacking in many things, the foremost being love. Now, through some great fortune, I have found that love and along with it the one person who can make my life truly complete.
You are that person, and I have somehow fallen hopelessly and undeniably in love with you. To be honest, I never thought I would ever utter those words, but now, they come forth effortlessly and with great sincerity. I'll be forever greatful to you for showing me just how shallow my life was. At last, I have a chance to give it depth and purpose.

I wanted to tell you this in person, but I knew that the proper words would escape me. I wrote you this letter instead. Please call me after you read it, and we'll talk.

Until I hear from you, I remain totally yours in thought and spirit.

Love,
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:25pm On Oct 15, 2005
Dearest Aniekan, I believe that our love is (blessed/ordained) by God. It is a union of two spirits destined for everlasting happiness. Thus, you have truly become the star of my life which brings me light in this dark world, and warmth when I need it. You offer me the promise of renewal, the joy of living, the peace of mind that comes from sharing and caring, and that shoulder to lean on in times of stress. You are my Swallow from Capistrano - my precious butterfly, and I will cherish you and love you forever.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:45pm On Oct 15, 2005
Thinking

Thinking. Can't stop thinking.
Think of you. This. That. That Life. That day.
That dream was mine.
A utopian dream.

Your aura; struck me like lightning to a tree.
Pointy, like a star, you shone.
So bright, yet not shining as a star would,
But as apparent as white chalk on a blackboard.
You would not show off like a star.
Yet you did burn so hot, so fiercely, so explosively -
you were a star in my eyes.

But like all stars, you died.
That gas was gone.
No pull between us.
The atmosphere was dry
and I began to choke.
I was taken from my star - like a child being taken from its poor,
drunken mother - I did not know what was happening.
Dazed. Confused. Without true reality, I there sat.
Wondering.

The end of my world had only just begun, with yours beginning.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:51pm On Oct 15, 2005
Entrapment

Hopelessly bound
unfettered
by the chains of love's grip
- greatest gift,
fate's cruelest curse.

Wherefore do I weep
at knowing the joy,
the warmth,
at feeling the peace,
the fire.

Wherefore do I weep
unable to complete ,
to be,
unknown the kiss,
the flames.

Wherefore do I weep
at loving not living
seeing not touching
breathing not sharing
holding not loving?

All,
because I, The Fool,
am no more?
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:55pm On Oct 15, 2005
Things I love about you.

Your eyes
which first held me captivated
where I stood.

Your smile
to dazzle the sun
and warm every corner of my soul.

Your voice
like a sparkling mountain stream
which flows into my heart.

Your walk
and the way your gracefulness
takes my breath away.

Your hair
about which I dreamed
cascading into my face
as you leaned over me.

Your hands
whose caress I crave
to hold my face
in their tenderness.

Your arms
I long to have around my neck
as you pull me close
to your warmth.

Most of all
everything you are
changed the way I feel about my life.

I love you.

Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 9:58pm On Oct 15, 2005
Hand In Hand

Laying underneath the stars,
On a warm silent night.
Your arms are wrapped around me,
And everything feels right.

You kiss me sweet and softly,
I feel your warm gentle touch,
You help me feel protected
Under the sweet night sky rush.

My world before me is perfect.
There's nowhere else I want to be,
Except laying underneath the stars
Hand in hand, you and me.

Just when everything is perfect,
And you seem so delicately sweet,
A rush of wind comes past me
As I'm swept beneath my feet.

Nothing could be more right,
There's nowhere else I want to be.
Let's take a walk my only love,
Hand in hand, you and me.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 10:07pm On Oct 15, 2005
Save me the pains.

Save me the pains of this psychological turture.
save me the pains of sleeplessness.
save me the pains of this agony in my heart and mind.
save me the agony of being lonely
save me the agony of this anorexia.
save me the pains of loosing massive weight.
save me the pains of moody situation.
save me the pains of this all day soloquesing
Just forgive and save me the pains and agony.

I cry and yell, no one seems to know why.
no one seems to feel my emotions.
no one seems to care about my well being.
no one asks why the mood suddenly change
and massive weight loss.

I cry all night and wet my bed silly
but i found no respite.
It's hurt and hurt from you all day
leaving my day blue
and leaving me gloomy
for God's sake save me the pains.
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 11:39pm On Oct 15, 2005
Ohh GP. I love the last one. cry cry cry Love hurts ehh. I am sure she'll soon save u the pain. cry
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 8:24am On Oct 16, 2005
Yes really hurt HA cry
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 9:04pm On Oct 16, 2005
[center]My cupcake.......
 
Angel of my dreams, light of my world my heart yearn for u
no matter the distance my love i will till hold u closer to me
if loving u means that i am wrong then i sure don't want to be right
if it cause me to walk through the wilderness to find u i will. I need u
My fanstay was to meet a prince like u, i had wish for someone like u
my heart cries for someone like u, to God be the glory we finally met

My world will never be complete without u, my love if loving u is a crime
then let me be a criminal, my heart desires Ur love, i seek to find u, my emotions
yearn for Ur touch. My lips water to kiss Ur sugar lips, my soul yearns for Ur soul
words cannot describe my feelings for u, only God above knows that i love u
I will always love u despite Ur fault, i will surrender my love to u and i will love to
breath the air u breath. My baby my life is empty without u here with me.

I was swept off my feet when i met u because Ur charms are just too much
i couldn't control my self when i first laid eyes on u, my flowers of love what would
i do without u, where would i go without u by my side, the clouds above will always
remain blue as long as our love continue to flourish, my heart will always be at peace
knowing that a part of me is out there thinking about me. I love u.

Especially for U..............[/center]
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 11:48pm On Oct 16, 2005
Princess the poet I feel you for real.
Good one dear!
Re: Original Love Poems by hotangel2(f): 4:42am On Oct 17, 2005
That's deep. It aint for me.. but i LOVE IT!
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 10:50am On Oct 17, 2005
Thanks guys.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 12:50pm On Oct 17, 2005
Love tin -n-tin
Re: Original Love Poems by Missworld(f): 2:12pm On Oct 17, 2005
Thanks Gp!
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 2:25pm On Oct 17, 2005
Uchetobi.

Just like a rose,
so precious and rare,
is the forever friendship
the two of us share.
~
Planted with kindness,
it's warmed by the sun
of caring and sharing,
laughter and fun.
~
It's grounded in trust
and nurtured by love,
with a sprinkling of grace
from God up above.
~
Tears of sadness and joy,
like dew,
renew this friendship
I share with you.
~
And in the heart's garden,
we find the room
to be ourselves,
to grow and bloom.
~
A blessing
of beauty unsurpassed,
our friendship's a flower
that will always last.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 2:28pm On Oct 17, 2005
Missworld 4ever!


Sending you my love
with words spoken true
From the depths of my heart
I send them to you

Like petals of a rose
is the touch of your face
I can feel it every time
we're wrapped in embrace

The taste of your lips
is like sweet dripping honey
Feels like butterflies swirlin'
inside of my tummy

The warmth of your touch
is like a torch of fire
The tingling inside
makes me burn with desire

So I just wanna say
my love for you is true
Along with these words
I wanna say "I Love You
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 5:07pm On Oct 17, 2005
Secret

There is one whom I adore
With my hands I'll love to explore
Rubbing, kissing, cuddling galore!

When I close my eyes I see
Me with you and you with me
Joined together forever we'll be

My hands reach out
My heart gives a shout
When he's absent, I pout!

Together we may find
Our love intertwined
Combined and confined

But you see
My love will always be
A burning secret within me

V
Re: Original Love Poems by Missworld(f): 5:16pm On Oct 17, 2005
Nice one Vexxy!
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 5:23pm On Oct 17, 2005
That's for me i guess tongue
Re: Original Love Poems by Princess(f): 11:02am On Oct 18, 2005
Purify me My love............

sounds like thunder when u speak
when it rains it feel like love charms dropping down on me
hold me, protect me, watch over me, love and adore me
like an angel u my love should purify me, sing a love song to me
come closer let me feel ur warm body next to mine, touch my body
slowly, kiss me softly, hide me away from heart broke, babyboo
promise to be there when my dry land don't fertile me some rain
make me feel like a real princess and purify me like an untouchable child.
Re: Original Love Poems by Greatpeter(m): 1:33pm On Oct 18, 2005
I hear you. kiss
Re: Original Love Poems by Missworld(f): 8:05pm On Oct 18, 2005
Oh boy that's a good one Princess and may your wishes come true. Damn me I can't write or maybe I don't know what to write since love is out of it.
Re: Original Love Poems by vexxy(f): 2:11am On Oct 19, 2005
Missworld

I've missd you
I hope you've been cool
And I wish you success
In all that you do

You are precious as a gem
Set out and set apart
I mean what I say
From the bottom of my heart

I want you to see
No matter where you are
That you mean the world to me
And I pray that you go far
tongue


V

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