Nice update frank, had my heart in my mouth till d end.
Errrrrm, when is the next update *shines teeth*

I did not want to comment again until I started from the beginning again and now I thoroughly understand the story. Well done frank. This last chapter was well thought out. The wait was definitely worth it.

But don't let your readers wait for long before you update.

More inspiration to your head and ink to your pen.

Have a blessed weekend.

Hmmm... I was totally scared.

Nice update Frank.

Im really scared..,., lucky wouldn't hav intervened... Nw he's lyf is in danger....

Awesome mr frankenstein!

Awesome franklin..
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All izz well!

Frank, no hiccups, you are brained!

Like the boss's boss that he is. Oga frank has delivered another masterpiece of an episode. Tuale sir. U too much.
@cherie I'm cul

frank the gifted impresses us again!!!!!

Waow dis last update got my attention.....throw my pop corn away need to concentrate and @last I said thumbs up man more ink to pen ;DWaow dis last update got my attention.....throw my pop corn away need to concentrate and @last I said thumbs up man more ink to pen

mZ sleeq: Nice update frank, had my heart in my mouth till d end.
Errrrrm, when is the next update *shines teeth*

Lol, the nxt update will definately come by monday evnin

Teespice: I did not want to comment again until I started from the beginning again and now I thoroughly understand the story. Well done frank. This last chapter was well thought out. The wait was definitely worth it.

But don't let your readers wait for long before you update.

More inspiration to your head and ink to your pen.

Have a blessed weekend.

Thanks dear, I will try nt to delay again

j-slimz:
Hmmm... I was totally scared.

Nice update Frank.

Thanks... Was scared pple wouldn't like it

Hameenat94: Im really scared..,., lucky wouldn't hav intervened... Nw he's lyf is in danger....

Sweet heart, hw u de?

Hi @penzino, klsib, melancholy, 3dimension, datopdlink... Ur comments are my sleeping tonic for the night

Xclusvibebay: Waow dis last update got my attention.....throw my pop corn away need to concentrate and @last I said thumbs up man more ink to pen ;DWaow dis last update got my attention.....throw my pop corn away need to concentrate and @last I said thumbs up man more ink to pen

Lol, was it that nice? Tanks anyway

Winnie1950: My God am so scared! This update got me shaking. Uncle frank: u are simply better than the best.

Winnie dear!!

I nearly jumped out my skin. U are 100 much

Choi! Inspector Lucky don enter one chance.Serves Linda right,greedy girl.Praying for Ekene to recover soon.You are doing a fantastic job,Frank.Thanks for the updates.

Wow! All I can say is wow!

As always, Frank dear you're great!



But erm...erm...the big gate of James compound they finally drove out in, when James arrived, was it not locked immediately after? Me was thinking that with the whole security hideout ish, the gate would constantly remain closed.

But i didn't read about anyone opening the gate before James and Ghaoul finally left the premises.

Or maybe the house doesn't have a big gate for cars and then the narrow gate for trekkers, Even though ghaoul had kicked it open like a wooden door?


(dnt be annoyed and think that of all things Princesa should be worried about gates i just want ur work to be perfect)

Are u Ghaoul?

Jumizie13: I nearly jumped out my skin. U are 100 much

Oga Frank, Princessa has a valid point there imho. D update was wow byt is it just me or did it just feel like u kinda rushed dis update so we fans wouldn't complain!? Well dats just my tots sha nor worry.

This update was wow as usual. I was practically watching it while reading. Nice one man.

I know Frank will answer better but he mentioned that Clifford wt Ghauol inside him already kicked down d gate when he first arrived so it's safe 2 say that d gates were off it hinges wen James n his peeps finally drove out @Princessa

Fingers Crossed!

It would av bin unlyk frank if inspector lucky didnt gt hurt in anyway bt y wuld u allow ghaoul go wit d medallion nw.jst hpin e rili cnt unlock his powers witout saint.vry lovely update as expectd of frankestein

princesa: As always, Frank dear you're great!



But erm...erm...the big gate of James compound they finally drove out in, when James arrived, was it not locked immediately after? Me was thinking that with the whole security hideout ish, the gate would constantly remain closed.

But i didn't read about anyone opening the gate before James and Ghaoul finally left the premises.

Or maybe the house doesn't have a big gate for cars and then the narrow gate for trekkers, Even though ghaoul had kicked it open like a wooden door?


(dnt be annoyed and think that of all things Princesa should be worried about gates i just want ur work to be perfect)

Thanks princess, I really was in a hurry to update that I missed that out. Honestly I already had that figured out before writing that scene but forgot to put down what I had in mind.
I planned that d driver would drive though the closed gate with the hummer jeep and tearing it apart. I can't believe I forgot to put it down. Infact that was why I made them use that car to escape.
I am sorry for overlooking such a critical event. I for one would have felt my intelligece was being insulted as a reader. Sorry guys.

Ms Spaqs: I know Frank will answer better but he mentioned that Clifford wt Ghauol inside him already kicked down d gate when he first arrived so it's safe 2 say that d gates were off it hinges wen James n his peeps finally drove out @Princessa

Yes, u could say that, bt unfortunately I mentioned he broke down the small gate. But all the same there really would have been no time to close the gate as princess suggested given the event that followed.

frank3.16:


Thanks princess, I really was in a hurry to update that I missed that out. Honestly I already had that figured out before writing that scene but forgot to put down what I had in mind.
I planned that d driver would drive though the closed gate with the hummer jeep and tearing it apart. I can't believe I forgot to put it down. Infact that was why I made them use that car to escape.
I am sorry for overlooking such a critical event. I for one would have felt my intelligece was being insulted as a reader. Sorry guys.

like tear the gate down in an Arnold Shwaznigger style? for this Abuja wey we all dey so?


okay oh, just put it in sometime, its very important to the scene.


@ms spaq & cold faya...to the betterment of this story *cheers*

Oga frank the Don my prayer is that you will not suffer from writters block in JESUS NAME .AMEN.

frank3.16:


Thanks princess, I really was in a hurry to update that I missed that out. Honestly I already had that figured out before writing that scene but forgot to put down what I had in mind.
I planned that d driver would drive though the closed gate with the hummer jeep and tearing it apart. I can't believe I forgot to put it down. Infact that was why I made them use that car to escape.
I am sorry for overlooking such a critical event. I for one would have felt my intelligece was being insulted as a reader. Sorry guys.

Thats why its good to have an e-jotter or manual where you can put down some little important info/ideas that just pop-out your head from nowhere, so as not to forget them later..

No problem! We still enjoyed it.. Gboosa for you...
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All izz well!

Whoa...this story is just getting better by the day,i cant wait for the last chapter of this story

Frank you are simply amazing.....pls be my mentor.

Oga frank has done it again o...ur just so on point...em em...wen james dragged linda out d bed room was she putting on just pant n bra or she used d bedsheet to cover her body? cos d last time u talked of; her she purposely opened her body for james to admire...just curious.