Please at this juncture, if you've never commented, I need ur comments now.


I want us 2 rub minds together, suggest, discuss before I drop another update by 5:00pm.



1) Did Darasimi die?

2)If she died, do you think when the princess and her friends are discovered, they'll be set free?


3)How do you think the secret behind Ray and Tony being twins will be revealed?


4)What mistake have you noticed so far, please drop it so that I can ammend.


LOVE U ALL, YOU ARE DARLINGS!

Np, I guess you were the one that said I shouldn't start with it now... I want to end this story, it'll soon end...*within a week..


My Oga no vexing, I be wan finish that other stori "no matter what", don finish am since. Ya suspense tooooo much na somethin to enjoy y I de wait for Ya upd8

Temitope Daniel U is too much no mistake carry the go.
Feofle oya comment make our Oga T.Dan upd8

Ehiblessing oya comment now

I've seen mistakes in spellings sha bt can't remember dem o, cos of d interest i hv in d story....... Plss kip it up..... @ ur back till d end. can't wait till 5pm.. It's far o.

I believe that darasimi wil not die. I believe!, i believe!!, i believe!!!. **mind shaking**
And to you, T. Dan, more ink to your pen, and more gbosa to ur face. Lots of love

Huh? Gunshot?? Daniel! Come and update. Plz!

Darasimi can't die,else what is d rationale behind d title and I dnt think temitope will kill adeola and also kill dara (just kidding) well I m aggresively waiting 4 update

Darasimi die ke, impossicant. Actor no dey die

Damilola and her friends will definitely pay for their sins, no sinner will go unpunished.

Daniel come and mark my script and pls download now 5pm too far

Gunshot bawo? Daniel! Okay, I don surrender , come update am now. Had I know I should have come to read this by 5:30pm..

Temitope come and update o ........

On your 11th update on page 0.. It should be taiwo, Kehinde and Aarin.. Not Idowu.. Try and change it...

***appears on d tread dancin skelewuu*** yea i don catch upp.hmmm DANIEL my name sake ,gud job boss....ama waitn 4 updation....

Gunshot was heard
Tip-toeing into the thread, why are people sad Just saw LogDwhiz correcting me, it has been ammended immediately!


Lakeshizu, sad? Please don't be.. Updating soon.


I'll attend to the comments of everyone later, lemme start typn but I want you all to check back 5:00pm, I mean it, from 4:55- 5:05pm I'd have updated..


#love u all#

The gunshot I think should be from the policemen ...that were trailing the kidnappers from skul..but stil here. Dying of suspense

Temitope Daniel:


Please at this juncture, if you've never commented, I need ur comments now.



I want us 2 rub minds together, suggest, discuss before I drop another update by 5:00pm.



1) Did Darasimi die?

2)If she died, do you think when the princess and her friends are discovered, they'll be set free?


3)How do you think the secret behind Ray and Tony being twins will be revealed?


4)What mistake have you noticed so far, please drop it so that I can ammend.


LOVE U ALL, YOU ARE DARLINGS!

dara wont die. D princess nd her frnds will definitely b caught.only Omisola daughter(seun) so she will cum 4rm nowia 2 say d truth.waitin

Temitope Daniel:


Please at this juncture, if you've never commented, I need ur comments now.


I want us 2 rub minds together, suggest, discuss before I drop another update by 5:00pm.



1) Did Darasimi die?

2)If she died, do you think when the princess and her friends are discovered, they'll be set free?


3)How do you think the secret behind Ray and Tony being twins will be revealed?


4)What mistake have you noticed so far, please drop it so that I can ammend.


LOVE U ALL, YOU ARE DARLINGS!

heheheeeeee,still watching ur back dude. Darasimi will not die,d gunshot has already confirm dat. Darasimi and her friends will b called and dealt with because d king will soon realise that she is not her daughter.D queen will probably b sentenced.
Twinz issue Only seun can do d magic here (omosola's daugter) cos she remains d only person dat knos about d story and still living.
Mistake so far I notice typo errors and incomplete or incorrect sentences at some points. Dose cud av resulted from fast-typing mode. Above all, I say thumb up guy! You are d bomb...............****Relaxation mode: expecting DAN while chopping cola******

mayor10: The gunshot I think should be from the policemen ...that were trailing the kidnappers from skul..but stil here. Dying of suspense

Lol.. Policemen.. My mouth will be closed oh.. I won't disclose anything buh policemen sha...... Hmmn...

Hameenat94:
dara wont die. D princess nd her frnds will definitely b caught.only Omisola daughter(seun) so she will cum 4rm nowia 2 say d truth.waitin

Someone was shot, on her heart , she won't die?


C ds Hameenat oh.. Lolz

ollyboy009:
heheheeeeee,still watching ur back dude. Darasimi will not die,d gunshot has already confirm dat. Darasimi and her friends will b called and dealt with because d king will soon realise that she is not her daughter.D queen will probably b sentenced.
Twins issue?? i guess only gloria,funke and daniel can exposed dat.
Mistake so far I notice typo errors and incomplete or incorrect sentences at some point. Dats cud av resulted from fast-typing mode. Above all, I say thumb up guy! You are bomb...............****Relaxation mode: expecting DAN while chopping cola******

Hmmmn.... Relax wella, cola? For my thread. Order for suya na.. *winks*

Dchiefpriest: ***appears on d tread dancin skelewuu*** yea i don catch upp.hmmm DANIEL my name sake ,gud job boss....ama waitn 4 updation....

I'm ur namesake? Wao.. Welcome, come pick seat beside Hameenat...

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A GUNSHOT WAS HEARD.


••••






Since the incidence of the acid has happened, Daniel had been following Darasimi around the school with the help of one of his room mates. They both sat to discuss ways of saving her from problem. Emmanuel, his room mate brought different ideas of knowing who the people had been trailing her and the ways to deal with them all. They've started going around with camera to record and take pictures as their evidence. Daniel had gone back to the palace too to pick the car that was brought for him by the King in case something will happen.


"Guy, are you this crazy for love?" Emmanuel asked him wondering as he got down from the parked car.


'Sure, but you'll help me a lot..' He uttered.


"Sure now, I've started helping you." Emmanuel replied.


'Not only that, I want you to help me to be sleeping behind her hostel for like a month.' He uttered.


'What! Na me dey date her!' Emmanuel shouted.


"We'll be sleeping in my car, no problem." He replied.


'No.. I still don't want that. Its not ideal, if you die because of her, who told you she won't marry again!' Emmanuel convinced.


"I know but I must still protect her." He replied.


'We both know that the security of the hostel is now tough, if at all anyone wants to catch her, it should be in the afternoon and we'll always follow her.' Emmanuel said.


'But this work will be tiresome. We won't have rest?' Dan laughed.


"Na you wey wan protect now." Emma laughed.



...



It was Monday morning, Darasimi was off to the lecture hall, dressed in a pencil jeans and fitted blouse. She had her handbag on her and was looking beautiful. Everywhere was quiet and people were scanty. The guys got down from the car and drugged her into the car and ran off.


They were behind the hostel as quick as possible and had been following her till they saw what happened. They zoomed off after the car immediately, looking so afraid. "Should we call the police?" Emmanuel asked.


'No..'

'Why not the policemen?' He asked trembling with fear.


" I don't have any number that leads there now! They'll be late sef. You know too, we don't know what they'd have done before those useless policemen arrive! Are those stuffs in the booth?" He shouted reducing his speed so that he won't be suspected.



'Yes. Stop shouting jurh, I'm dead afraid, running after hired killers with just siren radio and bangers.' He shivered.
...



They got her to an uncompleted building as wished and tied her with a rope against a
pillar at the second floor. They got a place
that was very quiet and no one will ever
believe some one was there.
The princess and her friends were already
gathered there also and rounded her up,
staring at her angrily. The boss of the hired
assassins already stood at Dara's from
laughing wickedly, Darasimi's vision was
blurred then and couldn't see properly.



Daniel and Emmanuel were by the bush side. "I guess they want to kill her now!" Emmanuel shivered.



They lighted a banger stick with them and threw if further. The radio siren was also gotten and everything turned out to be as if the policemen were around.



A GUNSHOT WAS HEARD.


It was a banger sound but everyone dismissed immediately and on hearing the siren, they didn't wait but all ran away. Emmanuel was busy recording and taking pictures from where they were so as to use as an evidence for the policemen.



They waited for a little time and could see from where they were hiding that everyone had ran away, they ran up and untied her, straight to the hospital and picked things that can serve as their evidences.



••••



Emmanuel and Daniel were at the reception discussing about all that happened that day.


"But you are rather brave and strong. For us to have followed and use bangers as our gun and dismiss them all. But I'm still eager about something. Do you think the policemen would listen to this?" Emmanuel asked


'Why won't they? We have our evidences. The pictures, video, the handbag of the princess we met at the scene too.' He replied.


"But, we might have died if not for God's mercy, using a banger and trailing hired-killers." Emmanuel said still shivering.


'Its God's mercy. I don't have any policeman's number and before we start describing everything, and before they'd get there the man at her front might have killed her, she might have died if we'd not been following her!' He uttered, his heartbeat still beating at a fast rate.



The Doctor came out to them. Both stood up at him immediately. "Was she drugged?" The Doctor asked.


'Yes ma, she was.' Dan quickly replied.


'Hmmn..' The Doctor sighed.


"Can I see her parents?" She asked.


'You can tell us anything.' Emmanuel said.


'I'm sorry..'


...

Temitope Daniel:


I'm ur namesake? Wao.. Welcome, come pick seat beside Hameenat...

yesoooo my namesake tankx alot 4 d seat oooo , see me sitdown wit Hameena! Omg ,my own don beta ermm TDAN come nd clear dis suspenceooo cos i can do funny tins wen am on suspence......funny tins lyk erm ....i coment my reserv.*winks* **** rings my hand around Hameena's neck nd gives her a french k**s ****

This wasn't our bargain now dis update seems lng because of the former one u added to it plz come on n give us some more

ghen ghen
stl balancing well for more updates, *popcorn eating mode activated*

Dchiefpriest: yesoooo my namesake tankx alot 4 d seat oooo , see me sitdown wit Hameena! Omg ,my own don beta ermm TDAN come nd clear dis suspenceooo cos i can do funny tins wen am on suspence......funny tins lyk erm ....i coment my reserv.*winks* **** rings my hand around Hameena's neck nd gives her a french k**s ****

Lol... Sha take am easy..

kingphilip: This wasn't our bargain now dis update seems lng because of the former one u added to it plz come on n give us some more

Serious? Okay ba3 low oh. Tryn 2 charge.

slim_bimaz: ghen ghen
stl balancing well for more updates, *popcorn eating mode activated*

Oya continue eating, guess I'll update soon, ba3 low....

DANIEL!!! Tis is not fair, u stop @ scenes wit a lot of suspense nice 1 sha, pls update soon ooo and i hope he wont jst go to d police to report cos she is d king's daughter u dnt xpect him to allow his child go to jail, its best it is jept a secret @least till wen damilola's own is revealed, anyway u ar d writer u can write it hw eva u deem fit dis ar jst my thoughts.

Mr T Dan i beg come update o.

Mr T Dan i beg come update o.
Dnt mind pricess cuz owu iya gbon lomo ma ran (like mother like Daugther

*yawns* i don reach una place. T.dan u 1 in a million

*Heaves a Heavy sigh of relief*
Hmm,, I finally caught up with you guys...
This story is suspense filled, intriguing and interesting... I so much love it.. Thumbs up bro...