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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 7:17pm On Oct 20, 2013
Nice one Chistar! I love the toasting part. I literally had a wide grin on my face reading it.

I'd like to know, who owns the car zainab and jummy went to the club with?! I think one or both of them no longer had a car after the accident spree, or so i thought.

Also, Caro is not originally owned by L.A.X, it is a collective song by Star Boy Entertainment. S.B.E is Wizkid's personal record label which has L.A.X as an artiste. Just like when EME sang "Baddestboy." i may be wrong though.


PeacE

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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 7:57pm On Oct 20, 2013
sкчscrαρεr™:
Nice one Chistar! I love the toasting part. I literally had a wide grin on my face reading it.

I'd like to know, who owns the car zainab and jummy went to the club with?! I think one or both of them no longer had a car after the accident spree, or so i thought.

Also, Caro is not originally owned by L.A.X, it is a collective song by Star Boy Entertainment. S.B.E is Wizkid's personal record label which has L.A.X as an artiste. Just like when EME sang "Baddestboy." i may be wrong though.


PeacE
hmmm.. Ele gidi gan!! (Hope u understand yoruba grin).
Firstly, the car in question is Zainab's, Jummy had an accident with hers but Zainab "accident" wasn't a road accident, it was Richard who pushed her, remember?... So Zainab's car is still in perfect conditon, well, until now grin.

And about the L.A.X thing, I guess u r right, I just checked the title of the song on my fone and it said "Starboy ft L.A.X and Wizkid", I won't modify the post though, I likethe effect its giving grin, thanks bro smiley
hibty: See chistar ooo,I actually love L.A.X's part,wizkid was jst repeating..... D lax's voice z very sexy *grins* nyc update!!!
lol, you saying "wizkid was just repeating," is that not how all his songs are, and the whole Nigerian music is?... Lol, L.A.X voice is sexy? Dafuckk?? I comment my reserve grin... Thanks though, I dedicate d update to you wink
Chuksemi: Hmmm. Nice story. But I really think zainab will never marry E.A, NEVER EXPOSE THE TRUE EXTENT OF YOUR ANGER TO A WOMAN YOU ARE STILL TRYING TO COURT.
thanks. But are you trying to say he shouldn't be "angry" at her because he is interested in her? He is only human na.. About them marrying, let watch and see... Nobody might even get married at the end grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 8:19pm On Oct 20, 2013
sochistar: hmmm.. Ele gidi gan!! (Hope u understand yoruba).

Yes i do! I'm yoruba.

sochistar: Firstly, the car in question is Zainab's, Jummy had an accident with hers but Zainab "accident" wasn't a road accident, it was Richard who pushed her, remember?...
Oh! Pardon my manners, I remember now.

sochistar: So Zainab's car is still in perfect conditon, well, until now.

Ok. thanks!!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by adegwurulez(m): 8:34pm On Oct 20, 2013
its gettin hotter and hotter... 9c story
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by BabieGhagha(f): 9:35pm On Oct 20, 2013
wonders ar wonderful.dis is gettin thougher.nd for d caro song,d song dey make me go gaga.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 11:18pm On Oct 20, 2013
adegwurulez: its gettin hotter and hotter... 9c story
thanks bro.
Babie Ghagha: wonders ar wonderful.dis is gettin thougher.nd for d caro song,d song dey make me go gaga.
lol.. You like caro? You don't mean it... angry, so u like the singer too shey? angry embarassed... Just kidding grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 11:26pm On Oct 20, 2013
Err... I got an advice from a friend/ and reader to make a slight adjustment to the previous post, and it sounded good to me so I've modified a small portion of the post, if you can't go and read the post all over again, this is just they part I changed
Meanwhile, at the other end of the same club sat three guys: Henry, Mathew and Oscar, they were talking and of course, drinking.

Amongst the three, only Henry wore sunshades - its funny how people where sunshades to a night club, what an Irony?.

Anyway, Henry was a fairly tall and hadsome guy of 29, "beans" brown in complexion and he had that kind of lips that would make you want to kiss him. Below his left ear, on his neck, was a tattoo; the tattoo looked like a cross if viewed from the front and like a star if view from the rare, the artist who drew it definitely did a swell job.

Mathew on the other hand, was almost as tall as Henry and of the same age grade, but was "M.T.N" yellow in complexion, he had already lost count of the amount of times people mistook him for an albino, and yes, he wasn't bad looking atall.

Thirdly, Oscar was sorta like the exact opposite, he was roughly the same height with a maltina bottle - okay, I agree that am just exagerrating but you get the idea, don't you? He also a swollen lip which looked like he had hit the lip on something hard, or maybe he was involed in a fight, who knows?

They were among the host of guys who were spell bound by the appearance of Jummy and Zainab.


Please note that I added some othere stuffs that aren't quoted "here and there" so as to make the story flow and the storyline still remain the same. Sorry for the inconvenieces
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by valyzubxx(m): 11:27pm On Oct 20, 2013
Babie Ghagha: wonders ar wonderful.dis is gettin thougher.nd for d caro song,d song dey make me go gaga.

Infact wey my ear piece sef, make I play dis song again....
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by BabieGhagha(f): 7:30am On Oct 21, 2013
valyzubxx:
Infact wey my ear piece sef, make I play dis song again....
meself don hear d song 22 tymes dis mowin.i just too gbadun d song
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by BabieGhagha(f): 7:34am On Oct 21, 2013
chistar01: thanks bro.lol.. You like caro? You don't mean it... angry, so u like the singer too shey? angry embarassed... Just kidding grin
i lyk wizkid.even if he coughs nd record it.i will listen to it
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by sconp: 7:34am On Oct 21, 2013
Since it was E.A that asked the question over the intercom why then did he get angry with Zainab?
Nice work Chistar
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 9:32am On Oct 21, 2013
Babie Ghagha: i lyk wizkid.even if he coughs nd record it.i will listen to it

ehya, the lord is your strength. grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:43am On Oct 21, 2013
embarassedTOOTH ACHE OH!!!!! sad
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by DEllaluv(f): 9:46am On Oct 21, 2013
chistar01: embarassedTOOTH ACHE OH!!!!! sad

ndo,ogadimma
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 9:46am On Oct 21, 2013
Babie Ghagha: i lyk wizkid.even if he coughs nd record it.i will listen to it
hmmmm.. I comment my reserve
scon-p:
Since it was E.A that asked the question over the intercom why then did he get angry with Zainab?
Nice work Chistar
some people are just like that, I'll like to believe E.A is like dat.. Thanks..

HEaDACHe!!! ToOTHAcHE!!! Everything ACHES!!! sad
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Nobody: 10:11am On Oct 21, 2013
i warned y0u t0 av0id eating much gums,n0w l00k at the result?...sha,thats n0t an execuse that y0u will n0t update a p0st ..
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 11:13am On Oct 21, 2013
chistar01: embarassedTOOTH ACHE OH!!!!! sad

Tooor! Ayaf a plier o! Make i bring am come so we can pull out the teeth?! grin
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by BabieGhagha(f): 11:54am On Oct 21, 2013
chistar01: embarassedTOOTH ACHE OH!!!!! sad
pele av experienced dat b4.i had to be given injection b4 i was relieved.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by kkjoy(f): 12:13pm On Oct 21, 2013
chistar01: embarassedTOOTH ACHE OH!!!!! sad

go to a pharmacy and ask for a drug called BHP... Believe me it works like magic.. Tht is my secret of not pulling out a fourth tooth .
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 2:38pm On Oct 21, 2013
kkjoy:

go to a pharmacy and ask for a drug called BHP... Believe me it works like magic.. Tht is my secret of not pulling out a fourth tooth .
hmmmm... I'll send you a PM now, kindly reply... I have some questions. I still can't move my lips.

@clemzy - lol, you are not serious.
@Babie - Injection 4 toothache? *runs away!!!* shocked
@leebliss - don't worry, I'll still post an update even though it might be short, I don't want to disappoint you guys.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by skyscraperTM(m): 2:52pm On Oct 21, 2013
sochistar: @clemzy - lol, you are not serious.
I'm dead serious! What are friends for. grin

sochistar: I'll still post an update even though it might be short, I don't want to disappoint you guys.

Waiting in anticipation!!
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by hibty(f): 3:15pm On Oct 21, 2013
@chistar,pele luv,buy *touch and go* @ any pharmacy near u its an antidote 4 tooth ache....if d pain persists after 3 days,consult ur doctor *bear hug*
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Eniqurl(f): 3:26pm On Oct 21, 2013
Dz update na die! As for d toothache ah wil advice u tew chew qum reqularly nd u mst update oh abeq afterall no b teeth u dy tke type.
#TeamJummy.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Incredibleme: 3:37pm On Oct 21, 2013
Chai!!!
i miss oh. First of all which E.A z it E.A Adeboy....lolz just kiding.

Bro am realy enjoying myself o, tnks to ur story. I swear if i catch you i go thief ur brain.
Eni~girl:
Dz update na die! As for d toothache ah wil advice u tew chew qum reqularly nd u mst update oh abeq afterall no b teeth u dy tke type.
#TeamJummy.
wlcm to d club. 5000 for registration and 1000 for form.
*straight face*
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Winnie1950(f): 5:52pm On Oct 21, 2013
Omg tooth ache? Chistar come and rest ur head on my bosom while waiting for the drugs to take effect. 'stroking his head gently while he is taking a nap'. Get well soon chistar. The lord is ur strength.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Daniel2802(m): 6:01pm On Oct 21, 2013
6:01pm undecided
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:09pm On Oct 21, 2013
hibty: @chistar,pele luv,buy *touch and go* @ any pharmacy near u its an antidote 4 tooth ache....if d pain persists after 3 days,consult ur doctor *bear hug*
hmmm.. 3days ke? Lol, you want my mouth to swell and probably let the pain kill me too? I'm going to visit a dentist tomorrow... No time. Thanks tho, I would have used " grin" but as I have no teeth again, I think smiley would be more suitable.
Eni~girl:
Dz update na die! As for d toothache ah wil advice u tew chew qum reqularly nd u mst update oh abeq afterall no b teeth u dy tke type.
#TeamJummy.
are you serious? I though am meant to even avoid gum?.. N @ "afterll no b teeth u dy tke type." - you won't understand until you experience it sad
Incredible.me:
Chai!!!
i miss oh. First of all which E.A z it E.A Adeboy....lolz just kiding.

Bro am realy enjoying myself o, tnks to ur story. I swear if i catch you i go thief ur brain.

wlcm to d club. 5000 for registration and 1000 for form.
*straight face*
lol.. Theif my brain ke? U be sylar for hereos?
Winnie1950: Omg tooth ache? Chistar come and rest ur head on my bosom while waiting for the drugs to take effect. 'stroking his head gently while he is taking a nap'. Get well soon chistar. The lord is ur strength.
seriously? shocked I need to start having toothaches more often cheesy grin.

NEW UPDATE IN A BIt, its quite short though, that was de best I could do 4 now. sad
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:10pm On Oct 21, 2013
EPISODE 19.

You know that period in life when you loose something so valuable that you keep on telling yourself it isn't true and no matter how much you are convinced it is, you refuse believe it? Well that was the case of Zainab and Jummy as they found out their car was missing.

* * *

They got to the car park and walked to the exact spot they had parked the car but the car was no more, they magically became sober immediately.

"Jummy, was it not here we parked the car?" Zainab asked looking confused.

"Err.. Ye.. I think so.." Jummy stuttered.

"So where is it now?!" Zainab asked with her voice raised.

Jummy just stared blankly at the spot where the car was supposed to be.

"Are you sure you parked the car here?" Henry asked no one in particular, but the question was directed at either Jummy or Zainab.

"Of course! I'm dead sure... I came in through that entrance," Zainab pointed at the eastern entrance, "and I even remember contemplation on either I should park here or at that spot that currently occupied by that 'Land Cruiser'," Zainab concluded.

"Okay then, what brand of car are we looking for exactly?" Clinton asked.

"A red Honda Accord!" Zainab replied, Jummy was still staring at the spot on silence, trying to remember if they had actually driven the car or had taken a cab.

"I'll look around for it or any signs, and while I do that, you guys should go and ask the bouncers if they have any idea concerning the where about," Clinton replied, he was trying his best to stay calm and manage the situation properly.

"Okay, fine, here is my number," Henry handed him his card, "if you find anything, call us."

"Okay, I don't have a card, but I've give Jummy here my number, if the bouncers have any useful info, just give me a beep," Clinton replied and walked away, he had no idea about where he was going but went ahead anyway.

The three of them: Henry, Jummy and Zainab, walked to the front of the club where two well built bouncers stood erect, and had probably been standing that way all day, they both wore all black body hug T-shirts and jeans- they looked like they really meant business.

Henry was the first to speak, "chairmen how far na?" He said, trying to act as casual as possible.

"I they oh, wetin they happen na?" One of the bouncers replied, while the other kept a "IF YOU NO WAN GIVE US ANYTHING, COMMOT FOR HERE" look.

"Nothing much oh, how work na?" Henry asked as he shook them and stylishly dropped a thousand naira note with each of them as he shook them.

They took the money and without check the amount, they both deep their hands into their pocket and responded with a wide smile, "work slow today oh."

Zainab and Jummy had no idea what was really going on, they were wondering why Henry was asking them about work when he was meant to be asking about the stolen car - if only they knew how things work in Nigeria.

"Enhen, abeg, I get one small problem oh," Henry said.

"Ah! Oga! Which kain problem? Shey person they fucck up? Just point am and we go help you treat hin fucck ups!" One of the bouncer replied in an excited tone- the power of one thousand naira.

"No be that kain problem oh. Abeg, my babe park hin motor for backyard before she enter but the motor don grow leg o," Henry replied and stared at Zainab, he could only imagine her thinking: when did I become your babe?

"Ah! Them don thief am be that! Na the second motor them don thief this week be that. Na why we put that sign board for there," one of the bouncers replied and pointed at sign board at the front of the garage which said: "ALL CARS ARE PARK AT OWNERS RISK."

Henry read the sign board and the stared at the ladies, his looks said it all: NO HOPE, and although Zainab didn't want to accept it, she had no other option.

They thanked the bouncers for the "no help" the rendered and walked back to the garage to wait for Clinton, hoping he would have some sort of good news.

Clinton came back few minutes later looking indifferent, his search has been fruitless.

By this time, Oscar and Mathew were both outside the club to see if their friend, Henry would go home with Zainab.

Henry saw them and he instantly remembered his bet, he smiled.

He turned to Zainab who was awfully quiet and regretting why she had gone clubbing today, she just couldn't help but wonder why of all the cars in the garage, hers was stolen?

"Zainab, I can give you a ride home," Henry started, "but, I'll need you to give me your phone number," as he concluded, he noticed how sill he was and how that came out wrong.

"Sorry?" Zainab asked in disappointment, her car was missing and this guy wanted to blackmail her for her phone number, or she thought.

"Oh! I don't mean it that way, I promise to delete the number after I used it to do something," Henry replied, trying to look as serious as he could.

"Yea right!" Zainab replied sarcastically, "Jummy let's go and board a cab jhur," she added and started walking towards the express way. She had taken about four steps when she noticed Jummy wasn't following her. "What are you still doing there," she asked, "let's go na."

Without looking at Zainab, she replied, "my handbag and money was in the car."

"What! How then were we to pay for those drinks?" Zainab asked.

"I just took a few thousand notes and I knew some generous guys would join us," Jummy replied, and realised how dumb she sounded.

Zainab wanted to shout at Jummy for being so unreasonable and careless but she remembered she just lost her car, she sighed and reluctantly walked back to Henry.

"I'll give your the number on two conditions," she said

"Am all ears," Henry replied with a grin.

"One, you tell me exactly what you need it for and you agree to drop I and my friend at our door step, deal or no deal?"

Henry weighted his options and after considering having 100k in his account was worth it, he told Zainab everything from the scratch.

Zainab was of course disappointed in Henry for treating her like a trophy but was more disappointed in herself for falling for such trap, funny to think she was already liking him and considering taking him home after everything for round two.

She gave him the number anyway, and Henry went with his phone to join Oscar and Mathew who were staring from a distance. He called Zainab from there and gave the phone to Mathew to confirm, when it was confirmed, Mathew handed over the Iphone and car keys to Henry and grunted at Oscar, "Now, we go trek go house shey?"

Henry left with a smile, he had a bigger fish to fry.

TO BE CONTINUED

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Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 6:11pm On Oct 21, 2013
Daniel2802: 6:01pm undecided
cheesy accurate time keeper
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Incredibleme: 6:42pm On Oct 21, 2013
Hmmm... Power of 1000, i go try dat one.
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by chistar01(m): 7:36pm On Oct 21, 2013
Incredible.me:
Hmmm... Power of 1000, i go try dat one.
good luck with that
Re: STORY: Babe In Total Control by Chuksemi(m): 8:52pm On Oct 21, 2013
Chistar, somebody must marry somebody oh. I need to attend wedding.... In other news, ea was inconsiderate, leave that I am only human talk. If he really wanted her. He should get angry in a dialogue kind of way................ Nice story by the way. I am feeling henry already. Zainab appeared cheap at the last update.

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