Great, i admire your creativity. You kept me making wrong guesses about what the next episode would be. But i do have questions.
My questions goes thus, in the second to the last update, Chuks had vision in the course of the final encounter with Mr A****., where he saw the man's future. And the future seemed to show that Mr A***** was going to bounce back to his spiritual position and regain his powers or something like that. I'm wondering what happened to that vision. Because there is no fulfilment of that here.
Also, Chuks the stronger said Nina has greater powers than the duo of Chuks and Mr A****. Won't it have been better if we were told where her powers were channelled to?
And then, why do i agree with Princesa that this story was rushed?

Good One Bro. Well Done

Nice ending.....U r simply d best here sir!....Next?D link to ur next story ama fllw assp!

Hexzagon: so d tori don finish

this got me laughing!

idnoble135: Great, i admire your creativity. You kept me making wrong guesses about what the next episode would be. But i do have questions.
My questions goes thus, in the second to the last update, Chuks had vision in the course of the final encounter with Mr A****., where he saw the man's future. And the future seemed to show that Mr A***** was going to bounce back to his spiritual position and regain his powers or something like that. I'm wondering what happened to that vision. Because there is no fulfilment of that here.
Also, Chuks the stronger said Nina has greater powers than the duo of Chuks and Mr A****. Won't it have been better if we were told where her powers were channelled to?
And then, why do i agree with Princesa that this story was rushed?

No rush at all. This is how I always intended the story to end.
Chuks saw Mr A***** in his madness and mistook it for triumph. If you look at his vision and how the chapter ended you will see the similarity i.e laughing triumphantly surrounded by a belfry of bats. Sometimes you have to put in a little something like that to keep ur viewers/readers at the edge of their seats.

No matter how strong and powerful chuks or Mr A***** might be, is nothing compared to the pure form of energy that Nina as an Angel has hidden within her. And the fact she considered herself still a humble messenger is kind of like my way comparing her powers with that of the Master of the Universe, but maybe I'm giving off too much info too early. Till next time.

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Thanks!

Royver...one word...Fabulous

Royver: What can I say? Its been a wonderful experience. I learnt a lot from you guys, your critiquing, encouragement, personal messages and texts, even threats all made this experience one for my treasure box.
I am glad you enjoyed the story. I'll be taking a little break but be sure I'll be back some day with something I hope will be as enjoyable for you to read as it will be for me to write.

Special thanks to ishilove, Vickii Ro, kslib, and a host of other people too too numerous to mention; you guys were great!

Some mods and elders were also caught viewing this thread regularly although they never commented, just wanted to say...(in chuk's alto voice) I saw you! Thanks for your quiet encouragement!

Peace.

You are very welcome brah and thanks for sharing such a wonderful story with us.. Your talent speaks alot..

Nice job!!

hmmm.... What an intriguing piece, and a beautiful ending.....

Royver, u too much! Abeg come my house on Xmas day! Palm wine dey for u! Afta dat, we relax with Play Station 3!

wow! ..the first story I'd finish on NL, it got me glued to my seat. i had to postpone my schedules yesterday evening to finish the story late in the night. i love supernatural things.
The sky is your launching pad Royver, keep it up.
i also enjoyed Ishilove's 'molecular' pinpoints and criticisms ,studying molecules, you can't help but be given to details, she's good!. She single handedly through insightful contributions made sure my last thread hit the frontpage.

Hmmmmmmmm!
Now that the story has ended, I can now enjoy my Xmas!
Thanks alot, poster.
MERRY XMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!

THANKS FOR THAT LAST PIECE.

Woww! A standing ovation for you Royver. This was a great work

I'm advertising my story, titled; On An Assignmen.

Terrific and incredible !
It was a smooth ride all along.


Gracias !

Good work brother, I following the thread from d beginning to the end. Nice work. Pls when are u giving us another story that is more captivating?

Good work brother, I followed the thread from d beginning to the end. Nice work. Pls when are u giving us another story that is more captivating?

Spell bound

Nice story Royver. Are you a fan of Terry Brooks?

uj_sizzle: Nice story Royver. Are you a fan of Terry Brooks?

Nope.
Started out with Enid blyton when I was little. Moved on to Hans Christian Anderson, Agatha Christie, Chinua Achebe, Sir Authur Conyan Doyle, Rudyard Kipling, James Hadley Chase , Stephen King, and finally Dean Koontz.

I also enjoyed the passport of mallam ilia and the bride price though I honestly can't remember who wrote them
.

I like novels a lot.

Oluwason: Spell bound

Thanks.

seundex: Good work brother, I followed the thread from d beginning to the end. Nice work. Pls when are u giving us another story that is more captivating?

Thanks man. Thinking of starting another one DEC 26th. Watch this space.

plainmirror: Terrific and incredible !
It was a smooth ride all along.


Gracias !

U r welcome fellow competitor.

NaijaDoWell: Hmmmmmmmm!
Now that the story has ended, I can now enjoy my Xmas!
Thanks alot, poster.
MERRY XMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!

Same to you

Mighty Fortress: Royver, u too much! Abeg come my house on Xmas day! [b]Palm wine [/b]dey for u! Afta dat, we relax with Play Station 3!

Correct!

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Am a writer buh I haven't written anytin on NL,I must confess yur a talented writer,I started yur writeup 2dae and am tru wit it,have read lots of stories on NL,most writers leave their stories uncompleted to have completed these yur Good.Kudos bro.

Stånd: Hmmmmn...Great story from start to end. Thank you Royver for this beautiful write-up. And Merry Christmas in Advance.

I owe you a well-grilled chicken and chilled Zobo drink...lol

Same to u and thanks!

spicy cindy: Am a writer buh I haven't written anytin on NL,I must confess yur a talented writer,I started yur writeup 2dae and am tru wit it,have read lots of stories on NL,most writers leave their stories uncompleted to have completed these yur Good.Kudos bro.

Merci.

This is beautiful, so beautiful... *clapping and wiping tears*

Berylmoi: This is beautiful, so beautiful... *clapping and wiping tears*

Thanks