[left][/left] This is my first time of writing,so your comments are allowed,suggestions,advice,etc.they are all allowed.thanks

It started on that night at around 7:30pm,I had gone to buy diesel for our generator,There is no way i wil get to the junction without passing the house of my heart desire. I make sure that anytime i pass,i greet the mother of my luv. I noticed that her mother had a warm feeling towards me. Later,i got to know that her mum and my mum were neighbours when we were small at our former house.
Back to where i was,i had bought the fuel and i had taken bike bcus the rain was threatning,but on my way i met her and waved and to utmost suprise,she waved back. This made me restrict the voices that told me not to dare the rain and i told the bike man to stop. So i started my race as she had gone far. I waited at the bike joint for her and after five minutes rain started falling,my hope was diminishing.. TO BE CONTINUED SOON.Pls comments are needed

As i was losing hope,i saw her emerging,walking briskly nd i followed closely till i got the courage to meet up wit her.''hi'',i said and she replied with a suprised shy look,hello.
The conversation made me feel like i was in paradise as her voice was soft and charming. by the time we got to her house,the rain had subsided and i used that opportunity to collect her mummy's number as her phone had spoilt. Getting home that night was different from the previous nights cus i was going to call her.
I called her and we talked for what seemed to be an endless chat.then after three weeks i proposed to her a