My queen, i'm here o. Nice work there, how kel and kathy? Hope they are having the perfect honeymoon?

Revelation tym!!! Nice one dearie.

Queenxstar:
The palace is too quiet. Where is everyone?

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Holla!!!

stil here, weldone queen

Marcus don't go 2 any spiritualist, look onto d Man of Calvary He has done it before and He will do it again for u and ur wife. Queen. May d almighty God increase ur Creativity!!!..

onosj:
Marcus don't go 2 any spiritualist, look onto d Man of Calvary He has done it before and He will do it again for u and ur wife. Queen. May d almighty God increase ur Creativity!!!..

Thank you sweetheart.

Phlakes:
stil here, weldone queen

Thank you darling.

TiffanyJ:
My queen, i'm here o. Nice work there, how kel and kathy? Hope they are having the perfect honeymoon?

Yes they're dearest.
Hope you're good.

nnekamezor:
Revelation tym!!! Nice one dearie.

Thank you sweetheart.

sebak:
Sup Queen, nyc update but cldnt unstnd it dt much but dnt worry i'll keep my fingers cross

Splendid choice dear.

Jeanfortune:

right here dearie

Oh I see you darl.

Queenxstar:
Yes they're dearest.
Hope you're good.

I am doing great o. Abeg come update

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Phlakes:
stil here, weldone queen

make una forgive me,i dey write exam

Queenxstar:

What will I do without your smart mind dearest? Thank you.

uwc sweet@... Same here

'This is not happening to me, no...no...not my own Kafayat ...not my own daughter... not my own daughter. ' Aishat wailed, shaking both legs vigorously.

After the grey haired doctor had announced the diagnosis of her daughter thereby sealing her fate, she threw herself on the floor a couple of times and rolled on the cold ground as though the god or the determinant of fate will take cognizant of her and reverse the fate of her child.

Shakirat, Basirat and Yerima having been plunged into shock still yet to recover from the former were too lost in their individual thoughts, that they had not noticed their mother display talk more of consoling her.

Dishevelled and sored, she was now sitted on the marble tiled floor of the corridor that led to a couple of private wards in which her daughter now lay heavily sedated.

'No...no, what will people say that my child... my flesh and blood is in a psychiatric hospital.' She placed both hands on her head void of the earlier scarf which was now resting some distance away on the antiseptic floor. 'This will be generational smear.'

The words of her mother had snapped out Basirat from her staring into space state to focus at Aisha.

She continued to stare at her as she would a stranger while processing the words she had just heard.

'How can you allow your mind run so far mother, at least Kafayat is alive, what do you want the family of Saheed to do and say, he was the only son?' She glared at her mother obviously disappointed.

'Now you claim to be learned...' She shook her head and stared into space. 'Do you consider a psychiatric patient living?'

'What!' The trio glared at her as though she just confessed to being a witch and had been responsible for all the loss so far.

Aisha sighed and then heaved.

What if he got a call from Ada that his son had being to rushed to the hospital? The sudden thought chilled him and Yerima felt himself begin to perspire.

'Oh my God...' Yerima groaned, fumbled for his car keys and gave some inaudible excuse before hurrying out like the right hand man of the devil was hot on his pursuit.

Basirat burst into tears and her whole body shook as she remembered the event that was barely a week old.

After waiting for a couple of hours in the church for the arrival of the groom and his men, tension built in both families and well wishers. It was worst on the the beautiful bride, who paced, tried numbers no one seemed to be picking, paced and lamented.

'This can't be happening to me...Saheed can never do this to me.' She had repeated over and over again while sweating in the fully air conditioned 2014 hyaundi.

Basirat had being with her and said all the encouraging words she could remember fearing the worst until the news came that on their way to the church venue, a HIAB truck had lost control of its brakes and had used the Jeep Saheed was in as a wedge.

Saheed had died instantly and others in the car suffered a non-life threatening injury.

The news had sent Kafayat reeling to floor and after few seconds,  she lay still motionless.

She was rushed to the hospital and after three days,  ragained consciousness only to start  displaying psychotic symptoms.

Her doctor had no other choice than to refer her for expert management.

'I am getting scared, I don't know long it will be before I lose my sanity.' Basirat blew her nose and sat on a seat.

Shakirat let her guards down as she remembered her departed son, soon was kneeling on the ground sobbing.

Aisha sniffed and sneezed before burying her face in palms.

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Im beginning 2 cry 4 dis pple oh.. U cn @least tell us their real offence pls

wow queen you've always been up n doing
really enjoying this piece

hope work is fine though

Hameenat94:
Im beginning 2 cry 4 dis pple oh.. U cn @least tell us their real offence pls

yes Queen, what have they done, that is telling on them now?

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I think karma is dealing with this people cos of what they did to the family of Katherine

You are good but you still have this big problem, from your first story on nairaland to this one, it is still there.
You are good but the only thinq i noticed about your work is that it lacks continuity. If you work better on ur continuity rather than jumpinq from one scene to another,it would really take you places.
This problem was in dotted lines up till generations to generations. Please work on it, it makes your work tiresome to read.

Jiteshell:
You are good but you still have this big problem, from your first story on nairaland to this one, it is still there.
You are good but the only thinq i noticed about your work is that it lacks continuity. If you work better on ur continuity rather than jumpinq from one scene to another,it would really take you places.
This problem was in dotted lines up till generations to generations. Please work on it, it makes your work tiresome to read.

Please expatiate on what you mean by continuity.

Any one with knowledge of CONTINUITY should please educate me.

Eyah poor dem.... Wat goes around does comes around indeed... Grt job Estar....

Any update coming up anytym soon?

Queenxstar:
Please expatiate on what you mean by continuity.

Ok, I would explain. One episode would be talking about for example the proposal but the episode before it did not match what happened in that episode also the episode after it had the wedding, it's like you just jumped. Sometimes katherine and kelvin are laughing in the office, the next episode does not continue. It's just jumping like a drama. Even scenes in dramas have continuity. At the end, you end up tellin the story and not showing it. I have no clear idea what kelvin or katherine looks like cos the description was not enough but that's another thing. I have been following you since dotted lines and mentioned this issue of continuity. To understand it better, read more novels, you would realise that each chapter follows and continues from the former, it may be weeks after but it is noticeable. Here I don't even know how long between the engagement and wedding.
Please forgive my long lecture, am sorry. No offense intended.

It's just like reading those cartoons at the back of vanguard today and the one you read tomorrow does not continue from where yesterday's own stopped but jumped, and it kept on happening with every episode, you surely wud not be happy and maybe even stop reading it, I unfollowed this story many times cos of it but I keep coming back, I can't help it

Jiteshell:
It's just like reading those cartoons at the back of vanguard today and the one you read tomorrow does not continue from where yesterday's own stopped but jumped, and it kept on happening with every episode, you surely wud not be happy and maybe even stop reading it, I unfollowed this story many times cos of it but I keep coming back, I can't help it

Thank you so much darl, God bless you. I'll work on it.

Jiteshell:
It's just like reading those cartoons at the back of vanguard today and the one you read tomorrow does not continue from where yesterday's own stopped but jumped, and it kept on happening with every episode, you surely wud not be happy and maybe even stop reading it, I unfollowed this story many times cos of it but I keep coming back, I can't help it

Thank you so much darl, God bless you. I'll work on it.
Sometimes I feel if I keep giving a back to back continuation, the story would never end. From the manuscript, I excluded some of what i counted unnecessary.

Glowingscenes after reading FIGHTING BACK, advised that i skip the unnecessary.

All royal members of the house, I crave to be better and I need all of your help, what do you think of Jitshell opinion of my story? Please...

Hameenat, Tiffany, KingPhilip and others who have read my other stories and this present one, what do you say?