AudreyTimms: Good morning my fellow nairalanders. Please I crave your indulgence. I am new in the art of making my stories public. I have a story I want you all to check out for me. Please constructive criticisms; make una no destroy my writing career with harsh words abeg. Thanks.

AudreyTimms: Good morning my fellow nairalanders. Please I crave your indulgence. I am new in the art of making my stories public. I have a story I want you all to check out for me. Please constructive criticisms; make una no destroy my writing career with harsh words abeg. Thanks.

Kaycee7: AudreyTimms or whoever U are, I'm going to have U arrested and charged to court on charges of keeping me captivated since the wee hours of this morning with ur fantastic tale.
Sweetheart, U're something else. Keep it up. I'm sure U'll go places

deebarbie: This is wonderful,can't stop laughing. So oleng choose between money or love.

almacherish: Congrats on hitting frontpage........ U deserve it

kanechimex: Audrey, I have to say. you have got a nice story here.

Rhyno02: Audrey tell am wella abeg

vivikul: Nyc one dear. But I was tinking we will get an extra post for making it to front page. Abi aw do u guys c it

Temmyojo: Am so glued.come and complete this master piece

Flakkydagirl: You're a great wrtter ma'am....






See you at the top.

MsMichaelz: Madam Audrey, I am mesmerized. Like wooooww, discovered your thread on front page and couldn't stop till I finished. More ink to your pen, abi more MB to your phone. I love this.

orla01: With ur talent Audrey d sky is ur starting point grt wrk.

slap1: AudreyTimms, kindly add a disclaimer at the beginning of this story to avoid "stories that touch the heart".

Plaitex: madame audrey, u da best. Av been reading the whole story from 8:20pm-1:42am. Great story, keep it up
i bilieve she wud not get married to either dave nor collins. I think eric didn't actually abandon her, because he didnt knw the true situation of things, perhaps, oleng's mum lied to both of them. And abt oleng's baby, i biliv he is still alive. Pls keep posting, we are anxiously waiting

emmabest2000: lol .. Keep it moving ..

tbmas: Nice story really

goldwaters: I saw this wonderful story last night at about midnight and it kept me up until about 2am.

This is one of the best written stories I have read on Nairaland.
Ur use of words is commendable. Its simple and it flows. An excellent write up and story.

Sooooo looking forward to its conclusion.

morsadh: Audrey Why Now?! Chai! . There will be showdown of the lovers though.

Rhyno02: Audrey u've done a great job so far,and thank u for the update