TemitopeDaniel: TYPING THE NEXT EPISODE ALREADY, DROPS BY 9PM.
TEE'DAN.

oh! Good I can't wait for my Hakeem to wakeUp




Nd d nurse shud b fired

EPISODE TWENTY TWO.

    Hastrup smiled broadly after he heard the new news from the Doctor. The nurse almost caused him a heart attack. His circulatory system that had started malfunctioning had cooled down after he calmed himself. "Guy, this nurse almost killed me." He faced Uthman and shook his hand.

    Uthman buttoned up the first two button on his shirt, he beamed and shook Hastrup also. "Abi now, I was almost killed too."

    "I was so vexed that i couldn't hold back myself until I slapped that nurse."

    "It was good for her, she needed it. The Doctor even said she has receieved a lot of queries, only God knows the kind of Nurse she is." Uthman replied.

    Aishat and Tomisin were also whispering to each other on their seats, nothing else would have made Aishat happier than she was, that time. She was so happy that she felt like celebrating it.

****++++****

    Two Days After.

    Hakeem had gotten agile again. He was just discharged that afternoon and went home with his friends. Since he had been admitted, Hastrup and Uthman rarely left the hospital. Aishat also left the hospital once, to chage her dress and returned immediately. She couldn't afford to loose Hakeem, even if he had broken up with her, she still loved him.

   If not for all that happened, she would have started working in Hakeem's company. She was eager to start, she started planning schedule that afternoon that Hakeem was discharged.

    Hastrup was just smiling as he shut the door that led to the living room. "Hakeem, why did you even enter into that house?"

    Hakeem took in a deep breath and replied him. "I was caught by those guys, it was the exact place where the tracker stopped I came down."

    "You shouldn't have done that, you should have stayed near the field."

    "They'd started beating Aishat, I heared her crying." He smiled.

    "That was why you endangered your own life right?" Uthman questioned.

    "Sure, I had to do it. Tell me, if you were the one, would you have left Shukurat there?"

    Uthman chuckled and replied. "Em.. No, that's true sha."

    Hakeem laughed. "That was why I tried so hard to save her. I never knew I would be caught."

    "Alright, we thank Allah for sparing your life.."

    "Alhamdullilah." Hakeem said.

******

    Aishat laid on the bed heavily, it was over five days since she slept on the bed. She remembered how she was kidnaoped from her seat in the living room. She never knew anyone was behind her until her mouth was forcefully covered and she was carried away.

It was already a past tense but it was an incident that could never be forgotten. She never knew Tomisin walked in until Tomi hit her by her shoulder. "Aishat." She called her.

"Yes." She became self- conscious. "When did you enter into the room?" She asked as she gazed at her.

"Have you been thinking about Hakeem?" She teased her and smiled.

"Hakeem? I wasn't thinking about him." She beamed.

"You better confess, you that cried your eyes out when the fake nurse brought the result of his death." She laughed.

"You cried likewise, didn't you?" Aishat laughed too.

Tomisin leaned against the wall for support and continued. "I didn't cry like you did, you cried like a baby." She mocked her and continued laughing.

"Really? That nurse bleeped up oh, she almost killed me!" She said, remembering how she sat, crying.

"Abi now, she turned us to new born babies, I also wept like Jesus did in John 11:35."

"We've seen you, mama Jesu." Aishat laughed at her.

"Thank you, I know you can't quote any verse in you Quran."

Aishat laughed and remembered Hakeem again. "Na tomorrow I go start with Hakeem oh, it will be a funny thing, working with him."

"Yes oh, I'm still working on mine with Tofunmi. I pray everything results to happiness."

"All will be well." Aishat prayed.

*****

THE NEXT DAY.

AISHAT drove out of the house in one of her four cars. She felt fulfilled as she drove on, along Bashorun road. She felt as if she should have gotten to the office, she checked the dashboard and saw that it was just 7:15am. "Hakeem.." She muttered his name and smiled.

Not later than that, she parked at the parking lot of the company and walked down from the car in a yellow silk dress that had a black collar with black buttons down the front. She also had yellow earrings on, with a flawless skin and long hair.

She bowed and greeted the security men on duty before she walked into the company. She met the Secretary on seat and greeted her. "This is the key." Peju, the Secretary handed her the key to her office and stood up, to lead her to the office.

She showed her where the office was and turned back. Hakeem hadn't gotten to his place of work then, it was an opportunity not to see his face that morning, she must always try to avoid him so that she wouldn't develop any weird feeling again.

She held her breath before she entered into the office. "Wao, Hakeem is also rich oh." She said and admired the big office. It was painted cream colour and had some beautiful chairs in a corner as well as the office's table and chair. She smiled and continued admiring the office. It had an air conditioner, a cream curtain with a touch of orange and the office was rugged. "This is nice." She said as she opened the HP laptop on the table and sat down.

She looked round the office again and smiled. She loved it that way, she remembered she greeted the security men, if it was before, she wouldn't do that. She'd rather accuse and abuse the men for not greeting her. "I've changed." She smiled and nodded along.

The laptop's battery wasn't in it when she opened it. She stood and walked to meet the Secretary to ask about it when Hakeem came in with his friends. She felt like disappearing immediately she sighted him. "Good morning Sir." She greeted him and smiled faintly.

"Ha.. Good morning, Miss Aishat." Hakeem also replied, pretending.

She greeted Uthman and Hastrup too and watched them as they left. She smiled within herself, Hakeem had turned to Mr Adefemi while she had turned to Miss Aishat, "nice one, this is just the beginning." She grinned as she thought.


Story continues...

Tannie: I wasn't called again. Hmmmmmmmmmm

Naw I have to learn, I mean knw that u 're a boss! I'm sorry for my naughty negligence, but so much appreciate the fact that u told me... Thanks so much! I'm sorry foral skipping ur name again... Don't worry, it won't happen again...

....even if u no call me i don land#na only me waka cum...were ar am i

Hameenat94:
ntt allowed also

Hmmn... tell me say you never try all these things befor...

larteefarh: This was really nice!
But who sent d kidnappers?

From the story, they overheard Tomisin and Tofunmi discussing about kidnapping. Tofunmi and Tomisin never knew the guys heard everything they discussed and they were real kidnappers. Thanks latifah

marioking: My problem is always late coming
i know i will be late for my death gan...lolz
So captivating, thrilling, motivating infact!!!!
but oga TemitopeDaniel if u no invite me for ur nxt bombshell piece enh?
but for now.....anywia u go i go dey follow follow you oooo

Lol... Y I no go all u? u b d fist person I go kal sef...

U b Mario na...

Thanks bro.

Mr Adefemi nd Miss Aishat... Wonderful!!! D question is' Is it possible 4 Aishat 2 work 4 Him?

Elantracey: *Dances into the thread with my igele *
Tee.dan where's the bush meat?
PrinceAdepoju you want to kill my Hakeem ba

lol... u knw Ebola dey outside, since we no fit chop Bush meat, let's turn our enemy to meat... It's not bad If we chop PrinceAdepoju for his wrongs...

covers face, Prince must not see dz comment, I go edit am last year..

...Can't wait 4 d nxt episode.

TemitopeDaniel: lol... u knw Ebola dey outside, since we no fit chop Bush meat, let's turn our enemy to meat... It's not bad If we chop PrinceAdepoju for his wrongs...

covers face, Prince must not see dz comment, I go edit am last year..

Mr prince will do just fyn





loving the new Aishat n Hakeem relationship



more ink to your pen jare

Pls don't temme next episode is going to b 2mao O!

Hameenat94:
ntt allowed also

Eyen maa gaah ooo...

It is looking like I really have to wait till tomorrow to read the next episode....ohh...ohhh

Weldone boss...More wisdom,knowledge and understanding 2 Ɣ☺ΰ.

Wat a ROLE MODEL u re to some of us,the upcoming writers...i sincerely embraced ur work,its captivated..keep it up@ T.DAN

I'm allergic to suspense, abeg I want more, my middle name is oliver twist. I love your story namesake

Happiness is within. It has
nothing to do with how
much applause you get or
how many people praise
you. Happiness comes
when you believe that you
have done something truly
meaningful.I guess d happiness is in u cos ur stories as been a turning point for majority.

T-Dan,congrats on ur FP. U are really a bunch of talent. Keep it up dear!!! #Still Following#

PrinceAdepoju: aaah!!
*In Abija's voice*
Eeeeeewoo, a kii gboku oko, a kii gboku ada.
Irooooo nla!!

*stands up straight and laughs at him*
So, na like this you love me so? I yaff know now.


@TemitopeDaniel, you worth the frontpage thing o jare my boss.
but me still angry at you oo, you should have let Hakeem die na.

and

You should improve in your writing style and choice of words, bro.
You can develop yourself by reading articles, books and other people's works.

Also, you've started to add grammar ba? (I noticed some like incommunicado or something and some others)
You don't need that for now. Writing is not about your knowledge of big english words, It's about how you construct your words and the pleasure people derive from it's simplicity.

I dey gbadun you sir

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Congratulations Bro for making the FP... Kudos Boss...

Boss, I still dey follow follow ooo...

erm... you wouldn't be the best you are always destined to be if you don't encounter critics and critiques along the way.

Here are just some heads up boss:
1 Use 'glance' for ur 'glimpse' , both belong under the same register in a thesaurus but the former sounds more professional and formal

2. Take your time in updating and editing ur write ups well before posting to bring out the best in them. It is better to deliver scanty quality that'll glue ur readers to their seats and make them yearn for more than boring long epistles.

3. I know you specialise in romance and there is nothing wrong with it, but ur stories is always easily predictable and the end can be seen right from the start, you need some twists and turns and you also need some heart wrenching deaths(not all love stories have happy endings)

4. Your story have an air of simplicity and amateurism arounds it , no offense or pun intended bro but you need to step up your game, read more and learn the new ways of writing that will make ur readers swoon with admirations .

I still dey follow you bumper to bumper bro.

TemitopeDaniel: Hmmn... tell me say you never try all these things befor...

2 b honest here I've tried buh stopped wen I learnt of it buh story writing is abt morals nd teaching d readers abt wat they probably dnt knw.. So U shuld always knw abt sometyn b4 u write abt it.. Isn't it?

Patiently waiting for d next update.well done T.dan

Sallychizzl3: Boss, I still dey follow follow ooo...

erm... you wouldn't be the best you are always destined to be if you don't encounter critics and critiques along the way.

Here are just some heads up boss:
1 Use 'glance' for ur 'glimpse' , both belong under the same register in a thesaurus but the former sounds more professional and formal

2. Take your time in updating and editing ur write ups well before posting to bring out the best in them. It is better to deliver scanty quality that'll glue ur readers to their seats and make them yearn for more than boring long epistles.

3. I know you specialise in romance and there is nothing wrong with it, but ur stories is always easily predictable and the end can be seen right from the start, you need some twists and turns and you also need some heart wrenching deaths(not all love stories have happy endings)

4. Your story have an air of simplicity and amateurism arounds it , no offense or pun intended bro but you need to step up your game, read more and learn the new ways of writing that will make ur readers swoon with admirations .

I still dey follow you bumper to bumper bro.

Hmmn.. Alright, noted.

Hameenat94:
2 b honest here I've tried buh stopped wen I learnt of it buh story writing is abt morals nd teaching d readers abt wat they probably dnt knw.. So U shuld always knw abt sometyn b4 u write abt it.. Isn't it?

O know about it, don't I?

Aishat tepeated it like three times that Azeezat lacked the etiquette of Islam na...

Holubunmi: Patiently waiting for d next update.well done T.dan

Thanks dear, really appreciate ur presence!

KingzPen: Congratulations Bro for making the FP... Kudos Boss...

King!!! Thanks boss!

Gosh!! Meet up at lst! Tdan u almost brng out tears. Pending my works to read ur story..kip it up

TemitopeDaniel: EPISODE TWENTY TWO.

    Hastrup smiled broadly after he heard the new news from the Doctor. The nurse almost caused him a heart attack. His circulatory system that had started malfunctioning had cooled down after he calmed himself. "Guy, this nurse almost killed me." He faced Uthman and shook his hand.

    Uthman buttoned up the first two button on his shirt, he beamed and shook Hastrup also. "Abi now, I was almost killed too."

    "I was so vexed that i couldn't hold back myself until I slapped that nurse."

    "It was good for her, she needed it. The Doctor even said she has receieved a lot of queries, only God knows the kind of Nurse she is." Uthman replied.

    Aishat and Tomisin were also whispering to each other on their seats, nothing else would have made Aishat happier than she was, that time. She was so happy that she felt like celebrating it.

****++++****

    Two Days After.

    Hakeem had gotten agile again. He was just discharged that afternoon and went home with his friends. Since he had been admitted, Hastrup and Uthman rarely left the hospital. Aishat also left the hospital once, to chage her dress and returned immediately. She couldn't afford to loose Hakeem, even if he had broken up with her, she still loved him.

   If not for all that happened, she would have started working in Hakeem's company. She was eager to start, she started planning schedule that afternoon that Hakeem was discharged.

    Hastrup was just smiling as he shut the door that led to the living room. "Hakeem, why did you even enter into that house?"

    Hakeem took in a deep breath and replied him. "I was caught by those guys, it was the exact place where the tracker stopped I came down."

    "You shouldn't have done that, you should have stayed near the field."

    "They'd started beating Aishat, I heared her crying." He smiled.

    "That was why you endangered your own life right?" Uthman questioned.

    "Sure, I had to do it. Tell me, if you were the one, would you have left Shukurat there?"

    Uthman chuckled and replied. "Em.. No, that's true sha."

    Hakeem laughed. "That was why I tried so hard to save her. I never knew I would be caught."

    "Alright, we thank Allah for sparing your life.."

    "Alhamdullilah." Hakeem said.

******

    Aishat laid on the bed heavily, it was over five days since she slept on the bed. She remembered how she was kidnaoped from her seat in the living room. She never knew anyone was behind her until her mouth was forcefully covered and she was carried away.

It was already a past tense but it was an incident that could never be forgotten. She never knew Tomisin walked in until Tomi hit her by her shoulder. "Aishat." She called her.

"Yes." She became self- conscious. "When did you enter into the room?" She asked as she gazed at her.

"Have you been thinking about Hakeem?" She teased her and smiled.

"Hakeem? I wasn't thinking about him." She beamed.

"You better confess, you that cried your eyes out when the fake nurse brought the result of his death." She laughed.

"You cried likewise, didn't you?" Aishat laughed too.

Tomisin leaned against the wall for support and continued. "I didn't cry like you did, you cried like a baby." She mocked her and continued laughing.

"Really? That nurse bleeped up oh, she almost killed me!" She said, remembering how she sat, crying.

"Abi now, she turned us to new born babies, I also wept like Jesus did in John 11:35."

"We've seen you, mama Jesu." Aishat laughed at her.

"Thank you, I know you can't quote any verse in you Quran."

Aishat laughed and remembered Hakeem again. "Na tomorrow I go start with Hakeem oh, it will be a funny thing, working with him."

"Yes oh, I'm still working on mine with Tofunmi. I pray everything results to happiness."

"All will be well." Aishat prayed.

*****

THE NEXT DAY.

AISHAT drove out of the house in one of her four cars. She felt fulfilled as she drove on, along Bashorun road. She felt as if she should have gotten to the office, she checked the dashboard and saw that it was just 7:15am. "Hakeem.." She muttered his name and smiled.

Not later than that, she parked at the parking lot of the company and walked down from the car in a yellow silk dress that had a black collar with black buttons down the front. She also had yellow earrings on, with a flawless skin and long hair.

She bowed and greeted the security men on duty before she walked into the company. She met the Secretary on seat and greeted her. "This is the key." Peju, the Secretary handed her the key to her office and stood up, to lead her to the office.

She showed her where the office was and turned back. Hakeem hadn't gotten to his place of work then, it was an opportunity not to see his face that morning, she must always try to avoid him so that she wouldn't develop any weird feeling again.

She held her breath before she entered into the office. "Wao, Hakeem is also rich oh." She said and admired the big office. It was painted cream colour and had some beautiful chairs in a corner as well as the office's table and chair. She smiled and continued admiring the office. It had an air conditioner, a cream curtain with a touch of orange and the office was rugged. "This is nice." She said as she opened the HP laptop on the table and sat down.

She looked round the office again and smiled. She loved it that way, she remembered she greeted the security men, if it was before, she wouldn't do that. She'd rather accuse and abuse the men for not greeting her. "I've changed." She smiled and nodded along.

The laptop's battery wasn't in it when she opened it. She stood and walked to meet the Secretary to ask about it when Hakeem came in with his friends. She felt like disappearing immediately she sighted him. "Good morning Sir." She greeted him and smiled faintly.

"Ha.. Good morning, Miss Aishat." Hakeem also replied, pretending.

She greeted Uthman and Hastrup too and watched them as they left. She smiled within herself, Hakeem had turned to Mr Adefemi while she had turned to Miss Aishat, "nice one, this is just the beginning." She grinned as she thought.


Story continues...

. Am finally here bro

Abiolabalogun: . Am finally here bro

Next time don't quote everything please.