The path crazy
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When you stay and think how the rich oppress the poor lately
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Their lands taken
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Itz heart breaking...

And what's the Law saying ?
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They got nothing to say...cos its all mixed up like when you love making
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The government??..we should stop blaming
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But politicians that dnt care...karma is all waiting
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Cos if they think they gon remain high forever....like walls of jericho,they will fall greatly
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Saw a beggar today...he coughed heavy
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Cars passed by..no one cared..my heart raced me
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Tears flowed...he could be your father..yet it seem the world hate him
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Had just 70bucks..I dropped it..he smiled,thanked and waved plenty
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A burden dropped...I prayed gravely
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Why have a house with 20 bedrooms..live alone..and yet many stay wailing
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No shatter and food..not even a pay waiting
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How many cars you gat ?..10 or more...yet you always pass by wen a fellow trekks daily
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Or worst u do..wind down..and then hailings
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but sir...if you tink you way ready
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Wen trumpet blows...and you tink you gat your play steady
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Dnt be suprised you won't make it
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Or start crying when you see others getting there....even the poor ones u neglected or taught they stayed lazy
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Wait...ever crossed your mind what our so called pastors been up praising
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They create societies...for more money..that's how they operating
.
Tithes actually going wer.. ..next we see their pockets weight sink
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Or bad...a foreign account,they stuff plenty
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Even those truly serving God aint really coperating
.
I mean...look at some of ur church members...financially help the poor praying
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oohh..sowiee..u gat 7 private jets..that wil fly you to heaven?..am jst saying
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Its good to live comfortable...but why build a school even some of ur members cnt attend..sir that's tough way in
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Aint judging tho..who am I to judge?..really..m jst saying
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But Let's call a spade a spade....and stop framing
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Ever sat down to think...what's your life rating ?
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Outta 10...you either two,one or half may b
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Think life all about the sex....money even blind dating
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Smoke weed...smoke shisha ..til ya heart failing
.
Rapp and dump one gal today..pick another tomao..nigg is dah a new work...pakaging?
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A mechanic...or bricklayer...yet you tryna be fly claiming
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Work after six..u bath quickly then jump on FB and post how u left your office work early
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Or how ur car got scratched...then u happy as you start seeing "likes" many
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But bro...jst one question...when blocks start getting tyres lately
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Sell tomatoes in the market...yet you say "am working" in an oil factory
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School in one dead poly...but all we knw is "am a graduate" frm harvard..ooh Lord save me !
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How about we stop been fake on social medias...and gladly be...
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Who we really are.....but we hardly will
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Cos Everyone wnts "high shoulder"...they mad with silk
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Wait...I changed ryhmes??...forget that...what matters how my message badly stick
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Remember how a lil boy neva got scared to speak the truth...even wen his dad beat him
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this is the message...am passing please
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What have I forgotten...emm..ohh..you knw mourinho ??..yes they sacking him
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Bye

The cadence of your piece suggests a rap song rather than a poem. Is that what you intended?

The subject-matter is one on we can never be admonished enough. Well done for making an effort. Don't stop. And if you are looking to improve the quality of your output, I would suggest that you begin by paying a little more attention to your spelling and grammar. Spell words in full and punctuate appropriately and with purpose. Most serious people are repulsed by textspeak -- dat iz, writin lk dz iz nt gon do u any gud. Ppl wnt lk to read ur wrk.

I wish you the best.

Okkay bro Note taken Thanks tho

This one of the best poem have read lately. Sincerely it the best am just saying
thumb up bro

Thank yoU bro