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Re: Palingenesis by kingDELE(m): 3:53pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
dis yur story made me abandon my work. nice try.
awaiting d conclusion |
Re: Palingenesis by MrBen10(m): 4:24pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
If i no follow this story ehn, make i naked baff for inside baffroom. Cheiii... used 2hrs reading from 1st page to the last. More Greese to ur biro. |
Re: Palingenesis by Nobody: 4:33pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Nice one mate.am really loving tis story. |
Re: Palingenesis by ideatoprince18(m): 4:51pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
bro dis story is da bomb; 1 Like |
Re: Palingenesis by ebonylady4real(f): 5:00pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
I LOVE THIS STORY I LOVE THE WRITER I LOVE YOU DIE GOOD STORIES ILLUMINATES ME FROM THE INSIDE. MUAHHH! REMINDS ME OF FRANK 3:16 |
Re: Palingenesis by SOLMICHAEL(m): 5:02pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Ah love this story mehn! Good work, keep it up bro!!! |
Re: Palingenesis by Rukkydelta(f): 5:07pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Wow! We made fp SO HAPPY The story is getting more interesting. |
Re: Palingenesis by Deesquare01(m): 5:24pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Nice write up bro... Bt pls cum n continue lah |
Re: Palingenesis by TheBossLadyK(f): 5:39pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Nice one bros |
Re: Palingenesis by Jaytoy(f): 6:07pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Donkross1 u are sure a darling..... Kisses to u.. But that one no talk say make u no update another before night fall if u no wan make i divorce u. Winks |
Re: Palingenesis by hansome01(m): 7:17pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
This is mind blowing... More mb to ur phone donkross1 |
Re: Palingenesis by donkross1(m): 8:05pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
kingDELE: You are welcome sir hansome01: Amen oo bros Jaytoy: You no go wan divorce me na TheBossLadyK: Thanks ma'am Rukkydelta: My sweet sweet Rukky. SOLMICHAEL: Yes boss. ebonylady4real: And I love you too ideatoprince18: boss. adajiboyy: I see you mate. MrBen10: Lool. U for no naked na . jsharp: Dz one like food oo I see y'all. I appreciate the Madt love. Jah bless. |
Re: Palingenesis by Iffffffy(f): 10:20pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
Nice one. #following |
Re: Palingenesis by uniquebandi(f): 10:56pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
nice nice nice. |
Re: Palingenesis by NidaxJ(m): 11:35pm On Feb 02, 2016 |
This story is like a movie...... u no need to imagine am u dey watch am for front...........Oga donkross more grease to ur elbow. |
Re: Palingenesis by Dalyjay(m): 1:34am On Feb 03, 2016 |
Loving dis |
Re: Palingenesis by yinksaid(m): 9:36am On Feb 03, 2016 |
Hey chairmo!!! Pls come and continue this story. An really getting addicted to this super super story |
Re: Palingenesis by Nobody: 9:58am On Feb 03, 2016 |
Donkross do something nah |
Re: Palingenesis by Boldstar(m): 10:13am On Feb 03, 2016 |
Donkross, update nah. We dey wait |
Re: Palingenesis by donkross1(m): 10:55am On Feb 03, 2016 |
[b] When they all realised that Ben didn't run and seem to know the strange man, they started coming out of their hidden places one after another. Most of the girls still remained in the bus, except for Clarieta, she wasn't in the bus and she was yet to come out of the bush. "Wise one please help us, he is dying "Ben said pointing towards where Isaac's lying "Where is that girl" Chief priest "Which girl are you referring to" Ben asked "The girl that was with him when he fainted" He replied The boys went to check for her in the bus but she wasn't there, they checked the bushes around screaming her name but got no response. "She is gone, her mission is accomplished already" the chief priest spoke to no one in particular. "What do you mean by that wise one" Ben inquired "Like I told you and your friend the other day, in due time, you will understand everything. Step aside" he said to Ben Ben obeyed immediately, and then the chief priest brought out some charms from his bag, he started chanting some incantations. Bringing out different charms and touching isaac's forehead with it. They were all looking at him with so much attention, it was just like what they see in the movies but this time it was happening right before their eyes and it's very real. When the chief priest realised that there were still some negative powers holding back Isaac from resuscitating, he instructed two boys to lift his body and carry him farther away from where they were. Ben and Seyyid lifted him and did has the chief priest has instructed. "There is no need to fret, he will be alright, you people should continue fixing whatever is wrong with your bus, you must leave this place as soon as he wakes up" the chief priest said and proceeded to where they took his body to. He continued with the incantations, he put some liquid stuffs in his mouth and something that looks like Kola on his forehead and in his two hands. The process continued for a long time, the people at the bus were done with fixing the tyres and are waiting for the chief priest to be done. Some already gave up hope that Isaac was going to die, some including Ejiro were already crying. Clarieta was still no where to be found. The priest still continued incantating and then stood up suddenly from where he was squatting, he was yet to be on his feet when Isaac sneezed. 'What happened to me' Isaac asked. 'We should be the ones asking that question, you passed out when you went in to the bush with Clarieta' The memories began pumping in, he remembered how he followed her unwillingly, he remembered the sex and that was when he blacked out. 'What did you see when you passed out' the chief priest asked. 'It was like I was taken back to decades ago, in a very primitive village, I saw a girl talking to me, she called me a name I really can't remember the name again, she told me to be strong' he paused abruptly like something just popped into his head. "S'ara giri omo ekun, iwo lo ma bori, (Remain brave strongman, you will conquer) those were her words exactly" he explained. Ben and Seyyid kept staring at him like he was insane but the chief priest understood what was going on. "It has been written already, all these are just the manifestation of the prophecy" the chief priest said "What prophecy" they all chorused together. "In due time you will understand, rise up my son. It's time for you people to leave" he replied them The others that were by the car were now worried about what was going on with Isaac in the bush were they him, one of the lecturers was about to go and check up on what was happening when he saw them coming out from the bush. They all jumped for joy to see Isaac on his feet, the girls rushed to hug him and the boys just shook hands with him. 'You people should start leaving immediately' Chief priest 'Leaving, But we haven't seen Clarieta yet, how can we leave without her' Ejiro 'You have to leave without her' chief priest replied her with a stern look 'I can never leave without my best friend' Ejiro insisted 'Best friend you say' the priest asked almost shouting. 'Yes' she snapped back 'What do you know about her, have you ever seen her family, have you ever been to her father's house, have you even ever seen her talk to any of her family members before' the priest shouted again, he was wearing a very furious look. Ejiro thought about all the question, she has never seen her speak of or to any of her family, she practically had no friend apart from Ejiro herself. Many a times, she had asked her about her family but she just shoved the questions away. "You really don't know her and you call her your best friend, that girl is not who you think she is" the chief priest said with a soft tone. "She has fooled you all but you are not to be blamed because this was how it was supposed to happen, the only thing altered in the prophecy now is that you are supposed to be dead due to what happened to you in the bush" he pointed to Isaac. "You are not dead now because the gods are behind you, you have to be on the look out now because she will come back to finish what she has started, farewell to you all" he left immediately he finished talking in order not to be asked another question. As soon as the chief priest left, they all ran into the bus out of fear of what may happen to them if they remained there all by themselves. All that happened in the space of when their bus had flat tyres till now seemed like a dream to them all, they just had a first class witness of things that will be tagged as superstitions in a movie. Isaac almost died and the priest said it was Clarieta that wanted to kill him, Clarieta herself is no where to be found. Isaac's wondering why Clarieta would even want to kill him, he wondered if they have ever met in the past before meeting in the university. Ben's wondering what all that just happened has to do with him, is there a connection to him in the prophecy. Ejiro's thinking about how she has been fooled by Clarieta, she was so blinded by her love for her that she couldn't see the obvious. Most times she had caught Clarieta talking to herself, sometimes she was absent minded. How could she not have made anything out of all those scenarios. The journey back to Abuja was a very silent one unlike when they were coming to the village full of excitement and anticipation of the adventures that they will experience. It was indeed a very interesting one, one they will never forget in their lives. [/b] 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Palingenesis by Onodray(m): 11:30am On Feb 03, 2016 |
Nice 1 dude, u are so on point, still wit u frm day1 till now bac2bac |
Re: Palingenesis by kingDELE(m): 2:10pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
nice 1. watching |
Re: Palingenesis by aprilwise(m): 2:28pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Such a wonderful masterpiece. |
Re: Palingenesis by SOLMICHAEL(m): 2:36pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Nice nice nice!!! |
Re: Palingenesis by ghide007(m): 2:40pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Let's go 1 Like |
Re: Palingenesis by jonathan111: 3:51pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Nice one brother.. . We in for more updates |
Re: Palingenesis by jonathan111: 3:51pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Nice one brother.. . Waiting for more updates |
Re: Palingenesis by Ayloaded04: 4:00pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
This is the first literary piece I'm reading on NL and I must confess it was awesome. Lecturer even bounce me for class when I couldn't keep my eyes off my phone |
Re: Palingenesis by gbens2000(m): 4:01pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
U are making my office ours less boring thanx. donkross1: |
Re: Palingenesis by Sirakj(m): 4:41pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Well done. More ink to your pen and more data to your phone. |
Re: Palingenesis by mopolord(m): 5:19pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
nice sir donkross but can't wait any longer 4 d nex episode |
Re: Palingenesis by Jaytoy(f): 6:36pm On Feb 03, 2016 |
Donkross swty oya come and update. I wont divorce u again. Atleast u shld be dropping like 3updates a day na... |
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