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My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 7:44pm On Jan 20, 2016
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It had to be my last Vacation in one of these last satisfying and enjoying tryst between I and my Lover. He loved me so but I felt different.


From the very beginning, I knew my end was near. So I patiently prepared for it to come as I swam my last in the Cobalt coloured sea and ran my last race as my hair wafted to and fro, following the motion of the wind.


I also had to eat my last. I was forced to have three plates of delectable sea food, taking in the savouring flavour into my system and drinking the best of my last drop of white Wine.


That night, I had my last bonfire moment with my lover. He sang serenade songs to me and implored that I sang along. I was tentative at first but I simply had to sing my last. He smiled at me and I looked up to the Moon. It was so bright that night and I could tell it was bright all for a reason, all because it was my last take of the Moon.


After our last bonfire moment, we made love like it was truly our last. He pounded into me and I let go, crying like it had to be my last scream. He kissed me swiftly and I returned his kisses in three folds, giving my all to him, because it was my last.


I was walking towards the big Cobalt sea, waiting for the biggest of waves to steal me away but it never really came. That was when the love of my life walked up to me and rescued me. He held my hands, kissed me and refused to let me go. He whispered to my hearing that it had to be the last time I tried to let go. I was nonplussed, I gave in so easily. It was my Last and I chose to never let go.

Re: My Last... (short Story) by DOMAWOLEYE(m): 8:16pm On Jan 20, 2016
Nice intro!Looks like its gonna keep one on edge. Well done,

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Re: My Last... (short Story) by Peaceman4: 12:00am On Jan 21, 2016
Your writing style is beautiful... Grammar structure, ok, too, even clarity....




But how do you protect these works online?

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Re: My Last... (short Story) by KORLAR(m): 7:39am On Jan 21, 2016
Nice story.

Do you mind having your story posted on a website for more coverage and a target audience?

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Re: My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 9:01am On Jan 21, 2016
DOMAWOLEYE:
Nice intro!Looks like its gonna keep one on edge. Well done,
Thanks for reading and commenting. Means a lot.
Re: My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 9:02am On Jan 21, 2016
Peaceman4:
Your writing style is beautiful... Grammar structure, ok, too, even clarity....




But how do you protect these works online?
Thanks for reading and commenting.
I actually don't protect anything. Is that a bad thing or something? I do have a Blog tho.
Re: My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 9:04am On Jan 21, 2016
KORLAR:
Nice story.

Do you mind having your story posted on a website for more coverage and a target audience?
I don't mind at all. In fact, that would be brillant.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Re: My Last... (short Story) by KORLAR(m): 9:10am On Jan 21, 2016
RemenZack:

I don't mind at all. In fact, that would be brillant.
Thanks for reading and commenting.

Thank you for replying.
Please visit and signup on www.coolstory.ng and post your stories and past experiences you feel people can benefit from.
Thank you as you do so.
Please spread the word too.

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Re: My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 9:12am On Jan 21, 2016
KORLAR:


Thank you for replying.
Please visit and signup on www.coolstory.ng and post your stories and past experiences you feel people can benefit from.
Thank you as you do so.
Please spread the word too.
Sure thing. And thanks for sharing.
Re: My Last... (short Story) by Peaceman4: 4:07pm On Jan 21, 2016
RemenZack:

Thanks for reading and commenting.
I actually don't protect anything. Is that a bad thing or something? I do have a Blog tho.
Thought it's safe to do, so you are not copied without permission or acknowledgement.

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Re: My Last... (short Story) by RemenZack(f): 8:55pm On Jan 21, 2016
Peaceman4:

Thought it's safe to do, so you are not copied without permission or acknowledgement.
I wish I knew how. Thanks for sharing this powerful information with me though. Much appreciated.

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